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Ice Pick vs DRAG~ON

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 12:26 PM

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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:27 AM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:31 AM.

diss cat gotta disease from eatin 2 many beans
think he can battle me,but like da CELTICS i got
2many green...

got a 8-2 record go head n make dat 8-3
cuz woop ass so good n water u couldn't even SEA me

man u a weiny like da oscar mayor hot dog car
n gettin drinks from club is da only time u c a good BAR

u weak n it ain't no other way 2 explain diss
n u gone b in outer space after i kick URANUS

n ain't nuttin much 2 say 2 nigga dat got it all
but me...not u if u was KOBE u couldn't ball

n like da laundry detergant dats ALL wiped out diss dirt spot
cuz ya beats wouldn't b BUMPIN if it was infected wit CHICKEN POXS...

Yall gunna feel this 2 styles for ya ass

I leave u flatter the diet Sprite in the height of ur life, this kid couldn't fight if he was Lennox's wife/
U softer then a banana thats way past ripe, duz this kid have arthritis or is it he just cant type??/
Grab a knife and rip through u, leave blood on ur shirt and mistake it for tomatoe soup/
U as fruity as Toucan and as crunchy as Fruit Loops, I'm more dangerous then a room full of Iraqi troops/
Too slick for a mass measurement cuz "ton's" of laughs "pound" ur skull to a 5 : 1 "scale" ratio/
Ur like stale radio, stop with the comments, take a request and go to commercials u crazy hoe...

s
traight to the point
My styles SICK, i cant help that im talkin infectious
Guess im on some next shit, schemin on ya necklace..
Rapz? I bust constant like seiman ya bitch be catchin
A cypher artist, battlin... yea, i can also rip dis section
But you when you spit, i tend to hear much laughs
Stay calm dawg, cuz lyrically ill rip u like rough drafts!!

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Voted For: Ice Pick

im gonna give this ta the first verse had stronger n more original punches,did'nt like the style change 2 much but its ok..2nd verse had played punches i did'nt like that structure was ok but the verse fell off in some parts..
return the vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Drag- Verse Was Ok, Punches Were There, Tho Played Concept, Structure Was Good, And Flow Was Good, N Had Some Wordplay

Ice Pick- Punches Were Good And Not As Played, Structure Was Ok, And Flow Was Good, Also Had Some Metas, I Liked The Lennox Line..

Punches- Ice
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Drag
Metaphors- Ice
Structure- Drag
Originality- Ice
Vocab- Ice

Final Vote- Ice Pick

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077

Voted For: DRAG~ON

Flow: DRAG~ON
Structure: DRAG~ON
Punches: TIE
Metas: DRAG~ON
Vocab: Ice Pick
Wordplay: DRAG~ON
Creativity: Ice Pick
Enjoyment: DRAG~ON

VOTE: DRAG~ON

thanx 4 ya vote n vote
4 sum of my other battles
up top
uppin 4 votes

uppin...will return the favor....drop links.......
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

still uppin 4 votes
n dezz battles need 1
more vote 4 da win
DRAG~ON VS phatinum
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668

r.i.p
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141250

thanx
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Voted For: Ice Pick

Structure - Drag on, only coz Ice Pick had a lot of stretched lines, and he didn't.
Flow - Tie, I didn't see anything wrong with either of there flow, they both flowed well..
Wordplay - From the beginning Ice pick took it with internal rhymes and syllabes, Drag ons rhymes were kinda basic..
Punches - Ice pick had one in about every bar, as Drag ons was kinda weak, plus he lacked, i like the arthritis one, even tho i said it before, but that's why i like it, u think like me..
Personals - none really that stuck out as a hitting personal..
Opener - Ice pick because he came with better word play and a better punch..
Closer - Ice Pick barley, i wasn't feeling the closer but Drag ons wasn't good at all..

So overall ice pick, you get me vote..

please return the favor in my thread will you, thanx, 1.. heres the link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141583

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uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much

yo still uppin 4 votes
n diss battle n others
go out n vote please
honestly
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Voted For: Ice Pick

punches: ice
structure: drag~on
personals: drag~on
multies: ice
metas: ice

vote: ice

uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much

Voted For: Ice Pick

diss cat gotta disease from eatin 2 many beans
think he can battle me,but like da CELTICS i got
2many green...
6/10
got a 8-2 record go head n make dat 8-3
cuz woop ass so good n water u couldn't even SEA me
4/10
man u a weiny like da oscar mayor hot dog car
n gettin drinks from club is da only time u c a good BAR
6/10
u weak n it ain't no other way 2 explain diss
n u gone b in outer space after i kick URANUS
2/10
n ain't nuttin much 2 say 2 nigga dat got it all
but me...not u if u was KOBE u couldn't ball
2/10
n like da laundry detergant dats ALL wiped out diss dirt spot
cuz ya beats wouldn't b BUMPIN if it was infected wit CHICKEN POXS...
6/10

I leave u flatter the diet Sprite in the height of ur life, this kid couldn't fight if he was Lennox's wife/
U softer then a banana thats way past ripe, duz this kid have arthritis or is it he just cant type??/
6/10
Grab a knife and rip through u, leave blood on ur shirt and mistake it for tomatoe soup/
U as fruity as Toucan and as crunchy as Fruit Loops, I'm more dangerous then a room full of Iraqi troops/
7/10
Too slick for a mass measurement cuz "ton's" of laughs "pound" ur skull to a 5 : 1 "scale" ratio/
Ur like stale radio, stop with the comments, take a request and go to commercials u crazy hoe...
6/10
s
traight to the point
My styles SICK, i cant help that im talkin infectious
Guess im on some next shit, schemin on ya necklace..
5/10
Rapz? I bust constant like seiman ya bitch be catchin
A cypher artist, battlin... yea, i can also rip dis section
6/10
But you when you spit, i tend to hear much laughs
Stay calm dawg, cuz lyrically ill rip u like rough drafts!!
6/10

This battle was ok came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and more complexity

Ice u had the overall better verse but ya stucture iz fucked u need 2 work on that

Drag you started off good but u jus fell off after the 1st bar
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