KroNuz vs State CapiTol
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 12:52 PM

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KroNuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 12:25 PM.

If Ya Pic Was Ya Background Only Way I Fear Ya Verse
And when You Need The "Cross" Look In The Mirror First (His Pic)

Ya Verse And Vomit Got Alot In Common They Both Vile
N He gotta Grill Like "Proof" Thats Why He Dont Smile

Im Grim, Ill Take The Win Easily,And You'll Die Just A Fake
And Him Beatin Me Is Like His Chances Of Both Eyes Looken Straight!

This Dudes Not Nicer, In This Division His Rhymes Soft
And Ya "User Title" Like Ya "Vision" One "Eye" Off (HiS User Title And His Eye)

Ill Be Fair N Honest, This Aint A Threat I Bare A Promise
State's Chances Agianst Me Are Like Him In A Staring Contest! (Peep His Pic)lol

If You Didnt Get The Personals N Punches Peep His Picture

Peace

State CapiTol has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 12:43 PM.

Sick Lines will make your eye sight blurry like it was the 4th of July
his boi said he wasn't gay..he replied, "Now That's A Damn Lie"
Claims his blessed lines are a "head" then i'll nail him in his Holy "temple"
Your lines are far from sickness..wack and Kronuz seem to resemble
Why'd u capitalize da "N" in ur name? oh ya dats right, ur worth Nothing
dese bars'll put more black dots in ur structure then Chocolate chip muffins
Kronuz is definitely not "straight", Just like his status...He's "off line"
Lines Blast naepalms-n-Molotolves, have u runnin, steppin on land mines
Kids got lotta balls to challenge me,Leave Kro-Nuz..With No-Nutz
Treat lines like a vaccum..stick it inside you...And Blow-Gutz

damn that was quick i culdnt' even think LOL..i jus started typing sum bullshit...wulda been better if i had more time...


*first line..4th of july..people get drunk..when ur drunk it gets blury*

*7 line...hes not straight..so hes.."OFF LINE""*

i hate explaining..but ya'll might of wanted to know that if u didnt know

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Voted For: KroNuz

haha kronuz that verse was great u had real personals and every single punch in there it hard no fillers flow was good structure dont mean shit to me.nice lines there i dont do battles anymore in text but that is good.

sc some of your things were fake personals like the one bout wat he said wen his friend said he was gay.thats like wen u used that personal on me sayin i tried to join hwcs.but that dont matter here.u had a lot of fillers.no personals.flow was good.structure means nuthing to me.ur punches didnt really hit hard at all weak verse.but u said u couldnt think of anything soo...if u say thats why mus be true less its an excuse.NEVER explain ur lines ever that makes ur verse sound weak and i got those punches u didnt really need to explain them cept on line 7.aight so weak drop there

v/kronuz

it said..he wasnt gay...........and he replied..it didnt say his boi sed he was gay

why doesnt it let me vote on any elevated battles???

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Voted For: State CapiTol

ok im votin for u because u had bettter punches more personals u coiuld work on multis a lil
kronuz ur verse was straight i just wasnt feelin it u was lackin personals work on personals multis and vocab
both verses were ok no hate but thats my vote

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Voted For: KroNuz

you took this kro.. i think that your personals connected and the punchlines were a little better.. also your flowe was nice, but pretty equal.. you got him with the pic. and I noticed that some of his punches didn't make sense, or better yet, didn't connect.. some of the multies at the end helped you out to.. so i vote for you..

return the favor tho, with a drop in my thread, will u? thanx, peace..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139894

alright kronuz u wanna dq my vote....then imma dq that one too cuz its nto explained.........

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Voted For: KroNuz

im gonna break it down...

SC
Sick Lines will make your eye sight blurry like it was the 4th of July
his boi said he wasn't gay..he replied, "Now That's A Damn Lie"
^^ok.punch....6/10
Claims his blessed lines are a "head" then i'll nail him in his Holy "temple"
Your lines are far from sickness..wack and Kronuz seem to resemble
^^good wordplay..i liked this..7/10
Why'd u capitalize da "N" in ur name? oh ya dats right, ur worth Nothing
dese bars'll put more black dots in ur structure then Chocolate chip muffins
^^nice setup,but i was'nt feelin the 2nd line..6/10
Kronuz is definitely not "straight", Just like his status...He's "off line"
Lines Blast naepalms-n-Molotolves, have u runnin, steppin on land mines
^^nice vocab..7/10
Kids got lotta balls to challenge me,Leave Kro-Nuz..With No-Nutz
Treat lines like a vaccum..stick it inside you...And Blow-Gutz
^^ok closer...7/10

state ya verse seemed kinda rushed did'nt have great personals or mad wordplay bout an average drop,still good..33/50

kronuz
If Ya Pic Was Ya Background Only Way I Fear Ya Verse
And when You Need The "Cross" Look In The Mirror First (His Pic)
^^nice personal,good opener..8/10
Ya Verse And Vomit Got Alot In Common They Both Vile
N He gotta Grill Like "Proof" Thats Why He Dont Smile
^^was'nt feelin this..filler..4/10
Im Grim, Ill Take The Win Easily,And You'll Die Just A Fake
And Him Beatin Me Is Like His Chances Of Both Eyes Looken Straight!
^^funny shit..good personal..7/10 pushed rhyme
This Dudes Not Nicer, In This Division His Rhymes Soft
And Ya "User Title" Like Ya "Vision" One "Eye" Off (HiS User Title And His Eye)
^^personal..8/10
Ill Be Fair N Honest, This Aint A Threat I Bare A Promise
State's Chances Agianst Me Are Like Him In A Staring Contest! (Peep His Pic)lol
^^good closer...7/10..pushed rhyme...overall..34/50

overall you had better personals but lost ground on your rhyme scheme,nice personal punches though,nice drop..

overall i had ta break this down n give it 2 kronuz cause of the personals it was close and was a pretty good battle, props ta both ,...please return the favour........
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167
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Voted For: KroNuz

Kron takes this man. Good personals. I'm likin how you rapped on his appearance and shit and kept it real with personals like it was a real battle on the mics. Decree had some tite shit in his too. Like the off line one. But I was feelin Kronuzs verse more. Came hard in every bar. Kronuz gets tha vote.

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Voted For: KroNuz