The Kid P-Dizzle vs Avanish
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 06:08 PM

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Ok check it,
You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

*Oascar is the dude in a garbage can in sesame street
**His crew is called Ill Ten.
***Its his name backwards. Kid is spelled backwards diK and the Pat is the P and dizzle is understandable.
And ron jeremy is the most famous porno producer.

Avanish has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:56 PM.

Ok check it,
You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

*Oascar is the dude in a garbage can in sesame street
**His crew is called Ill Ten.
***Its his name backwards. Kid is spelled backwards diK and the Pat is the P and dizzle is understandable.
And ron jeremy is the most famous porno producer.

Woops posted in the wrong place 1st time.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:01 PM.

Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/
I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/
Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/
You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/
Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/

That's what I got for yo ass.

nice drop...uppin for votes...

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

iite D u took it if u gota explain yo rym afta ur done den u lost in my opinion


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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

iite D u took it if u gota explain yo rym afta ur done den u lost in my opinion

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
ok,no punch really though
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
was'nt feeling this line
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
i get it but its weak..
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
ok punch..about average
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...
weak closer


Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/
alright setup...
I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/
good punch..personal kinda funny
Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/
...ok punch
You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/
...actin...ya decent punch...
Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/
not a bad closer

overall im giving this ta the kid he came with more relevence in the battle with better punches..both had simular structure n vocab...battles are won by punches!!!n none of avanish's connected....

good vote^ up.

Aight, well we're still uppin' for votes, come on folks.

cmon people,dont sleep on these...

up.

uppin

uppin 4 votes...

Uppin' for votes, come on folks, let's close this one already.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

the lines bout the whole age thing were good he had some good shit... avanish had his moments but some of rhymes were poor

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ok congrats on the votes..uppin...

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

dizzle on this one , avanish your rhyme was lame you dont need to explain shit thats honestly one of the reasons dizzle is gonna win this one , , the rhyme structure in dizzles was classic , take out the "/" at the end we know where it ends and it ends with you winning

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

avanish...i wasnt too much feeling yo flows, i felt like u didnt even kno wut u were talkn about...u need to elevate, yo rhymes were very choppy, and made no since...gotta give a honest vote to dizzle, his flow was on point, his structure went with his flow, altho in some places his rhyming was wack, thats where he can elevate...but his punches his harder, and he took this one

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Voted For: Avanish

avanish got my vote he had
better structure came wit more punchlines
he also came wit more personals
fllow goes to the kid but
avanish took this one
it was a close battle

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^wow!!!...lol...go vote on some of my battles below homie

^Stop freeposting.Go post your little advertisements in your own thread bitch.

Voted For: Avanish

Aight avanish wus definetily tighter and i give him da vote but no need for dem stars
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Uh buddy,that votes probably gonna get disqualified.Explain them thorouly.

Voted For: Avanish

Vote-Avanish he had betta punches ...also u was talkin bout urself wen ya was s'posed 2 talk bout ur opponent look no offense but nice battle guyz a lil weak but ya'll did great

*cough* dickride! *cough*. Uppin', don't be shy folks.

im dickridin his shyt wuz betta den ur shyt man i cant wait tyll we battle ma nigga imma rip ur shyt

Uppn', let's close this one down already people.

Voted For: Avanish

For Avanish
Kid P Dizzle good rhymes but Avanish structure was betta and urz avanish was longer and betta metaphors
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Voted For: Avanish

i like it cause you explaind that shit at the end

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Battle got reopened due to problems with votes, so I'm uppin'...

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Dizzle wins this match pretty easily
structure-dizzle
punches-dizzle
multies-dizzle
creativity-dizzle
dizzle's verse just packed a harder punch. Flooze need s work on rhymin his stuff better cuz it didnt flow very well n most of his punches were weak elevate on those so u can win battles
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Voted For: Avanish

pretty decent battle

Flooze- i can see quite a bit of thought went into this verse. Opener was kinda weak but you picked up and hit with some nice punches like the oil line. Flow was ok but it fell off in some place and your structure is alright. The j-kwon line was pretty weak so you need to work on your consistancy but all in all it was a pretty decent verse

P-Dizzle- Your rhyming was kinda basic, the booty call line was wack but the finish was sick. Make all your lines like that then you will deffinatly record more wins, for sure. Flow was good and structure was ok, just lacked consitant punches. Like i sed there were a few weak ones in there. Work at it though, there's deffinatly potential.

So my vote goes to Flooze...

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

~Flooze~

You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…

kinda weak punch......5/10

He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...

Not feelin this at all...2/10

Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**.

What does something being ill have to do with mold? 3/10

I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...

the first line was a good attempt at a personal...and the bottom was ok...5/10

Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

rap isn't a game....get that through your head....4/10


~Dizzle~

Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/

Not a very good opener...your supposed to attack him..not build yourself up..he's only 14...one year age diff..not that big of a deal...if he was like 30..it'd be a good punch...anyways...4/10

I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/

pretty good, best punch i've seen so far 7/10

Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/

Not feelin this....4/10

You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/

pretty good punc...another 7/10

Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/

that was decent too...but the fact that he's 14..and is probably still in grade school..made it not so strong....but 7/10 because the rhyme scheme was good...

over all....I know both of you could of done a lot better...stop sleepin on eachother..thats how battles are lost folks...anyways..


Flooze: 19/50
Kid P-dizzle:29/50

Vote:P dizzle