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L.I. vs calamity
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 800 Check in by: 08-02-04 at 05:01 PM Must drop verse in 420 minutes after check in. |
L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 04:14 PM.
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calamity has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 04:17 PM.
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L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig.. this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig.. how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime.. scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? .. its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil .. your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill.. Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive.. I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive.. |
Just so u get it...calamity is an event resulting in great loss and misfortune
Its sad to stoop down to his level as im easily rattlin this dude... I mean.. I'm losing respect from everyone just for battling you... Blinded when calamity enters cuz they say wackness glows… I guess he was tryin to hint something with the name he chose... Hes the shit man, nah im only kiddin, but no need for hostility... The quote in his sig really demostrates his lyrical abilities...lmao Man i've dissed enough, its time to be nice and give compliments to the star... Called him a piece of shit and you smiled... .........................cause thats double what you are... |
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up bitches....
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uppin on this shit
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uppin
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Voted For: L.I.
Its sad to stoop down to his level as im easily rattlin this dude... I mean.. I'm losing respect from everyone just for battling you... No Strong Punch, Flow Was Good, 2/5 Blinded when calamity enters cuz they say wackness glows… I guess he was tryin to hint something with the name he chose... Good Personal 3/5 Hes the shit man, nah im only kiddin, but no need for hostility... The quote in his sig really demostrates his lyrical abilities...lmao Cant See Sigg But Ok 3/5 Man i've dissed enough, its time to be nice and give compliments to the star... Called him a piece of shit and you smiled... .........................cause thats double what you are... Good Finisher 4/5 L.i - 12/20 L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig.. this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig.. Ok Personal 2/5 how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime.. scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? .. Hmmm Did he Bit or Something?....Anyway 2/5 its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil .. your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill.. 3/5 Decent Punch Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive.. I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive.. Ok Finisher 2/5 Calamity- 9/20 Final Vote- Li Peep Battle With State Capitol |
lol... ^ he lost a kareoke match.. he was spitting eminems song .. with is someone elses lines... i think that went over your head :p...
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Oh Well Than I'd Of Made That A Personal And Upped To 3, But Still Would Have Been 11-12... Nice Battle Tho...:thumbup:
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and lmao at L.I.. taking down that pic of that girls ass to fuck up my verse..... thats pretty gay.. but ok lol.. uppin for more verses...
link woulkd havbe been http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...eelz/hotass.gif but obviously he deleted it -_-.. should have saved :thumbup: |
^ meh give me the pic and ill out it back up...i took it down before u dropped cuz i was cleanin out my photobucket....and it was LLoyd Banks song that i lost in a karaoke match :)....up
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uppin this battle
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upping.. w o r d.....
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vote fuckers...
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
I was gonna vote but true gangsters dont check the post count before they break the whole battle down bar-by-bar. I guess I'm just too thuggish...
bleh...didnt want to waste it heres my two cents Quote:
[quote=Calamity] L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig.. this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig.. ->>ehh...thrown twig? how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime.. scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? .. ->>hah nice its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil .. your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill.. ->>decent... Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive.. I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive.. ->>so-so closer ->>calamity I've seen some nice shit from you...this battle didnt really do it for me. Your punches didnt really connect except the one in the second bar. It was decent but not enough for the win here. \/spread the honest vote love\/ |
Voted For: calamity
damm shit really gettin slept on..on dis shit....aneway umm cal takes dis easy with da personals plus da links...li u had madd personals 2 but ya first bar barley ryhmed u forced dat shit maddhard...i cant see nobody sigs cuzz of dis new battle system shit...both of u didn't have no punchlines,nothin real creative dis was just a personal battle aint nothin wrong with it but if ur not blind u'll see dat cal took dis shit... hit up dem joints in my sig...n im not a hater li so dont give me dat hate vote shit |
lmao...ery battle im in u vote against me kid...its obvious u dont no how to vote....but really i dont care...up
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shut da fukk up...u voted in a few of my battles 2 so whut is u sayin n i dont know how da vote?? cuzz i aint vote 4 u...dogg i battle in da streets u just battle on here u cant tell me shit... u uppin ya shit amdd time's sayin vote fuker's so i fukkin voted
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i said i dont care...u obviously dont understand punches...its ok...ur just not elevated enough...i forgive you!
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Voted For: L.I.
L.I. i can see you dont get Rydes,cause you flaunted what you dont get in ya sig.. this nigga said he was Leaving But he didnt get far like a thrown twig.. decent how is this dude callin' me dumb, when he can't even spell Crime.. scratch that.. how do you lose with someone elses rhymes?? .. not sure what the 2nd meant like if he bit or something its really humorous, when you losin' shit to a Dollar Bil .. your skill level is more like a c -... i mean minus skill.. 2nd is tight Notice everylines shorter,and gets less attractive.. I'd prolly like you better if u HAD stayed Unactive.. decent didnt hit hard though Its sad to stoop down to his level as im easily rattlin this dude... I mean.. I'm losing respect from everyone just for battling you... nice but not personal Blinded when calamity enters cuz they say wackness glows… I guess he was tryin to hint something with the name he chose... 1st part is decent Hes the shit man, nah im only kiddin, but no need for hostility... The quote in his sig really demostrates his lyrical abilities...lmao LMAO this was a tight line Man i've dissed enough, its time to be nice and give compliments to the star... Called him a piece of shit and you smiled... .........................cause thats double what you are... blah didnt hit hard I gotta go with L.I for more wittier punches |
This was feedback posted for calamity
ok calamity that was not your best verse at all but it had some nice punchlines bad stucture but a nice flow when i caught it good personals and punches puled you along5/10
li good flow real good flow and structure helped good wordplay but no real punches that hit or good disses kinda like some mase shit all flow nocontent no hate but i expected more from a nigga with as many wins as you4/10 |
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huh?? put a "E" at da end of ur name cuzz ur a lie man...i called u out 4 a punchline battle u said no cuzz nun of ur friends couldn't vote |
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lmao....efl sucks :(................................................ .........
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Voted For: calamity
In my opinion, Calamity takes this one. All of his lines were hard personals/punches. Good shit. Even structure too. LIs verse was kinda basic, and I wasnt really feelin the punches. Calamity wins this with an all around more complex verse. Vote-Calamity Vote on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143537 |
This was feedback posted for calamity
calamity: decent flow nice hard hitting personals no real punches thou, creativeness decent all around nice verse, 8.0
L.I: decent flow, a few decent diss, a personal that was ok no real punches here either but not a bad verse... 7.0 flow: tie punches: none creativeness: even personals: Calamity diss:calamity which gives him my vote: ya both tryed for personals N diss N lacked punches which made the read kinda boring in a way but still decent battle |
Voted For: calamity
nice battle to both emcee's...but my vote goes to Calamity..tha twig shit..crack'd a grin on my face..haha..but anyway..he gets my vote cause..he had a slight~harder~punches than L.I. and a pretty good flow to it... |
Voted For: L.I.
i think l.i. took this one with harder punches...i liked cal. punches too. but they were choppy and sounded incomplete....li had nice personals...but you stuck to one personal throughout the whole flow...cal...spread his shit around, and i liked that...but it sounded like he was just tryna get a point out...close battle, but li took it drop votes to my battles in my sig |
lol wackness all round...take this battle to the "front lines!"
and yall are called vets!? pc |
dunt hate... :)
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this was a pretty good battle...too bad i cant vote...calamity wins it tho
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Voted For: L.I.
Aiight I read this battle a while ago, and its still going so I thought I might as well drop a vote in.. Alrite, Calamity youve elevated a lot since I first saw you battle.. And I think you both matched up pretty well skill wise, however the one problem I did have with your verse is that I felt that you relied on links more than punches to back them up.. The thing with having links in your verse is that they should be secondary to the punch your writing.. El Eye came pretty good.. The punches were constant, I do think lines saying "Ive dissed enough" or "I just killed you" are played as fuck, but that closer was fuken hot so it kinda made me look past it.. Overall, Calamity had better personals, but L.I had more effective punchlines.. And thats where my votes going.. Vote- L.I Good battle though.. |
This was feedback posted for calamity
Its inactive buddy... And you definetly could have come with hotter rhymes... The personals were actually the only good thing i saw with this entire verse... Needs more punches and better wordplay... Just a bunch of linked personals... 6/10
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Voted For: L.I.
Daaaaamn Tight Tight Battle Hard To Call It... I Think L.I Had Better Vocab n Added Humour, An Thats Always Good.. Structre Could Have Been Better, But As Is Mine, It Was Fucked Up, So I Had No Trouble Readin It Nice Drop From U Both Keep Elevatin! ReTuRn ThE FaVoR! P E A C E |
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