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SONIC 08-02-04 04:27 PM

SONIC vs MR.WASHINGTON
 
Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 04:57 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

System 08-02-04 04:32 PM

Mr.Washington has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 04:32 PM.

System 08-02-04 04:33 PM

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 04:33 PM.

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 05:02 PM

All ur good lines.... they must stay hid in yo brain....
shit... his kid got his rap name from a video game!
i've seen all ur lines..............and ur disses are played to
ur so weak, all the punches in the world couldnt save you!
u've got an attitude, so u know Wash gotta erase the mean
ur brains like D. Matthews cuz theres so much space between
I'm not even keepin count of how many lines I type.....
n my fists wont stop hittin ya dome untill ya mind is right!
In line n tight, you'll follow my every single order see....
n ur verses would look better, if they werent dis-orderly!
cords n me, have sumthin in common we both strangle ya
ur like the banner... but missin stars cuz no1 spangled ya
hangin ya, no need for rope or noose my hands'll do....
shit..... all i need is a dreamcast paddle to handle you

SONIC 08-02-04 05:07 PM

You must be Silly going against the kid with the Ill Speech
Coz U'r like Herion, I'll relentlessly abuse you, even if it Kills Me
U spit Toxic waist, yo rhymes are Killin Me, what a Misery
We'll call you Mr. George Washington, coz after this U'r History
My Mystic as an MC will Leave You Empty if U Temp Me
I'mma Cut ya Tounge off next time u try to Spit Against Me
Yo Rhymes Are Dry, Yo Kind Should Die, Y do U Try To Fly?
Even If U were Thomas Eddison U couldn't Find Ya "Shine"
U'r Flow is Slow, I Roll Past you So Fast
You're like a kid out in the Summer, I can tell u have No Class
You Broke bitch, I'm you're teacher, why are you Testin This?
U might be "Washington" but u don't got no Dead Presidents
You ain't Goty It all, Apply the Damn Logic
In every battle i'll win, I'm SONIC, You're Dr. Robotnik
He just Got Dissed, I'm much better Boys n Girls
I'm like an Asteriod, I came to Earth to Destroy his World
And leave an Impact, yo Been Whack, just Admit That
U could put a written verse in ya mouth n still can't Spit Raps
So give up you can't win, ....just LET IT GO, FACE IT
Coz if I miss, my words "come back" to hit u like ECHOLOCATION

Myster.E 08-02-04 05:21 PM

Voted For: SONIC

Sweet battle all I can say is both of you had punches connectin eachother's jaws but Sonic had more wit a longer verse the equivalent of a longer arm in a boxin match well done both of ya this is tha second nicest battle I seen in 2 days return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 05:24 PM

^ lol, his shit was decent good verse.... mines was wittier tho :thumbup:
we'll see how the rest of the votes go..... u shouldnt have dropped so many more lines than me thats an unfair advantage.

SONIC 08-02-04 05:26 PM

I Said 10-12 Lines.. Plus, I Think That Mines Were Wittier, You Have To Understand Em..

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 05:46 PM

^ trust me i did.... and u sed 20 ... not 12... but still....
no more talkin/swaying... only upps...

SONIC 08-02-04 06:27 PM

Uppin

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 07:07 PM

upppn as well.....

Hitchcock 08-02-04 07:50 PM

Voted For: SONIC

this battle goes to sonic str8 up Washington had some ight lines but he need to up his game
what won this for Sonic were his personals they were on point frreal n his punches were ight too
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136650
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344

SONIC 08-02-04 09:43 PM

ummhmm... uppin

DV8 08-02-04 10:09 PM

This was feedback posted for SONIC
 
Im Not Voting .............good Battle Sonic..................

SONIC 08-02-04 11:47 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by DV8
Im Not Voting .............good Battle Sonic..................


WHY AREN'T YOU VOTING?

Mr.Washington 08-03-04 01:52 AM

^ u got lucky.
upn
peace

SONIC 08-03-04 07:32 PM

uppin

A.M.O.K 08-03-04 09:44 PM

Voted For: SONIC

SONIC
You must be Silly going against the kid with the Ill Speech
Coz U'r like Herion, I'll relentlessly abuse you, even if it Kills Me
Not too bad
U spit Toxic waist, yo rhymes are Killin Me, what a Misery
We'll call you Mr. George Washington, coz after this U'r History
Not too bad again, could of flipped it better
My Mystic as an MC will Leave You Empty if U Temp Me
I'mma Cut ya Tounge off next time u try to Spit Against Me
That's alright
Yo Rhymes Are Dry, Yo Kind Should Die, Y do U Try To Fly?
Even If U were Thomas Eddison U couldn't Find Ya "Shine"
uGh, don't get it, who's Eddison?
U'r Flow is Slow, I Roll Past you So Fast
You're like a kid out in the Summer, I can tell u have No Class
Lol, pwetty good
You Broke bitch, I'm you're teacher, why are you Testin This?
U might be "Washington" but u don't got no Dead Presidents
iffy at best, could of flipped better
You ain't Goty It all, Apply the Damn Logic
In every battle i'll win, I'm SONIC, You're Dr. Robotnik
Lol, it's ok
He just Got Dissed, I'm much better Boys n Girls
I'm like an Asteriod, I came to Earth to Destroy his World
Not too bad
And leave an Impact, yo Been Whack, just Admit That
U could put a written verse in ya mouth n still can't Spit Raps
Nah playish
So give up you can't win, ....just LET IT GO, FACE IT
Coz if I miss, my words "come back" to hit u like ECHOLOCATION
Yeah it's alright

Consistent verse, few 'oh's & ah's', not many though, flow was on point, personals could of hit harder, but good verse nontheless

Mr.Washington
All ur good lines.... they must stay hid in yo brain....
shit... his kid got his rap name from a video game!
lol, could of had more impact
i've seen all ur lines..............and ur disses are played to
ur so weak, all the punches in the world couldnt save you!
Not too bad
u've got an attitude, so u know Wash gotta erase the mean
ur brains like D. Matthews cuz theres so much space between
huh?D.Matthews?Whos that?
I'm not even keepin count of how many lines I type.....
n my fists wont stop hittin ya dome untill ya mind is right!
Yeah it's ok, could of had more impact
In line n tight, you'll follow my every single order see....
n ur verses would look better, if they werent dis-orderly!
Lol, not too bad
cords n me, have sumthin in common we both strangle ya
ur like the banner... but missin stars cuz no1 spangled ya
Nah, could of flipped it better
hangin ya, no need for rope or noose my hands'll do....
shit..... all i need is a dreamcast paddle to handle you
LOL whoa...

Good verse, too bad you didn't match his lines.Flow was good, personals were aight, closure was hot.Not many wordplays & meta's, alot of straight disses.Good read though

V/SONIC;more consistent & punches, due to the obvious fact he had more lines.Washington had the best bar in the match(closure), but one bar don't win you battles.If he had matched SONIC's lines.... this would of been different.

SONIC 08-03-04 10:46 PM

uppin

DV8 08-04-04 12:31 AM

you should close this cause wash is a biter...thats why i dint vote cause i seen it before...

Detrimental 08-04-04 12:55 AM

Voted For: SONIC

oooo shit i liked that battle....the first battle i actually enjoyed readin

Sonic took this one over punches hittin harder and your multies and wordplay were better i liked your George Washington line...that was original...good structure...i liked your whole verse...good shit

Mr. Washington....you were pretty match to him...good flow and structure...your punches hit....but his hit harder...nice wordplay too....keep spitin them flamez both of you

SONIC 08-04-04 12:27 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr.Washington
^ u got lucky.
upn
peace


Please, you're about to be another Jacker...

SONIC 08-04-04 03:58 PM

uppin

SONIC 08-04-04 07:24 PM

uppin

Desipher 08-04-04 07:48 PM

Voted For: SONIC

im votin 4 sonic...he had better personals..they just hit harder...his flow wuz better 2


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