fernoe vs Ice Pick
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 09:06 PM

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6 - unlimited lines wtf???

read the post in bitch slapped that says 10 lines

the one you replied to

i ain't gonna battle some 60 line long or something stupid

make it 15 lines max

Dude thats fine

Those are the house rules jack ass

They are preset

10 lines max

fernoe has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:36 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 08:38 PM.

View" target="_blank">http://community.rapverse.com/membe...erid=34884]View his profile to understand my punches

Ice Prick, you think you are clever…when you act tough-and-fail
Shoot the nail gun in his thick skull…he’s still not hard-as-nails

I’ll smash your skull open, I ‘m not joking, ya have ta run-quick
When you gonorrhea–lies, even if you have STD’s you can’t cum-sick?
(gonorrhea-lies/gonna realize)(gonorrhea is an STD)

Watch me bring carnage, He is harmless, and seems retarded
Ice will never be ‘Pick’ of the Litter, even though he is garbage

And Twenty Five posts a day? You need help very-quick
Sig says ‘This is my house’ because this site is where-he-lives!

Your life revolves around RV; the site’s your god damn life
I heard life is a bitch….. But how can a bitch be this site??

Ya TAG is FernHo. I hope ya lyrics is spit with 1/5 itz diligence
Even if you're percieved to be rippin shit, each line you spit, I'm simply killin it
I'm kinda like a rhyme sniper. I spit darts and I'm on point when I aim sharp flowz.
The only way for you to win iz if this were a game and you cheated with GameShark codes
You fag cats. No more than gay rhymers from garyraps.
You can't lawfully marry sacks. So the reps from your orgy site can stay off eachother's hairy laps.
In order to beat this track, your whole staff needs to carry bats
I'm a class act. Nothing you can bring, say, or do has the knack to stop that
Son, no matter how long you battle me, you'll never amass the capacity to damage me
You'd probably crash and burn more rapidly than a TWA flight ending tragically

Not a Newb

can tell by ya verse
I bet you worked on this all fucking day waiting for me to come back online

Cause you was duckin me earlier when i put you on the spot.

so if you can drop shit like this , why did you duck me earlier and say you wasnt on here when you never left the site

I hate PRE WRITERS

^ yup, i pre wrote those personals, several days before i even know you will be the only person to reply to my thread in bitch slapped. i'm psychic like that.

BTW if you check my posts,you'll see i wasn't working on this all day. check the time you replied to my thread in bitch slapped. i didn't spend all day working on it. That's impossible. and i did ask if you still wanted to battle in bitch slapped, when i got back to the computer. why would i ask to battle again if i was ducking twice??

anyway, if i ducked why didn't you even set up the battle? then YOU went offline afterwards.were you ducking?. You had the same amount of time to write as i did.

why are you battling newbs anyway? your battle record is 11-2.

DUde you I tried battling you and you sent me like 4 pm's askin me if im still down to battle

I have all the Pm'S you sent me and there is alot and there all within minutes of eachother!!!!!!

You had that battle verse waiting since like 3 in the after noon and we battled at 9
so you had six long hours to drop a verse pal, and no you didnt just whip that up in 10 minutes either, So save ya bullshit speeches

I also dont understand why a vet would switch his name either, especially to FERNHO

^yes i PMed you at 3pm. what does that prove? you still didn't set up the battle. so where were you? and you said i was the one ducking? Please think about what you're saying.

what does 'dude you i tried battling you' mean? what's 'you i'? i don't understand that.

i PM'ed to battle you because i missed the 30 minute deadline before the battle was even set up. I told you i wasn't at the computer. And nobody agreed to a time limit. you just said 30 minutes. i never said 30 minutes was okay.

you said i had my verse ready at 3pm. Well, you replied to my callout at 2:05pm. Yup, 2:05 to 3:00 is six hours, just like what your'e also saying.

and what do you mean you don't understand why i why would i switch my name? wtf are you on about switch my name? This is the ONLY name i have on this site, ice prick.

i wasn't at the computer when you replied to bitch slapped. In says what forums/pages you are looking at in your profile. If you checked what i was looking at, you'd know i was looking at the same page for over 40 minutes (because i wasn't at the computer, or i was offline), and i didn't even look at the thread in bitch slapped during that time, so how could i know you wanted to battle me? If my verse was ready at 3pm, did i write it in 10 minutes or something?

and you STILL haven't explained why you would battle someone if it's their first battle on this site.

Voted For: Ice Pick

4th honest pick im givin to ice, so now he ows me big, listen up, the ending for both of you was just straight sick. But i liked ice's ending better, so ima give that to him, Fernoe had the punches but then he lost me, pick kept it solid so he gets an A+ on the punches. Fernoe, you owned him on wordplay and personnels, but pick had a better rhyme sceme and better flow, fernoe had the structure, but that dosn't contribute enough, fernoe you had the opener, but it wasnt enough, pick won more factors, so he gets my vote

This was feedback posted for fernoe
 

fer good wordplay and flow but you need to work a little more on punchlines still a 5/10 verse.ice bad structure good vocab good punches and disses you had a pretty strong verse overall 7/10
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Voted For: fernoe

Nice battle, both flow and vocab was kool. Was more feelin fernoe's punches and personals but this was close battle...Structure of fernoe was slightly better to

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This was feedback posted for fernoe
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

Ice Pick changed his sig.

If anyone is wondering, his sig DID say 'This is my house' so that line i used makes perfect sense

But it seems he can't accept me having personals

or maybe i'm wrong, but he's definately changed it

Voted For: Ice Pick

open:neither
close:ice
personals:fernoe
metas:ice
punches:fernoe
multis:ice by far

vote: ice pick

c'mon dog explain that shit.
uppin 4 votes
lets go.
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This was feedback posted for fernoe
 

O Shit Tha Was Tight Nigga. I Bet U None Of These Niggaz Know Wat That Mean

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Voted For: Ice Pick

FERN: first multi was off...you just LOST MAD points for using the MOST PLAYED wordplay line EVER...NO "cum" LINES EVER..no matter how ill you think it is...NEVER...3rd bar was nice with a good flow, lmao @ the 4th bar, good meta and way to use his shit against him but you used it twice in two consecutive bars

ICE: damn....that gmeshark line was NICE, shit was mad original and everything up to that part flowed on point...closer was nice and a hard hitting punch..sumthin vern didnt do

VOTE = ICE PICK

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Voted For: fernoe

damn...fernoe got u on this one...harder punches...his shit stood out more than urs...flow was there throughout the whole verse...

v/fernoe

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