Leroy Lyric vs The Kid P-Dizzle
 

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No Recycling
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Check in by: 08-02-04 at 09:44 PM

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Leroy Lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:14 PM.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:30 PM.

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They call me the Kid, yet my rhymes far from adolescent/
Don't be jealous of my youth 'cuz you got molested/
You tested and you failed, your chest'll get impaled/
'Cuz I'm sharp, fuck bitches while you sexin' wit' a male/
Even if hell is where you sailed you're not hot as me/
Like uncontrolled intersections, you're not stoppin' me/
But probally, if you wanted all of me, I'll stretch you out/
Like your ass in your prison cell sodomy/
It's gotta be me, I'll strip you of your title like a nudist colony/
'Cuz your raps are pussy, you dick, you can't body me/
If you callin' me, out, I got one word/
Of warning, fuck wit' Dizzle you'll get peeled like a sunburn!/

There's my shit - 12 bars, short n' sweet. What you got for me?

murked? yeah, right. Uppin' for votes people, don't be shy.

Voted For: Leroy Lyric

structure:KID
punches: actually none were good but KID"s was better
flow: KID
wordplay: Leroy
metas: Leroy
multis: KID
vote/KID

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yo i voted wrong.... get da mods 2 delete my vote cuz kid took dis

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

yo dis shit was close,

structure- Kid
Vocab-Kid
Punches-tie
Flow -Lyric

This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
 

ok kid good struture and flow but you need to work on punches and disses.leroy good punches and your vocab and wordplay killed him and your ending was hot.leroy wins hands down with a better verse

Voted For: Leroy Lyric

P-Dizzle

They call me the Kid, yet my rhymes far from adolescent
Don't be jealous of my youth 'cuz you got molested
~No punches...self glorification 5/10
You tested and you failed, your chest'll get impaled
'Cuz I'm sharp, fuck bitches while you sexin' wit' a male
~Gay concept def played 5/10
Even if hell is where you sailed you're not hot as me
Like uncontrolled intersections, you're not stoppin' me
~Self glorification, no punch 5/10
But probally, if you wanted all of me, I'll stretch you out
Like your ass in your prison cell sodomy
~Gay concept again..played 5/10
It's gotta be me, I'll strip you of your title like a nudist colony
'Cuz your raps are pussy, you dick, you can't body me
~Your only attempted punch 6/10
If you callin' me, out, I got one word
Of warning, fuck wit' Dizzle you'll get peeled like a sunburn!
~weak...no punch 5/10

Leroy

Burn and Bury your corpse, Accepting this, you asking to get yo ass kicked...’
Kid ‘u get smoked’ so bad I got crack heads getting ‘stoned’ from yo ashes!!
~Decent punch, okay wordplay 7/10
Leave your bones in baskets, Bringing ‘Blades’ to this battle like Wesley.
you ‘suck’ impulsively like ‘thirsty kids’ on a mommas nipple when she ‘Breast Feeds’
~Good punch n nice wordplay 7/10
I bump you with bangers, got you lost in my text’ like you got Humped By Strangers!!
Beat you until ‘Jesus’ questioning your issue, like you were throwing Punches at Mangers!!
~Decent, not as good as your first two bars 6.5/10
I’ FLIP THOUGHTS, bang brains until you leak portions and I’m eligible to GRIP QUARTS...
And you stay in ‘Deep Shit’ like You stay up peoples asses with Shovels & PITCH FORKS
~Okay multis...coulda been a better punch 7/10
I Bring The Pain, So Kid I’m Bound to ‘MISTAKE YOU BOY’...Put a SHAKE IN YOUR VOICE...
Only time you “Flames & ‘Flare(Flair) is when I label your text ‘NATURE BOY!!’
~Okay wordplay with a decent punch 7.5/10
I’ll make you ‘HISTORY’, people see our battle and claim you ‘WORST THEN WRITTEN!!
Even at BIRTH YOU BITCHING!, Cause you stay ‘cut short’ like MIDGETS going through CIRCUMCISION!!
~haha Nice wordplay and a good punch 8/10

The Kid P-Dizzle= 31/60
Leroy Lyric= 43/60

Vote:Leroy Lyric
Reason:Coming with harder punches, better wordplay, and good multis

Some of you playas need to learn how to vote...need to learn what Multis are..because Kid had none lol, thinkin a d/r? ;)

aint even tryin to sway, but you did merk him...he'll either get a few pity votes, or a few d/r tho, thats how it always goes

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

You win Kid harder punches and don't put '/' at the end of your lines it's newbish. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
Leroy stopshowboatin and pull your structure together and don't be so over-confident save that till you win work on your punches both of you. retrun da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

Why the fuck you hatin', Jus? It's their opinion if they vote for me. If you wanna take it to multis we can go there. Uppin' for more votes.

Matter fact, I'll go for a rematch anytime. I admit dude's got some flow, but you know, this is just healthy competition, no hate.

Still uppin' paople, come on, don't sleep on this.

Uppin' for votes...let's get on and close this already.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

i dunno it was close but dizzle and his rhymes man this guys like feedin off lyrics and it makes sense too so...

Thanks bro, still uppin'for votes, come on folks.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

The kid took this with better punchlines cuz.. Leroy had some coo vocab, but the kid had better wordplay.. his punches also hit hard with plays off his name and direct disses. kid barley got the upperhand so i vote for you kid..

keep it gangsta and return the favor in this thread cuz.. thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Voted For: Leroy Lyric

leroy had more punches he came wit more personals
and he had a much better structure the kid p dizzle had
a better flow but overall the win has got
to go to leroy he got him wit the punchlines
and personals close battle tho

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

i'm going to go with the kid on this one , a lil to much effort on leroy's part , the rhyme structure is just raw on the kids side , and i'm sorry but when you use breast feeds and thirst kids in a rhyme you automatically lose ha good job dizzle