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Yo this is a collab commprised of Triple_N, Kingz, and calamity

Chorus: Triple_N
1st verse: Triple_N
2nd verse: Kingz
3rd verse: Calamity

Here's link
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm

hmm the hook... was lyricly nice. But you're voice, should not be moaned like that lmao.

Triple N: Nice verse. nothing really to complain about, except im guessing you were the hook.
Kingz: Off flow a little bit, and lyrics weren't too good.
Calamity: I liked your verse the best, sounded very much like a mainstream club verse...

Very nice collab. Kingz just elevate with the lyrics bro.

^^^^^^This is two collabs you came into and hated on me, u just mad cuz u not talented enuff to do it yourself.

this was decent isht right here.... i was feelin it, stay up.

Nice drop......I liked it :thumbup:

Triple_N - I don't know what it is about your voice, but it just doesn't seem to click. I dunno.....Lyrics were tight but I have to agree with LoT/Crossword, I really don't think that you should have used that kind of voice for the chorus

Kingz - Flow was pretty choppy at first. You had OK lyrics, but nothing to special. Are you from England? Cause I really have a hard time making out the accent, I just don't hear it. Flow picked up a little better in the middle and was more enjoyable after the first 15 - 20 secs....

Calamity - I honestly thought you had the best verse of all three. I liked the lyrics and you seemed to stay on flow the whole way through. The only problem I heard with your verse was I think your vocals needed to be turned up a bit.....just a little. Everyone else was easy to hear over the beat, but for you I had to turn my volume up a little.....

Overall............:thumbup::thumbup: (two thumbs up)

Triple, Im just saying your voice is not right for the hooks man... I said your verse was good... god damn, it wont be perfect... ever.

I like this song, all were real good. I agree with crossword, the hook sounded weird, but the lyrics were sick.

1st Verse - Was tight, lines were good, flow was good, quality, was all sick

same for 2nd and 3rd verse everything was tight, have nothing bad to say on this that hasnt been mentiond yet. good work.

thanks... triplen did all the cool edit work... i found the beat.. and kingz did what he do best :).. good looks for the feed back ya'll... drop links to your songs and stuff, and i'll hit em back

i think triple n's chorus was tight because its original

yo that shit was trash im looking for niggas to put on my label but these audios are disgusting me on this shit step it up.where is your flow???your shit is madd boring it sounds like some sporty thieves shit

lmao. kid, shut the hell up.

thanx lot lol... caliph..... get the fuck outa here

http://community.rapverse.com/attac...ntid=9374&stc=1

nuff said ?

song is straight- again the biggest fuck up the chorus. what were yall thinking

lmao... ^ chorus wasent that bad.. -_-..

Uppin for feedback

alright the chorus needed jesus in its life and heres what i think i bout the verses:

first verse: lyrics were str8 but the way u said shit waz killin me
second verse:thiz verse needs more than jesus cuz it waz horrible on every tip cept the lyrics were just normal bad
third verse:i love the voice u got and the flow waz sick and the lyrics waz realt tight and did sound mainstream

but last of all the doubles yall waz doin waz WAY too loud and yall could work on that next time

That shit was tight!! Ya sick man!! Keep it up!!

hot ass song s yall got on da page good shit .....