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Heavyweight Championship- [Champion]Apotheosis(4-0) vs. [Challenger]JPoll (3-0-1)
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Girlfriend's mothers b day 2moro.....so I may not be around.....
erm... I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes.. So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time. I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place.. But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist. Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens.. Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans. No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout.. But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth. Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose.. Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood, Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood. Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme, & it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team. Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset, Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net. Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions, U got wak wrote all over u……………………………………….. …………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description. I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver, Coz u got a face a mother wud love……………………………….. …………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier. |
nice verse goodluck apo...
I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer... The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers... I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written... Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden... Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range... He has cred that's strange, ....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change... Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys... He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys.. The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence... Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence.. That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction... He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction... This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me... He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie.. Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star... Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar... Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless... He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace... Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given... You got less chance of changing, .................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits... |
Apotheosis
I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes.. So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time. ok.. I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place.. But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist. lol...aight Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens.. Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans. LOOOL...nice No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout.. But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth. nice bar Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose.. Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios. lool good personal not feelin the punch http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood, Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood. hmm..nah Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme, & it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team. lool good Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset, Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net. cool...aight Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions, U got wak wrote all over u……………………………………….. …………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description. alright... I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver, Coz u got a face a mother wud love……………………………….. …………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier. Lmao...lol nice closer nice witty verse some nice punches good drop had me laughing at times too 8.5/10 JPoll I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer... The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers... ok... I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written... Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden... hmm...1st line could of been better Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range... He has cred that's strange, ....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change... LOOL...good Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys... He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys.. did you mean rape or rap? hmm ok bar The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence... Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence.. this is ok... That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction... He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction... if this was a play on his old name..good This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me... He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie.. ok.. Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star... Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar... lool...nice Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless... He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace... hmmm..not feelin it bro Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given... You got less chance of changing, .................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits... did he not get signed? dont know I think he did...nice bar good verse you had alot of personals butsome didnt hit hard ..some of your bars were good others were ok...good battle props to both no hate 8.2/10 v/apo |
I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes..
So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time. -almost I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place.. But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist. -almost Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens.. Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans. -nah No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout.. But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth. -meh Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose.. Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios. -lol.. nice http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood, Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood. -nah Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme, & it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team. -nah Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset, Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net. -almost Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions, U got wak wrote all over u……………………………………….. …………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description. -nah I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver, Coz u got a face a mother wud love……………………………….. …………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier -lol.. nice -2 nices, 3 almost, 5 nah, 1 meh I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer... The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers... -almost I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written... Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden... -nah Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range... He has cred that's strange, ....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change... -nah Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys... He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys.. -nah The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence... Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence.. -nah That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction... He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction... -nah This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me... He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie.. -nah Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star... Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar... -nah Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless... He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace... -nah Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given... You got less chance of changing, .................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits... -meh 1 almost, 1 meh, 8 nah. v) Apo didn't really like JP's veres at all Apo came below average but still pulled it off with 2 punches that i liked weak championship |
p.s. please check out the links...you won't get alotta of the punches if you don't look...
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JPOLL your verse was nice..links were nessecery your structure was nice your ender was nice..your operner was fair..all around necely done verse good wordplay..good punches and nice personals... overalll 8.4/10 apotheosis you structure was a tie with jpoll..u had weaker punches and weaker personals your flow was nice..but i didnt feel you matched up in personals opener was ok..not great... ender was..fair..all around fair verse 8.0/10 jpoll came harder..as a result he won.. my vote J |
1-1 uppin this bitch............................................. ..............
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^vote...2-1 niggaz.
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Apotheosis
I’ll rip u a new hole..when I take control w/ rhymes.. So u can shit ur pants..& ride Spul’s dick at the same time. 7/10...nice opener I aint got beef w/ fags..judgin aint my place.. But be honest..u don’t want the title..u want my waist. 5/10..dont like it... Weak rhymes cant compete..they are old like senior citizens.. Coz ur tryin 2 go for gold..but come up bronze like Domicans. 7/10...lmao... No mean bone in ur body..so I’ll easily win this bout.. But ill change that^..when I put my fist thru ur mouth. 7.5/10...hard Don’t be scared by the way..i threaten 2 break ya nose.. Coz after we can shake on it..like ur poor skilled audios. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jpollmusic.htm 8/10...clowned I’ma take a page out ya book..then wipe my ass w/ it dood, Coz u only be swinging hard..when ur bitchin w/ your mood. 7/10...nice Leave u w/ less internals..than your wack rhyme scheme, & it must suck how ur like this…a weak link to ur team. 6/10...ehh Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset, Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net. 6/10...not really dissin him, cuz its not an insult to come after "wit" Under dogs ARE dicks..so lets abide by the predictions, U got wak wrote all over u……………………………………….. …………..…& ya rhymes practically explain ur description. 6.5/10...wasnt really feelin this I can tell ur prolly ugly..spotty & bucked tooth like a beaver, Coz u got a face a mother wud love……………………………….. …………………………………………†¦to make adoption feel easier 7/10....strong closer overall - 6.7...had some good punches, and witty lines...good drop. J-Poll I have visions of wackness, and it's apo he's like a cancer... The only real personals he writes are the ads that he answers... 7/10...fresh start I'll admit he writes with wit, well not the 10th time it's written... Wrote it 3 years ago, thinks we'll never know but it ain't hidden... 6/10...no punch.. Apo's verses replicate his hair, just too lazy to run at my range... He has cred that's strange, ....when it took him three days to realize the site had a name change... 6.5/10...good, but u worded it bad.... Cries about losing his girls, just noise and lies i know his wack ploys... He found rb by accident looking up his real passion of rapping lil boys.. 5/10...i dont see anything about little boys.... The kids lies are leakin, he's never speaking again with his pretence... Cause apo got caught with Triple N and The Q in a gay sex sequence.. 7/10...lol That ain't a gay joke, yup note that i'm just giving yall non fiction... He's even horny for e-ass, that gives a whole new meaning for his diction... 6.5/10...ok.. This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me... He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie.. 7/10...nice... Apotheosis thinks he's over par, that he'll go far and he's a chat rap star... Doesn't prove nothing, except ya need another person to have a decent bar... 6/10..i dont see anything about him havin to use another persons bars Apo tends to rhyme bout violence, while I'm leaving apos fat body headless... He's steady gettin breathless?as I assault and verbally take his necklace... 6/10...wut does a necklace have to do wit anything? Apo even comes clean at times, that he's sick of being wack but it's given... You got less chance of changing, .................................then polifick actually being signed to no limits... 7/10...lol... overall - 6.4...u had some weak punches, and u had way too many links in that bitch... v/apo...... |
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Apothesis- Verse Was Good, Some Played Concepts Like Senior Citizen Line, But None The Less Punches Connected And Metaphors Were Decent...
Jpoll- Verse Was Good, Personals Were Good And Punches Connected, Flow Was On Point.. Both- Both Had Decent Verses, Structure Dont Matter In This Battle, Aswell As Multis, Niether Had Multis And Structure Doesnt Matter Regardless, Both Flowed About The Same.... Punches- Apothesis Personals- Jpoll Flow- Tie Metaphors- Apothesis Wordplay- Niether Multis- Niether Structure- Doesnt Matter Either Way Tie Originality- Jpoll... Final Vote- Apothesis And If I Voted Wrong Pm Me And Ill Re-Do... Peace |
damn apo i thought you was nice but you suck!!!!!no good punches weak ass disses and flow is not enough.j-poll you bitchass canadaian(i hate that bitch)you murdered him with harder punches good ass disses 'he with tripple and q'lol his passion is little boys lol you killed him with those disses and way harder punches.
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Good God, you niggas gotta stop it with the excessive linking. That was like 3 months ago on the old RB. Anyways, this was a good matchup and a very even battle, but I gotta say Apotheosis took this slightly for witier punches. JPoll did very good as well, except for the herbish link personals.
Vote: Apotheosis Callin' it as I see it, fellas. Godo battle. Please hit up my Heavyweight Contendorship match with VanGo. If I win, I'll see one of ya'll next. |
5-2...is that it?
good battle JPoll. & side note...eliminate people like caliph...they do not understand battling. |
Thank you, did u see what he said in my battle? LL
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APOTHEOSIS
Diss to JPOLL Nice drop, Nice lines. Your punches were very good and so are your personals, you lines were tite and some were funny, some were real killer punches. Your personals were nice loved this one: Unlike lookin at ur face..this wont be an upset, Coz J/P comes after wit..like sayin Jus Playin on the net. Your starting was funny and your ending was ok Structure good too. Flow was very good. Some lines I thought weren’t good, your verse was also good and complex, You had a good chance with your personals and punches verse was very dope Personals: 8.2/10 Punches:8.2 /10 Structure: 8.7/10 Flow: 8.5/10 Opener: 8.0/10 Closer: 7.9/10 OVerall: 8.25 Jpolls Damn so many fucking links but all the links made your battle very good. You personals were tite and you punches were fucking cool. Structure was good as usual and so was your flow. Favorite line: This is assault and battery, Like an allergy you didn't wanna battle me... He tried to sign out, like I was fatning and he couldn't stand another calorie.. That was dope your verse was dope your opening was good and the closing was ok Personals: 8.3/10 Punches:8.0 /10 Structure: 7.9/10 Flow: 7.8/10 Opener: 8.3/10 Closer: 8.3/10 OVerall: 8.10 All Your Verse Were Fucking Dope. I Had To Give This To Apotheosis For a Better Verse Overall And He Won By A Hair. Vote: Apotheosis |
good battle apo...battle closed great job...5-2///
Apo regains the championship... |
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