ruff_tuff_thug vs Da Jokah
 

Battle Rules:

5-30 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 04:30 AM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Da Jokah has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 04:01 AM.

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 04:02 AM.

yo i wanna be caught red handed killin yo bitch ass
i'll die first before i ever let a mutha fuckin snitch pass
fuck wit me and not stopping you'll get a muthafuckin smash
fuck you da jokah you little biatch or else ha ha
you aint gon be asleep because of that fuckin la la
nigga if this is a risk you gonna take then
i'll make no mistake to let every one know that your a fake
first if you fuck wit me you gon go through the worst
you know you could no noyt could would end up in a hearse
nigga its your turn and lets see your stupid ass verse.

uppin for some honest votes
peace
r duble tt...

WTF yo drop yo shit nigga lets go

yo nigga go head and drop yo shit.
peace.
r duble tt.

this mans fruity cuz this bitch slam-tha-cock//
got ya bois on yo dick sayin Damn-yur-hot//
yo that niggas wrong cuz its like u a freezah//
cold as hell..shrinkage in ya dick u couldnt pleez ha//
nigga take a breath..count to 3..now tell me who tha best//
u close to death..u from La huh..well ummm Fuck Tha West//
yo Kan-The-West-Spit?? tell me cuz all westsiders drop//
dam-yo-best-shit?? thats nasty nigga..ahh just [b]STOP//
DROP ya head..well ma Gun goes KABOOM//
Pop tha fed..no luda shit...silence wen i enter tha room//
hair like luda-cris..na nigga ma hair stay fadded//
umm who-this-bitch..ha nigga my flow stays creative//
my flow is crazy..no wunda they got me in a straight jacket//
punches maybe...i aint to old but my drops r staight classick//
u love dat girl well dat girl loves..she aint want a lil bitch//
she hugs me ..iam a thug b..and she suck on ma dick a lil bit//
so back da fuck off me nigga or ill take this sadam style//
holy shit i gotta stop cuz my verse.....is so-dam wild//

e.z nigga

wtf that was gay but i'll expect some votes so vote now
peace

sorry for tha bold my computer is fucked up yo...
but anyways uppin this...

yeah uppin fo mine too ppl vote honestly.
peace..

Voted For: Da Jokah

Jokah

this mans fruity cuz this bitch slam-tha-cock
got ya bois on yo dick sayin Damn-yur-hot
~Nice punch very true 7.5/10
yo that niggas wrong cuz its like u a freezah
cold as hell..shrinkage in ya dick u couldnt pleez ha
~Could of been better, but decent 6/10
nigga take a breath..count to 3..now tell me who tha best
u close to death..u from La huh..well ummm Fuck Tha West
~Attempted personal, coulda been better 6.5/10
yo Kan-The-West-Spit?? tell me cuz all westsiders drop
dam-yo-best-shit?? thats nasty nigga..ahh just STOP
~Okay multi...but a weak punch 6.5/10
DROP ya head..well ma Gun goes KABOOM
Pop tha fed..no luda shit...silence wen i enter tha room
~Played, weak, attempted a multi 6/10
hair like luda-cris..na nigga ma hair stay fadded
umm who-this-bitch..ha nigga my flow stays creative
~self glorification, a big no-no 5/10
my flow is crazy..no wunda they got me in a straight jacket
punches maybe...i aint to old but my drops r staight classick
~More self glorification...you could of used those lines to drop punches... 5/10
u love dat girl well dat girl loves..she aint want a lil bitch
she hugs me ..iam a thug b..and she suck on ma dick a lil bit
~You aren't a thug..filler... 5/10
so back da fuck off me nigga or ill take this sadam style
holy shit i gotta stop cuz my verse.....is so-dam wild
~Very weak last 8 lines and crap closer...more self glorification 5/10

ruff_tuff_thug

yo i wanna be caught red handed killin yo bitch ass
i'll die first before i ever let a mutha fuckin snitch pass
fuck wit me and not stopping you'll get a muthafuckin smash
~No punch...played...weak opener 5/10
fuck you da jokah you little biatch or else ha ha
you aint gon be asleep because of that fuckin la la
~ha ha, la la....very wack...get creative dude 4/10
nigga if this is a risk you gonna take then
i'll make no mistake to let every one know that your a fake
~Attempted punch 6.5/10
first if you fuck wit me you gon go through the worst
you know you could no not could would end up in a hearse
nigga its your turn and lets see your stupid ass verse.
~Weak closer...no punch...self glorification on the first line 5/10

Da Jokah=72.5/90
ruff_tuff_thug=25.5/40

Vote=Da Jokah
reason:Jokah came with harder punches a better flow n structure....ruff_tuff_thug, your verse would of been much better if it had more punches and shit that wasnt played...it had a nice structure n flow...but no punches

Voted For: Da Jokah

yo Jokah u got it ,

structure-Jokah
Punches-Jokah
vocab-Jokah
flow-Jokah

dis mutha fuckin battle was onesided as a mutha fucka

Emergin, you need to explain your vote more chump....

c'mon ppl explain your votes and vote.
peace.....

I explained my votes ruff, no hatin on you...but Emergin didnt explain his vote worth shit

uppin this shit lets goo e.z

Voted For: Da Jokah

i give it to jokah cuz he came out harder and ruff tuff thug its hard to understand what yer sayin if you kno what im sayin can you dig it?

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iight iight 3-0 my favor..uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

ruff-tuff-thug sucks sucks sucks.not one line was worth tha time it took to read it.jokah aint far behind tha verse was weak but he didnt need much.good flow jokah but ya both need to step it up.

hope ya vote on my other battles ill thro some links up.

ps. takin all challengers

Voted For: Da Jokah

Da Jokah had dis shit hands down. Flow was good an punches hit harda.. Structure was bout tha sam but since Jokah had more he took dat shit. Wordplay...Jokah. Opener and closer ...Jokah. Ruff i see you son keep elevatin. Overall feelin both but Jokah had dat shit....

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