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MONSOON vs Ice Pick
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-03-04 at 01:52 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
MONSOON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 11:55 AM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 11:57 AM.
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Yea I'll inflict "pa1n" on your punitive stature
I'm "writing ya ass off" like an "anal graffer" Total laughter, like "burn out boxers" I aint "feelin' ya punches" Methemphetamine adrenaline rushes crushes Mon and puts him in crutches Fucc it, SOON can't " touch this" like Jenna Jameson's tits/ Have you "come-buts"(combust) infront of me like propane tanks lit "This 0ne" must've won some dumb intricate contest Cuz I'm "rippin" you like packaging to the recipient context Should've came protected when you came and faced I P Cuz raw sex breaks through lyrical condoms that taste cherry Arithmetic fow is equivalent to zero or four minus four That means MONS 4 plus my punches equals maximum carnage on the floor Like "hangin ya merchandise one display" for me to "hold up" the "store" Fucc Rhyming, your shit's "sub-par" like the LPGA golf tour Eyes acute from swelling, verbal punches take a swipe at ya belly Boring as hell, Mon's more "talk" then an episode of "Regis and Kelly" Like THC product, I fucc wit ya brains chemistry You couldn't "put lines through me" with reflective symmetry My symmetrical tendencies deplete emcee's to fractional trigonometry And your idea of "wordplay" is "fondling dictionaries" of english termonoligy You bout as accurate as the WRITTEN prophecies of blind men Blind men spittin, your lines are understood as much as Swahili being taught to PMS'ing women.... |
aight fuk it ,
elevated bars callapse usin this cat as a crash dummy, backfired amuntion caused urine in this cats huggeys, and quick,someone call the peramedics for ( dis ) fuk puttin my name on your ass, ill brand my name to your lips so now when you speak,at least youll talk somewhat correct im like A-O-L everybar I spit I dun already connect and if you..............aww shit thats 6 verses but anyways I connect like a-o-l ay--awww---well |
Fixed my typo's and some of the spelling
Yea I'll inflict "pa1n" on your punitive stature I'm "writing ya ass off" like an "anal graffer" Total laughter, like "burn out boxers" I aint "feelin' ya punches" Methemphetamine adrenaline rushes crushes Mon and puts him in crutches Fucc it, SOON can't " touch this" like Jenna Jameson's tits/ Have you "come-buts"(combust) infront of me like propane tanks lit "This 0ne" must've won some dumb intricate contest Cuz I'm "rippin" you like packaging to the recipient context Should've came protected when you came and faced I P Cuz raw sex breaks through lyrical condoms that taste cherry ya Arithmetic flow is equivalent to zero or four minus four That means MONS 4 plus my punches equals maximum carnage on the floor Like "hangin ya merchandise one display" for me to "hold up" the "store" Fucc Rhyming, your shit's "sub-par" like the LPGA golf tour Eyes acute from swelling, verbal punches take a swipe at ya belly Boring as hell, Mon's more "talk" then an episode of "Regis and Kelly" Like THC product, I fucc wit ya brains chemistry You couldn't "put lines through me" with reflective symmetry My symmetrical tendencies deplete emcee's to fractional trigonometry And your idea of "wordplay" is "fondling dictionaries" of english termonoligy You bout as accurate as the WRITTEN prophecies of blind men Blind men spittin, your lines are understood as much as Swahili being taught to PMS'ing women.... |
you said six verses now im a halve to assinate your bull shitt
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No it is 6 to unlimted Bars
No limit on what you can drop You drop more then i drop more either way ya gettin cooked |
your ryhymes are weak and brittle like yo grammammas wedding pantyholes
even your daddy knows, you wear them to stalk bitches like your logos you aint a rap genius, more like a sampled penus, reavlin little particles, of what a gay dudes mission is terrorist lyrical winds vacade your premises, look me up in genuses, youll see what pain is, ill match a real icepick to whatever your real name is tryin to hustle a hustla, ill cumbust right in front of ya stampede of metaphorical punches like an american soldier gunnin ya you aint hot bitch,nah bitch your structure is garbage you the type to go rock climbin and forget about your hornest ill put that finger where your heart is, i Know monsoon make you nautious cheating asses dont get respected like bush runnin for office get off this !!!!!!!! |
uppin votes mann
im tired of dis shitt same to you!!! |
and plus yo shitt aint make sense,
I didnt even read this cats verse, fell asleep through it |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ok monsoon dis line was sorta gay: "fuk puttin my name on your ass, ill brand my name to your lips" - duz dat mean u kissed dude or sumtin? no hate jus wonderin cuz it could be da kiss of def like jadakiss but i dunno... well neway... punches:Ice meta: Ice flow: monsoon struc: soon wordplay: Ice overall vote/Ice |
that means ill tatoo my name on his ass, or brand my name on his lips, which also mean tatoo
1st and 2nd vs needs feed back also |
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Monsoon Kiss My Ass With Your Speeches |
shut yo boney ass up
so I could up and keep uppin uppin votes yall, tryin to close this |
Voted For: Ice Pick
yo dawg i look at puches to let u no, Structure-Ice Punches - Ice Wordplay- Tie Vocab- Ice yo man Ice took it cus of punches and his flo was more undasatndable, yo shit was short but no punches, v/Ice Pick |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick takes this, not cos he had more lines... but cos he had better punches, n some aight wordplay... good flow too... multis rock tha casbar.... multis clap any shit... L-style.. ya know? monsoon... your kind of a herb... wack punches... only decent one was the AOL line, n its played as shit... plus "aww shit thats 6 verses" makes you look retarded... one.. return the favor on "vs Eye" link in my sig... cmon ... dont be sleepin... i took the time to vote on this one so gimme a favor back.. ya know? |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Ice had all round better conditions.... accept his structure ... ice i dont really like your structure |
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you luky nobody read the second verse,ts all good keep uppin yall
lets close this shit ill defineltly vote for your battles close this shit |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
yo monsoon i liked ya 3 bars but you have to know that u needed more lines to come at pic, he aint no newbie Pick i see u still verbally killing em ya wordplay and vocab is on point punches connected, cool metas only thing not much personals but thats nothing when u win all other categorys mon ya shit was aiight just needed more lyrics if it says 6 to unlimited lines....... definitely do more than six good battle |
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