Mc:Xplicit vs RobKilla
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r
no feeding
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aight

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Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:10 PM

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RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 05:24 PM.

Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 05:40 PM.

supposed to be an MC, dont know why they call you that/
ima show these cats your scene, you dont even battle rap//
I'll drown ya verses cold, dont even think of swimmin back to/
With oceans of lines, MY NAME flows better than your raps do//
what happened wit DustyBlunt, you chickened out, ya bitchin'/
well, if you cant take the smoke, get tha hell outta my kitchen//
you gotta be kiddin, i see ya lines before you even startin'/
you best take your inner child’s raps staight back to kindergarten//
I'm unstoppable, and your dirty laundry has been raided/
i know you didnt bring your "All"... cause on this mic you been faded//
you're overrated, you'll neva see a moderator status/
your lines got more faulty cracks than alligator apparatus//
I'm clearly tha maddest, and your positively sane/
fuck who's tha baddest, between us, I got tha illest game//
I'm totally vain, wanna be bolder than me, no way/
only way this devil's colder, is when hell freezes over...i say//
tha hottest rhymes... that you ever bite in your career/
im endin' it here, tha only MC that writes it from tha rear//
increasin your fear, rappin from tha end to tha beginnin’/
dont believe me, you can chek tha times from when i sent it//
im tha lyrical God, and you definately sinnin'/
after tha audience applauds, to tha death you be repentin'//

you just got lyrically raped/
but no proof, cuz on tha news, your face was covered with tha black tape//
you hittin with rap sickness? but yo Band cannot see me/
you explicit, but my shyt's too hot for t.v.//
watch ya mouth, before i show up at your house/
cover you in Blood, and then Crip-walk on ya couch//
might wanna tone challenges down, fo' yo ass get hawked/
tuff guy talk, have yo ass line in chalk//
so for you to win, i would have to have definately cheated...<for mad nonsense>
i would tell you, but the rest of this was expletive deleted
<for Xplicit Kontent>

"who want what, who pumped up to get rolled up, i spit venom in every direction... soak some up"
-
Xzibit (8 Mile)

And the point of that was........

what was tha point of what, that Xzibit line? dont ask me, you just worry about gettin your verse in on time...
can you see my verse?

no i cant see your verse

did u post it in the right place

xplicit poppin bars like i pop rounds in singles
but "once i pop the fun dont stop" like "pringles"
come hard with straight "punches" cause dawg this a true "duel"
but this cat is a "herb" thats why his chick is a "garden tool"
so let me shut u up like a "bitch" (female dog) tie your mouth down with a "muzzle"
"rip you apart" and let kids put u "together" like a "jig saw puzzle"
aid i got my plan together cause dawg i aint no half minder
in your head like a "nissan" and my lyrical knife is the "pathfinder" (a type of nissan suv)
you cant lower the "crime rate" cause im a "crime dealer"
"took" the battle from this cat which means i "robbed killah"
~one xplicit

nice dawg u kinda hot man
~one xplicit

Voted For: RobKilla

Id have to go with robkilla. Neither had many punches but rob's flowed better then x's. i thought your closing was the best part. Also, x, you shouldnt have to explain all those lines to us. I say if people cant get it by reading it then dont bother using it.

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Voted For: RobKilla

killa got this ,ya came with alot more content dawg,i was'nt feeling your whole verse n saw a couple punches but you need ta get some decent wordplay in your battle.n try ta fix some of your structure a couple lines also dint ryme but overall you had punches n the better verse..
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Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

open..mc
finisher..mc
flow..mc
vocab..mc
creativity..mc
structure..mc
overall...mc

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how about this, if an emcee has to put quotes around every one of his punchlines, then they arent that good, you should be able to understand what they sayin without hints to tha fact that they bein clever.
im not bitchin about tha battle, Xplicit is a raw rapper, but am i the only one who feels this vote wasnt fair? Da Jokah seemed to only vote cuz he wanteda vote in return... all he wrote was opener... MC etc...
thats not an explanation. did he really beat me at every aspect of battling?
whateva, maybe thats just his opinion... not hatin on you jokah, just wonderin.

Voted For: RobKilla

liked robs word play u both got good punches but rob had more xplicit could have done better this could have been a great battle.

ps. i promised n i voted. i hope both of u vote honestly on my battles now n then.

i got battles to finish but other than that im takin challengers

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Voted For: RobKilla

i have 2 give this 2 robkilla...u woulda won mcxplicit if u made it longer an more personals...thats y he won cuz he made it longer an it gave him uh chance 2 put more stuff 2 gether an a chance 4 a better flow

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Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

RobKilla-Dont use the /'s makes you look like a newb..well even more of a newb...i believe the quote is "If you cant take the heat stay out of the kitchen" herb....elevate and workin on gettin better punches

Xplicit-Weak opener...self glorifyin..started comin with some good wordplay after that...no really good punches, an ok close which played at his name nicely..could of been better with good punches...but it got the job done

Thank you for that strobe, i got kinda sick of seein newbs uppin for votes in bitch slapped

yo mayn, thas garbage. i wasnt asking for votes. i told everybody who i dropped a link with, to VOTE FAIRLY. i always encourage that cuz i dont want people to win by askin for votes. thas a bitch move. if you meant that i shouldnt have posted my thread in bitch slapped, then my bad. i forgot about that rule. but did you have to take away my votes? i had for in both battles. well, if i still win, that means im truly a better mc...
i'd like to battle you strobe... wait, dont penalize me again for posting in tha wrong forum (im not markin you, i am so serious)

Yeah...you upped for votes in bitch slapped, its against the rules...so your votes got removed...RobKilla...some advice...shut that retarded mouth of yours...you cant even beat Explicit those votes you got were d/r anyways and he put them in quotation marks so they'd stand out and people would notice...most elevated Emcees do that..oh wait im sorry i forgot you were a noob...and you challengin strobe? HAHAHA stfu seriously kid

Voted For: RobKilla

RobKilla got it cus he wrote alot more it flowed better, and it was just alot better in general, explicit did good but im sure he can do alot better then what he posted

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Andy, i'd suggest expanding your explanation, cuz if not your note will just be removed ;)

Voted For: RobKilla

x... ya first line was ya best and everything after that went limp compared to Rob's joint. That nissan line was the worst. Work on connecting ya punches to something that actually is supposed to be connected... most made no sense and seemed extremely filler.

Rob was on point with his lines and they connected well.... punches were a lot harder and he included a lot of personals... like the dustyblunted line and not being able to take the smoke... also liked the dirty laundry/ ALL line... good wordplay... rhymes were thought out better... he had a deadline and used it to his advantage...

v/robkilla

Voted For: RobKilla

you got this vote from me cuz the other guy only had flow and he had a grade 5 spit haha but you got it for flow rhymes and punchlines haha peace

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yo nice lookin out justify and strobe most of his votes are not explained good anyway so they must be d/r votes

what does d/r stand for? i didnt ask anybody to vote for me if that's what it means... dont treat me so bogus cuz im a newbie, sorry about that shyt from bitch slapped again. but whateva. you had some votes that werent really explained that well too. good battle X, you got my respect as an MC. i like yo punch lines, that pringle shit was creative...

you know what Justify, you gay as hell, you fuckin suck... come battle me and you'll see why those votes werent d/r you damn bitch

Ok..... what happened to my votes again??? this is real bullshit, im obviously tha better MC here, so why yall keep takin my votes away?

Voted For: RobKilla

Yo Rob had dis. MC:you shoulda put more linez if you wanted da win but Rob had it. Punches was better cuz they hit harda. Flow was better an the structure was good. Both started out hard too. Word Play goes too rob cuz he had more complex shit so he got ma vote.

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Voted For: RobKilla

i like both but ima go with mc he hit harder with short n simple lines but ur not bad either rob anywayz

v/mc:xplicit

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damn it mad a mistake forgot to vote for mc mc go report this and say i made a mistake and theyll fix it bro

uppin we need to get this one over man its been going to long

you MC... you rite... we both MAAAAD uppin for votes to finish this
one of us will return tha favor

uppin for votes yall... i will return tha favor....
and p.s. i neva got to tell you, Xplicit... you got some ill lines

Voted For: Mc:Xplicit

yo i give it up for xplicit because he made is good while short
i aint hate'n but i just got to give up for him na mean but rob yo u good but i just gotta hand it to him
vote=mc:xplicit

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Voted For: RobKilla

I think what really gave the edge to Robkilla was that he had more content to judge. Which made it easier to say that he had more punches than MC:Xplicit did. The flow was pretty much on point for both of then, if I chose though I would lean a little more towards robkilla on that though. The opener by MC was a lil played ive heard the pringles line a few times before, but its pretty tight. Some nice metas from both of you hard to call it pretty even there. Not too many multies though that woulda been a nice added bonus. I think Robkilla takes this one slightly because of a better flow and more content, it just allowed him to have more punches to hit with.

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