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Typical 08-03-04 05:52 PM

Demon Pyrokronix vs Typical
 
Battle Rules:

6 -20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO SUCKING

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-05-04 at 03:12 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

System 08-03-04 05:53 PM

Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-04 05:53 PM.

Typical 08-03-04 08:53 PM

my flow is growth honest, foes overdose on it/
foam wit gross vomit,
fuck punches i hit like i chose to post comits/

behold da gold artist, whos soul proposed carnage/
at ur frozen cold carkiss,
i spit pyro to smoke kronix/

u linger while u frontin,
if u drop bars to push/
i drop bombs like bush,
wit my finger on tha button/

causing unknown destruction, ozone curruption/
this is un consturctive, u get deconstructed/

i ryhme rugged u couldnt map it, i collapse ur raps in/
u relaxin as if, i cant make u kiss my tims like they had tits/

no discussion demon get beatin like precussion so sorry its over cousin/

System 08-04-04 05:17 AM

Demon Pyrokronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 05:17 AM.

Demon Pyrokronix 08-04-04 05:51 AM

Actually I ain't spitting till you spit. My last battlewas a no show and I ain't risking it with this one. And fuck that time thing. I'm going to visit my relatives today and won't be back till Sunday so Ii'll pm you then so we can rearange the battle.

I decline te battle.

Demon Pyrokronix 08-04-04 06:50 AM

Alas nvm. I'll spit anyway but you better show.

Yo... yo... yo...

In my callout I called for newbs, not a 21 year old herb,
You're so inadept at vocab, you have to use nigga as a verb,
And nigga go against me, I'll fuckin rub you off the map,
The only thing that's "nasty" is your shitty attempts at rap,
DP's from hell, here to incinerate and impail ya,
I guess it's "typical" for a Bronx bitch to be a failure,
The only way you'll win is if your fuckin eyes play tricks,
But I doubt even that'll save you when you're as fake as the matrix,
I'm destined to kill you, destined to burn and shine,
I mean I'm half spiting and I'm already on my 10th line.

Demon Pyrokronix 08-04-04 06:52 AM

For all you know nothing faggots.

In his biography it says he's 21.

He used nigga an awful lot gainst Phatanum

He has the Matrix in his avatar.

Incinerate is to burn.

PM me if you don't understad anything else.

I can't stand herb votes.

Demon Pyrokronix 08-04-04 06:54 AM

Ah yes, in his profile his biography is "I'm nasty"................................................

Typical 08-04-04 12:19 PM

no niaggas no curses no problem.

Typical 08-04-04 01:34 PM

upin 4 votes

Demon Pyrokronix 08-09-04 01:15 PM

Why the fuck did you win our other battle 5-0 and it got closed and my verse got deleted? What the fuck is goin on here Typ? Also my asking of why my other battles where closed without reason got deletd as well. Some motherfucker must have something against me on this site. Also people I don't know are constantly caling me out. What the hell is going on?

Typical 08-09-04 07:11 PM

i dont know thas crazy!
i think i got 1 other win like that
u should givea complaint
i will forfiet those wins if they ask me
i dont wanna win like that
but u know i beat chu right?lolololoaaaaaaaahahahahahakkkkkikkkk

N.Tavarez 08-09-04 07:19 PM

Voted For: Typical

Typ definitely different than im used to reading
not worse just...... different
i can tell your practicing ya wordplay and struc
but dont let ya strenghs, which is ya vocab and metas,
suffer for it, liked the verse
especially 'spit pyro to smoke kronik thats hot
demon good rhyme as well just some probs wit it
1st pick up ya vocab, good struc good flow
punches could be more potent and limit filler lines like ya ending, it kills ya overall verse
i gotta give this to typ even thogh he didnt blatantly killem like he usually does
no hate definitely the truth
B$ i hate on someone i just wont vote

Ice Pick 08-09-04 07:22 PM

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

This battle was pretty descent

Typical one ok line
i ryhme rugged u couldnt map it, i collapse ur raps in/
u relaxin as if, i cant make u kiss my tims like they had tits

Demon
In my callout I called for newbs, not a 21 year old herb,
You're so inadept at vocab, you have to use nigga as a verb,
fucking dope and funny as fuck

basically took this batle with bettr wordplay structre, flow and Good personal too
vote demon

Hit these up and close em for me

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139928

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137412

Typical 08-09-04 08:09 PM

Ice Piks A Dick!
Hater!
Tallin Nigas To Vote Demon Like U Run Somthin!
I Neva Lie On A Vote Even On My Boys.
Thas Y U Dont Like Me Right?did I Vote Against U Or Somthin?
Stay Outta My Shit N Ill Stay Out Of Urs.

4 Err1 Else
Im Not Sayin If U Vote Against Me Ur Wrong. Ur All Intitled To An Opinion.
I Just Dont Trust Ice Picks Fukin Votes!

Demon Pyrokronix 08-10-04 11:40 AM

Whatever, it's 1-1 now. I wasn't really expecting to get many votes considering I was fairly tired when I wrote it.

Typical 08-11-04 12:06 PM

upin 4 votes

Typical 08-12-04 04:52 PM

upin 4 votes
lets go i return votes

Abraxas 08-12-04 05:23 PM

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

wack battle again both need to improve
vote Dp for not being that wack and having more decency
had better punches and personals
typical yours was truley shit you need to elevate

Abraxas 08-12-04 05:24 PM

please return the favor by voting in this battle
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Ill-Grammatix 08-12-04 05:47 PM

Voted For: Typical

i thought it was kinda kool how typ switched up his flows in the verse... didn't like the last two bars but the stuff before that was on point... it just seemd like you ran outta shyt to say... structure was good until the end. nice multi's, no word playcorruption line was strange....

dp:

DP's from hell, here to incinerate and impail ya,
I guess it's "typical" for a Bronx bitch to be a failure,

definitely ya best line.... unfortunately for you it was ya only hot line... nothing else grabbed my attention... just when i thought you were gonna make a run for it ya twisted an ankle and started limping... stay in the race homie... one line don't cut it

Typical 08-13-04 12:43 PM

upin 4 votes lets go

Demon Pyrokronix 08-13-04 01:36 PM

Whateva, I can do better than that verse man.

Uppin for votes.

Typical 08-14-04 04:07 PM

upin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i return all honest votes.thas my word!

Percept Shun 08-14-04 05:10 PM

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

i dont see why typical has already won 9 battles
Demon took this battle easy with greater puncches and personals but props to both of you

Percept Shun 08-14-04 05:11 PM

DELETE MY VOTE^^
i'm sorry but i never knew my cousin posted here

JUST Being honest

Demon Pyrokronix 08-15-04 12:02 PM

Well you already voed and in the rules it says the explanation "It was my dog, bro or moronic relative won't be taken into account".

But W/E.

Uppin 2 more to K.O.

Demon Pyrokronix 08-16-04 07:19 AM

Man for fucks sake vote, uppin..........................................

Desipher 08-16-04 10:32 AM

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

i give it 2 demon..he had better personals an better flow

Typical 08-16-04 01:34 PM

lets get some votes n please analyze tha rhymes!

M&rk 08-17-04 01:49 AM

Voted For: Demon Pyrokronix

..::ayo, complete honest vote, das all i do, so........heres how i saw it....... for typical
foam wit gross vomit,
fuck punches i hit like i chose to post comits/
^^^that one movie wit that white dude from malaboo rhymes these same things, not cool stay away from that.
.....u aint have any punches or personals, jus sayin what u can do and what u will do and what u can make him do... thats not a punch.
say some shit like....
fuck you demon, i wouldn't ever let u call yourself a phsyco
cuz its not crazy,but funny not spittin fire when your name is pyro
^^^personal, and leads into the punch....... battles u need stucture and punches... multi's are next to nothing.
______
demon....

And nigga go against me, I'll fuckin rub you off the map,
The only thing that's "nasty" is your shitty attempts at rap
^^^u use "these" when theres wordplay, thats not wordplay
DP's from hell, here to incinerate and impail ya,
I guess it's "typical" for a Bronx bitch to be a failure
^^^this is and is a good personal/punch........ this is how its done and even though it aint to strong of a punch it basically by itself shows u know more of what your doin then typical and would of won u the battle by itself.

I'm destined to kill you, destined to burn and shine,
I mean I'm half spiting and I'm already on my 10th line.
^^^^^ always end wit a bomb ass punch, its your finisher for god sakes, never finish wit self glorification.

RETURN THE FAVOR.... LINKS ARE IN MY SIG


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