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willnova vs ATMOSPHERE
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: Runnin from cops Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 03:37 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:07 AM.
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WillNova has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:08 AM.
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Topic: Chased from the cops Shyt, Cop tellin me to pull over, but lost my lisence n hasn't been found... So i stepped to the pedal, n now hear loud siren sounds from all around... N now mah hearts beat'n, by a dozen 5-0's im bein followed... Thinkin mah futures empty now, there's nothin, it's all hallow... Da radio says they got cops wait'n at da end of dis street... So I turn left, drift right, but still got a flyin 5-0 followin me... Thinkin smart like always, drove to Golden gate parkin lot... Jump out, take out my glock n jst take my couple shots... 2 cops now down, n shot mah gas tank for no evidence... Killed 2 innocet residents, seen by mah relatives, they call my cell sayin it looks like im chased as if i killed the U.S. President... But luckily i saw dis look alike civilian n i jst killed him... Then I took mah glock n had only a couple more bullets fill em... I took his clothes, dressed white all so i jst won't get caught... Shyt im now thinkin if i could get away? neone could escape the cops... |
pull up on the curb, jump out the black excursion//
hop the gate, knock down the trash can fo diversion// 5-0 began mergin, now theres four jakes in the chase// plus I'm holdin weight, only fate decides escape// can't hesitated, pass the eight to next nigga I see// warrant fo ID, damn, scuffed the fresh Huaraches// they try to stop me, thru backyards makin shortcuts// fuck that, i get off probation in four short months// newport butts cover the ground of the alley way// stash weed in a hidaway, lose weight Bally's way// runnin this escapade, the sirens start to dim// on my last limb, catch my breath, part the realm// hear a few barks and a gaurd dog advances grim// I'm exposed in a dark place like photographic film// my chances slim, so I surrender wit my hands up// white flag, fuckin fags slap on the tight handcuffs// can't stand up, my legs lock, my heart 'bout to stop// now I'm flock in a cage fo 15, cause I ran from the cops// |
good verse man...uppin dis shiznit
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uppin
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uppin dis shyt
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Voted For: WillNova
both had deent drops but i was definately feelin novas more from the wordplay through ta the vocab n rhyme scheme all the way to the closer nova took this cause he came solid from start ta finish nice job dawg... atmos:good idea n not a bad drop but your rhyme scheme killed ya flow n pretty much ruined ya verse...still good jus not good enough.. vote on these.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
good look fam.... and Atmosphere, nice drop..... now lets get sum more votes in on the request line.... uppin
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aight uppin fo votes again.... and why did my last vote dissapear, Oh well
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uppin
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come on ppl...2 days already..don't sleep on us...
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damn ppl...jst vote in dis shyt...its been slept on for a long ass time
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fo real.... as always I be uppin fo sumthing but get nuttin... stop frontin and vote fo i start ruckus
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Voted For: WillNova
yours was more excitin his or hers(ingenius) started wit he didnt have a licenced wack lol his or hers got betta but still I have it to give it to will nova cuz his was more enjoyable and shit yours was good ingenius but you shouldve started off better instead of a licence and you runnin in a car will nova yours was good cuz you were runnin and hoppin fences makin diversions ect so my vote has to go to... |
still uppin fo votes. com' on people lets stop sleepin and lets get this ova wit
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Voted For: WillNova
This was a pretty tight battle but ima have to give this one to Vote-Will reason- you both arent very good at topicals but ... will had some more feelin .. more emotions..and alot better imagery... as for you atmosphere you were intrducing the topic... the only like that actually cought my attention was : "Da radio says they got cops wait'n at da end of dis street... So I turn left, drift right, but still got a flyin 5-0 followin me..." ^^that was one of your best... ass for will your verse was tight it had some nice imagery fav line was : "pull up on the curb, jump out the black excursion// hop the gate, knock down the trash can fo diversion// 5-0 began mergin, now theres four jakes in the chase// plus I'm holdin weight, only fate decides escape//" ^^that was pretty dope... so overal ima give this one to will but it was a close battle keep it up |
Voted For: WillNova
you a fuckin genios dawg fuck yo must be doin this shit allday |
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lmao..he sed i wasn't very good? i understand..but jst look at mah other battles plz |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good His flow was heavenly and his wordplay just killed him Very good battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
my fault dog I voted for the wrong person
Get Strobe to DQ it |
wth??how can there be punchlines?? this is a topical??wth??dat ain't a vote
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aight people this one has been up way to long, lets get the votes in and finish it.... uppin ya kno
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Voted For: WillNova
yo u had a mad flow ya rhymes was tight ya punchlines was tight as hell n ya ya vocab was iight but i gotta give dis up to..... vote=willnova |
Voted For: WillNova
good battle.... aiiight im going to give this to nova, i thought he just had the betta lyricz and mind urz didnt rhyme that much, but it was still aiight. |
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