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MARVOLoUsJ1009 vs ATMOSPHERE
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8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 06:36 AM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 06:07 AM.
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 06:09 AM.
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If bein a vet means you hot then you should be put in a well...(line 1)
cuz you don't spit fire or flames, jst u thinkin u do is funny as hell...(line 2) Dis nigga, could spit? yo ppl dat you betta neva believe...(line 3) So Marv be mah advil, don't spit for RV's very own relief...(line 4) After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5) The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6) Shyt, so please leave, ur hated, we don't want you at all marvolous...(line 7) If u were jesus n rhymin good would save our souls?--- shyt, cuz of you, the devil wouldn't be hard to trust...(line 8) |
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If bein a vet means you hot then you should be put in a well... cuz you don't spit fire or flames, jst u thinkin u do is funny as hell... Dis nigga, could spit? yo ppl dat you betta neva believe... So Marv be mah advil, don't spit for RV's very own relief... After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles... The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles... Shyt, so please leave, ur hated, we don't want you at all marvolous... If u were jesus n rhymin good would save our souls?--- shyt, cuz of you, the devil wouldn't be hard to trust... |
shit ppl it aint hard da tell a record & name like mine had da attract dis quer // had da really think about battlin rite?? marvjay is dat nigga dat "atmos-fear"-
might shyne but dat'z only when marv's done,i call her up n homie da broad come // even "cam" madd cuzz i stay with "pink" on me but umm datz only ya moms "tongue"- but how can u say i aint sick as you??,on rv top 10 nobody eva mention's you // u not nice rv.com i dont know whut it is but dis "dick" only "cums" "(tip) ical"- i think u should get banned n more if i aint da sickest on da site whut u panic 4? // like "nail shops" if u spit at a dude with "aids" trust me u would give da "man-a-cure"- |
uppin dis shyt
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Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
Atmos- Verse Was Kinda Basic, No Hard Punches, Flow Was Decent Marv- Verse Was Ok, Not To Many Power Punches, Flow Was Ok, Struc' Was Good, And Wordplay Was Ok Punches- Marv Flow- Atmos Wordplay- Marv Metaphors- Marv Structure- Tie Originality- Tie Final Vote- Marv Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138077 |
aahhh fuck... meant to give that to marv.... this new battle shit gets me confused...... go to battle complaints n tell them the vote was for marv'.....
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shyt...i lost...lol..w/e...like i sed...i ain't good wit these kinda battles nemore... im better wit topicals
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This was feedback posted for ATMOSPHERE
Not voting on this but sayin Atmosphere...winning one out of every 2 battles isnt bad
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lol....but look at ur record??hahahahahahaha....
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datz vote's gettin changed but uppin 4 more.........................
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Uppin 4 More Votes Da Favor Will Be Returned...stop Sleepin Ppl
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Aight This was a Tight Battle, i liked both of yah Verses, but MARVOLoUsJ1009,(Fucken Long NAme) Came a little harder with the punches, and Wordplaym, thats what took it for me, but I really liked ATMOSPHERE's Battle Record Line, yah just Gotta Keep it Tight Consistent.. Good Battle VOTE: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Return the Fav!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Voted For: ATMOSPHERE
VOte ATMOS After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5) The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6) That won the battle right there, DOPE LINE Marvs first line was Ok but then it got wack and cheesy, overall OK battle, |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Oh shit dat joint was hot.Dis dudes a comedian. Marv had dat shit but it was close though. Atmosphere you did aiight but youngin came wit dat shit.Personals Marv had it wit dat atmos fear line. Same for personalz...dog you aint have any.Punclinez Marv(both was good though)funny as shit.Structure Atmosphere. Overall feelin both but Marv had it...no hate. Vote Marvelousj. Vote on dis http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139692 |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Flow: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Structure: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Punches: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Metas: TIE Personalz: ATMOSPHERE Creativity: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Multiez: none Enjoyment: MARVOLoUsJ1009 VOTE: MARVOLoUsJ1009 Pretty easy battle to vote on... ATMOSPHERE your flow was off... punches payed and shit... thas y u didnt get my vote... elevate ppl... |
okay goodlookin on da votes ppl...uppin 4 more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Stop Sleepin Ppl...................
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
shit ppl it aint hard da tell a record & name like mine had da attract dis quer // had da really think about battlin rite?? marvjay is dat nigga dat "atmos-fear"- ^^ nice wordplay-personal might shyne but dat'z only when marv's done,i call her up n homie da broad come // even "cam" madd cuzz i stay with "pink" on me but umm datz only ya moms "tongue"- ^^filler,but still nice but how can u say i aint sick as you??,on rv top 10 nobody eva mention's you // u not nice rv.com i dont know whut it is but dis "dick" only "cums" "(tip) ical"- ^^??was'nt feeling this bad rhyme i think u should get banned n more if i aint da sickest on da site whut u panic 4? // like "nail shops" if u spit at a dude with "aids" trust me u would give da "man-a-cure"- ^^koo closer nice wordplay If bein a vet means you hot then you should be put in a well...(line 1) cuz you don't spit fire or flames, jst u thinkin u do is funny as hell...(line 2) ^^ok nothin special Dis nigga, could spit? yo ppl dat you betta neva believe...(line 3) So Marv be mah advil, don't spit for RV's very own relief...(line 4) ^^pushed rhyme,weak punch.. After hearin how bad u spit?shyt you'd might as well be put in shackles...(line 5) The proof is ur record, (31-16) you only win one out of every two battles...(Line 6) ^^do your math again ..that don't add up Shyt, so please leave, ur hated, we don't want you at all marvolous...(line 7) If u were jesus n rhymin good would save our souls?--- shyt, cuz of you, the devil wouldn't be hard to trust...(line 8) ^^bad closer did'nt even rhyme... marv took this cause of punches both had some probs in their verse but marv had the punches n flow overall... atmos if he has a record of 31/16..hes had 47 battles ,so 1 outta 2 battles would put his wins at 23/24...i think you jus got confuzed.... return the favour /else i won't vote on ya battles anymore... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts |
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