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caliph vs For$aken
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Topical-Topic is Hip-Hop 20- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No recycling No posting after peoples votes commenting on what they said Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:35 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 05:06 PM.
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caliph has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 05:07 PM.
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This is a verse about Hip-Hop so try to follow along I used to love you but things in time have happened You flipped on me now you all about money and platinum sex and money and really its funny/How you fell for dudes like Nelly and Puffy/Went to the west for a minute They took ya hood culture and made it a bussiness The south fell for they gimmics Nas said it was written U used to love a man who came from the heart but that was way back when we used to chill in the parks You was a work of art/ beautiful creative and shit You was a wonderful sista the money made you a bitch gave them a way out with ya wealth/nowya acting way outta they self/and not for the better/ everybody popping they metal/Got a ice rocked bezzle and a drop for the hot weather Nobody seems to have a day when they struggled but everybody rich porter and gots a million ways to hustle You was a good women used to be the voice of the people But you chose money over truth ya choices was evil Its me to save you cuz i know how it was when they made you I hate you but i love you more and its fucked up cuz im in love with a whore |
whats taking so long this is the easiest thing to write about drop already well i guess you aint in no rush to get merked
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whats your problem^ waiting for me to drop so you can match it???????????? hip-hop! over the years it's been contaminated with false facts practically telling us physical abuse is the way to stay on track the form of music is blamed for domestic violence and allegations istening to the genre get's you stereotyped with cruel expectations hip-hop! lyrically infestation came when the legends passed away money is for expensive things and bling? is that how its portrayed less serious matter can no longer express ourselves through the form through it's entire history it changes shape and slowly transforms to something we would never in our lives believe it could be true hip-hop! is out of our grasps not in our hold its not in subdue the music is our right to have but it's been taken away from us we hear people cussing and the matter is not worth discussing We all promised to be true to it we even went under a great oath it only went downhill and hasn't elevated there has been no growth fake gangsters, italian mobsters also false statements and lies in ten years I can see it basically in the state on it's demise but in our hearts and souls it has never lost its really destiny and thanks to Mr.Kweli and the other its been better multiply true lyricists taught us to be true and to speak our minds think of it long then the real essense of it won't be hard to find |
blah this gimp no time to even edit it I smelled words wrong.....
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Voted For: caliph
damn... this was some good shyt... both verses were good but i gotta go with caliph on this one... the imagery in his rhyme was on point... it kinda reminded me of the joint Common did (I Used To Love H.E.R.)... caliph's flow and structure was also a little better. There were a few mis steps in forsaken's joint but the ideas were there and easy to catch on to... like when you rhymed multply and destiny... little things like that steals from your shine... there were a couple of lines that kinda confused me on first read but after re-reading it I got the point... good topical battle y'all but I gotta ride w/ Caliph |
Voted For: For$akeN
im voting for for$ake Claiph-topical...wasnt that good didnt show emotion or anything not even a decent story....your sstructure and flow was off....but practice and eventually youll elevate For-nice piece, nice vocab/structure.........okish flow....nice storyline......tells the true heart of hip-hop not gnagsters and stuff but lyricism....I also coaught a Don diss lol.... v/For$aken |
Voted For: For$akeN
this ain't a hater on caliph vote, its jus that with the topic bein bout hip-hop an not how hip-hop changes a women, forsaken wins cause she kept on topic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
**alos on claiph's verse he tlaked about a woman not hip-hop....unless he was callin rap a whore which doesnt make sense.......along with rap loving p.diddy...If rap could love itd be Canibus's baby momma
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You guys are pretty simple-minded sometimes... he wasn't saying hip-hop changes a woman... he was veiwing hip-hop AS a woman... re-read it and maybe you'll understand... open ya minds a little... he was on topic the whole time.
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well no the topics hip-hop, not a clever entwine on our personal love turned twisted relationship with it, the tops whats hip-hop as actual factual genre, not a fake fuck buddy
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anyways for others who are not drs or haters my topic is on hip-hop but i guess little kids cant understand it so im upping for honest intelligent voters
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Again... he talked about hip-hop the entire time... think outside the box... it's called imagination... if ya use that maybe you can see a grownup veiw of how hip-hop is seen to people who live it and not just do it as a hobby. |
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This was feedback posted for caliph
lol...just wanted to see how my fellow crew member is doing in this battle...i aint voted for no one, or feedn bac, so dont bitch
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Voted For: For$akeN
i was really feeling your verse forsaken i was surprised i didnt think you was this good in topicals...the vocab was sick good wordplay and structure everything was intact...and flowed together well...wasnt much imagery but everything else made up for it you wrote about the topic and didnt write a story for the topic thats what i like..... claiph your structure was choppy flow was a lil off track but besides that you had a decent drop also you stayed on topic most of the way through...you more of wrote a story instead of describing hip hop both verses were good but i gotta go with forsaken..good battle....caliph work on your structure and your topicals will be better vote/ forsaken return the favor on this battle please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140340 good look ~!1!~ |
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Voted For: For$akeN
ima vote fo for$aken, cuz i liked hiz shit betta, he had betta structure. boff of yallz didnt really have no multies. and i liked how for$aken wood put "hip-hop!" at tha beginin of tha line sumtimes. so vote= For$aken, werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: For$akeN
straight took it to him homes you got the lyrics you should record that shit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: For$akeN
I aint gonna votes still forsaken won this lol ya wack caliph Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for For$akeN
This was tight, nice imagery and flow. I know you can't really tell "flow" on text battles but it was there. The opener was tight, and you had a couple of quotables in there. Good structure also. Overall, this was dope. 8.5/10
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Voted For: For$akeN
This was tight, nice imagery and flow. I know you can't really tell "flow" on text battles but it was there. The opener was tight, and you had a couple of quotables in there. Good structure also. Overall, this was dope. 8.5/10 caliph yours was very sloppy and had gay structure. Your lines were to stretched and was hard to follow along. You didnt have any good lines for my liking. Overall, I didnt like yours. 4/10 Peep mine in elevated. |
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