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SONIC vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-08-04 at 09:56 AM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:56 AM.
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SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:58 AM.
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Visional "SONIC"? Ha, I'll give yu some "adivce"... Kiss my left cheak...
My disses so "far ahead of ya tyme" itz like i ripped you "last week"... dont bring tha "beef" to me cause dogg i "spoil it", You keep "slippin on ya tounge" like tha it was an "oil slick"... Sonic talks so much "shit", hiz "mouth could clogg my toilet". I leave yu passed out cause ya verse iz "ass out" like a "jay lo porn"... Say no more, I must be "Neutering dis homo", cause i leave his "gay flow torn"... Ya "abandoned" stylez like an "orphan", Son nobody "cares bout you"... Tha heat of this verse is only a portion, my real verse would ruin ya whole crew... Only problem im havin in dis battle is deciding how many ribs ta shift... You dissin me??? Might as well "call me constapated" cause "i dont give a shit".... |
You gonna drop soon
time is running out on ya -------------------- |
Yo rhymes are like dull Magnets, It ain't Attractive
I'm Ill while You're just "Sick"... Sick of Sayin Whack Shit I Spit the right shit, Stay on u and come for blood Like Ticks Flow Tight like Vice Grips, rhymes "sharper" than any "Ice Pick" Aim precise, hit you with more Accuracy than Tactical Archers U only win against Newbs, it's like Soldiers Attackin da Farmers No Fair, that's why yo wack shit is goin No Where In person U "Choke" on mics, Like the atmosphere had No Air So there bitch, you'll need some Aid Just to Stop Me Coz u couldn't give me a "Sick Punch" if u had Aids n U Socked Me |
Nice u got it up in time
Sharper than any ice pick , DAMN I GOTTA CHANGE MY NAME OR SUM SHIT 50 times ive herd that so far |
ofdido
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
I like the pic you painted, it was koo
structure: Icepick flow" Icepick harder punches ice pick return fav to me vs ghost |
VOtes please
Feedback is good as long as it has votes with it |
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STUCTURE! ARE YOU FUCKIN CRAZY, NO OFFENSE, BUT HIS STUCTURE WAS NO WHERE NEAR GREAT.. I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THE PUNCHES BUT STUCTURE? I CAN'T CALL IT DICK RIDE COZ HE DIDN'T VOTE BUT DAMN.. |
Dick Ryde
I Have A Battle Going Against Him Right Now So Why Would He Dick Ryde Notice I Said Vote And Leave Ya Vote Explain Ya Votes Bttere As Well I Hate Newbish Votes |
Voted For: SONIC
Icepick- Wordplay Was Ok, Some Parts Played, Flow Was Decent, And Punches Connected... Sonic- Begging Line Was Good, Flow Was Good, And Punches Hit, Also Structure Was Better... Punches- Sonic Personals- Tie Flow-Tie Wordplay- Icepick Metaphors-Tie Structure- Sonic Originality- Tie.... Final Vote----- Sonic..... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Sonic
Dont Cry About The Structre Its Like That Because The Lines Wouldnt Fit But They Did Befor I Posted It Kronuz You Ar A Fag< Always Voting Against Me Wanna Battle You No Dick Bitch |
It wasn't that, it's just that, I don't see how he could of said that your stucture was better, that's all..
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Voted For: SONIC
great battle but i think ice pick lost it wit tha last two bars. iwish i thought of that ice pick line. ma bad i havent set up that battle yet i was busy finishing up others.let me know when u ready. i return all honest votes thas my word! takin all challengers that vote 4 me. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i mean people who vote ON my battles.
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...55&page=2&pp=15
pleeeeeese vote i need to end this battle already. |
uppin
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Voted For: SONIC
yo dis battle was koo dawg, but uh Structure-Sonic Wordplay-Sonic Flow-Ice Pick punches-Tie vocab-Sonic man i no punches wins it but yall tied in my opinion but Sonic had betta wordplay and vocab so my votes for sonic v/Sonic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SONIC
i got to give this to sonic. Better punches flow and structure. Nice closer and opener. No hate ice. If ya could show me some love in my battles thatd be great Me vs Sin http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139911 Me vs Helter Skelter http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139991 Me vs Robkilla http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783 Good battle yo Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin
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Voted For: SONIC
Ice Pick: you would have gotten my vote if it wasnt for ya shit wordplay.... honestly... i was getting frustrated reading it cos it was sooo weak... flow was decent... but dam Sonic: ya punches n flow were better... flow enhanced by multis... wordplay wasnt anything special... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppn For Votes
Not No Dick Riding Votes Either |
Voted For: Ice Pick
im going with ice on this one sonic verse was good with that aids closer and opener was good too, the rest felt like filler to me.. ice had a punch in every line almost, sic metas and thats why i give him my vote tie on all other categorys Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I'm not even gonna vote, it seems like every person that votes against this dude is suposedly a d/r when i would actually say that it was other way around.. ice pick, your verse was kinda weak, stretched lines, no hard hitting punches either, you treally do deserve to lose, this battle is old as hell too..
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plus that was a D/R vote from hotshh, no offense to him, but he simply return the favor you gave him..
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Sonic Got his shit deleted so vote Ice. pz. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
um yeah well sonic...elevate. punches were kinda weak. thats all i will say. ice pick- okay punches, okay metas, okay wordplay, just an ok verse. keep elevatin and u might be the best. ill give you verse 7/10 and sonics a 5/10 RTF against jono...links in the sig! :thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
yooo ice pick this verse was ill u won tha battle wit ur closer alone....i still dont like ur ass but i gotta give u props on that sonic got his ass ripped to pieces ur punches were on point and tha structure was good u really chaned up ur style since our battle but good shit sonic i thought u were supposed to b ill..what happened?? ur punches were weak n u didnt seem to b takin this battle serious no hate just wonderin holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146167 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144971 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Ice Pick
pick ripped on him hands down...this was a one sided battle....sonic had awack flow, his punches didnt hit, and his personals...where we they?...pick didnt have any direct personals either...but his punches connect...and his rhyming was better drop explained votes on the battles in my sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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