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Degreez vs Sin
Battle Rules:
10-15 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Feeding 20 minutes to post after checkin G'Luck son.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-05-04 at 01:34 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Hurry up.. i gotta write another battle tonight..
whered u go? |
Degreez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:24 PM.
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Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:25 PM.
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the 7 deadly sins aint working for ya man-
the only lust* ya havin is fro ya right hand- You greedy* for this battle but a win will not happen- it was over from beginnin, drop the mic and stop rapping- ya raps are weak, and my wrath* is taking over- need steroids for your game like bond and sammy sosa- ya raps are gettin lazy* and your pride* has been breakin- time to stop the freestyle and get back to pre-written- jealous* of my style cause its something you cant have- i could take this title from you without with one or no hands- you just lost this battle, eating* cause ya depressed- couldnt win if you was j.lo without a dress- the stars represent the 7 deadly sins if ya didnt know |
typo from* in the second line
bonds* 6 line couldnt win this battle* if you was jlo without a dress last line sorry kinda sick |
this guy couldnt be ill if he fuken....kissed a bitch with aids..
couldnt be dope if he smoked a whole ounce...durin police raids.. bitch mades like these shouldnt be allowed to post in RVs.. n 'olascripts' should be banned on demand for gay crew names.. please.. degreez bein ill?.. pfft dont make me laugh son.. i swear.. u winnin this is like a kemo patient..with a full head a hair.. be aware.. ull have to ride some serious dick to not get fucked.. like castle moats n sunken boats.. this bitch kids all washed up... lick my nuts... fuck ya opinions.......i got minions.. you got shit.. i fuck pussy u lick dick...could write better.......high off 2 trips.. this newb fagget musta busted his elevation n battle skill.. hes one-a them people u just WISH would pop a bad E pill.. said hes eatin his dinner, so he couldnt drop his rhyme for a while but wait a minute.. i checked where he was... viewin my user profile.. (rofl @ pre-writing) * his crews 'olascripts' * You can check where people are on the site by lookin at their profile... (the closer) + he dropped like 5 minutes after the time limit started lol |
yo check out my other battles
Me vs. **flex** http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139581 Me vs. Robkilla http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783 |
aiight vote bitches....
Drop ya links when ur done voting.. |
uppin for votes
drop links when your done votin... |
Voted For: Degreez
both flows were kinda warped but Degreez won this bcuz of tha battle base solely on personal disses, tha punch lines were weak in both tho. at least degreez stayed on topic. both could do a bit of elavatin |
uppin for some votes people......ill get you back later
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uppin for some votes people ill return the favor leave me a link
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uppin...............
drop links when ya done voting. |
Voted For: Sin
Umm i liked b oth verses but Sin owned it i liked how the flow is going and the punches were good Flow:Sin Punches:Sin Multis: None Enjoyed: Both Vote:Sin |
both vote on the battles wit me vs sinner
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uppin for some votes ill repay the favor just leave a link. also check out some of my other battles
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This was feedback posted for Degreez
man i guess i cant vote yet, i dont have enough posts but i already got mad respect for degreez........ i like how his name is sin and he put in the 7 deadly sins in that, it was alot more original and had a nice flow in it........
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wtf it happened again, with one of the same people........... is sumthin wrong wit degreez's name wit mine, cuz they wont lemme vote???? they sed i already voted........... but i didnt???? and then wen i try to vote they wont let me....... and once again my vote wasnt counted........ someone help me on this, or send me a pm
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lmao when r people gonna realise that little things like that arnt anythin to do with dissin people... its mad easy to see who won this....
bloody newbs..... |
Voted For: Degreez
word....... degree took this easy... he had way better punches n wordplay n his multies were off the hook.. the 7 deadly sins line... that cemented the win for sure.. pure genious... ^^one of the dopest battles i seen on this site in a long time.. Vote:Degreez |
Voted For: Degreez
Sin took this battle no doubt. he came with better punches and a better structure. the other guy didnt have any real personals except his wack 7 sins thing he did so thats why im voting sin vote - Sin Fixed |
Voted For: Sin
ha ha ha dam man dis shit was funny good battle, uh heres reasons for my vote structure-sin wordplay-sin vocab-sin Punches-sin flo-degreez sin took it hands down, good battle tho v/sin |
Voted For: Sin
degreez.. nuthin special... ya only decent punch WOULD have been that personal with all the 7 deadly sins... but ya got em wrong.. lol.. wordplay was played.. flow was choppy sin: seen better from you but the personals alone were enough to beat degreez.. decent flow.. try to be more complex.. i dont mean usin big words.. by complex i mean increase your vocab.. but a good drop overall v/ sin return the favor if you feel you wanna.. links in sig.. one |
uppin for some votes
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Voted For: Degreez
this time you got it D you had better punchlines and rhymes and flow the other guy had nottin peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Sin
I'll vote on this in a sec, .
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uppin this shit. Leave a memory and ill get back to ya
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uppin
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uppin to finish this off..
drop links when ya done voting..... thanks. |
uppin this shit should be mine
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Voted For: Degreez
stucture - tie wordplay - neither personals - Tie punches - malak overall - malak this was hard to score coz i don't really like this battle. but in choosing the winner to me is malak. he came a little bit, less played with some of the punches and was a little wittier.. so malak i vote for you.. return favor wit a drop in my thread will u? |
OOPS, HERES THE LINK TO MY BATTLE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140340 |
Voted For: Sin
ima go wit poet punches-poet flow-malak multis- malak structure- malak enjoyment-malak |
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