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Ice Pick vs Barz&Penstripes
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No pre writtens either, like if i see your verse posted withini 2 or 3 minutes of this being posted YOU WILL BE EXPOSED Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-05-04 at 02:04 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
What if I'm just that nice -- I still get disqualified -- that's crazy! 5 minutes max right!
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Barz&Penstripes has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:46 PM.
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Icepick!? More like thumbtack or sewing needle/
You're rhymes are jacked and dead like dude who lived aboved the Reagle Beagle/ See I speak reality throwing potent shots/ You speak fantasy like 900 #s and I robot/ Step into the real world posing as Jason/ Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/ Patience? I have none but it's almost over/ This battle was a rocky horror like Dame losing Hova One Is that under 5 minutes |
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:56 PM.
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I took 9 minutes for those bars -- Crazy! I knew I shouldn't have been eating these cookies and drinking this milk! lol
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I wonder how long this kid is going to take?! hmmmm..
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Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope.....
but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~ Punches direct at ya throat...and like a REBELLIOUS CHILD u jus CANT STOP ME.... You just the OBJECT OF INFLICTION....like the JAPANESE at NAGASAKI~ The TOP 3.....cuz like O.J SIMPSON Ice already MADE THE CUT.... You aint a HEAVYWEIGHT RAPPER...cuz like stripes he just DONT WEIGH ENOUGH~ The WEIGHT IS TOUGH....and like OPRAH WINFREYS WAISTLINE STRIPESs has LOST IT..... This WIGGERS GETTIN HIS ASS KICKED....like DISSIN LARRY BIRD IN BOSTON~( ICe Causin....UPSET STOMACHES like an OVERDOSE ON PRUNES.... Cuz my punches are TOO HOT....like wearin WINTER COATS IN JUNE~ |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice had this nice verse for 20 min..some lines kinda LOST ME but overall you had punches flow n more complexity...stripes i wouldnt be so cocky in the future..bout that 5 min crap,you did't really have anything interesting in your verse.. return the vote.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794 |
Yo! He called me a wigger and I'm Black & Puerto Rican! Holy Moly! lol! Nice research! lmao! Cream puff! lol! haaaaaaaaaaa!
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Dude Like I Fuckin Knew That
Its A Battle Son And I Aint Researchin Shit I |
especially with a time limit of 20 minits..what research is possible???ice your lucky you dint get dq'd you took exactly 20 min..cuttin it kinda close don't ya think...lol..good battle guys..
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NO the fuckin system is not letting me post properly, i tried posting this 2 times already and it aint working,,,,,
THIS BETTER FUCKING GO THROUGH I TRIED BATTLIN SIN AND THE SAME THING HAPPENED AND I GOT THE L FOR IT , AND I DIDNT EVEN GET TO DROP MY VERSE this new battle system fucking sucks dick |
Yo! it's cool man! Keep doing what you do! Thankx for your honest opinions! lol!
Peace |
This was feedback posted for Barz&Penstripes
I'd vote but it'd be biased since Barz and me is cool and shyt so omma just drop some feedback:
Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope..... but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~ Weak opener... 2nd line threw me... what's pension got to do with anything? Punches direct at ya throat...and like a REBELLIOUS CHILD u jus CANT STOP ME.... You just the OBJECT OF INFLICTION....like the JAPANESE at NAGASAKI~ Better bar but the first line was played and weak... good finish though... never heard that one before The TOP 3.....cuz like O.J SIMPSON Ice already MADE THE CUT.... You aint a HEAVYWEIGHT RAPPER...cuz like stripes he just DONT WEIGH ENOUGH~ 1st line=self-glorification and not feeling the 2nd line... played wording... lol@stripes don't weigh enough The WEIGHT IS TOUGH....and like OPRAH WINFREYS WAISTLINE STRIPESs has LOST IT..... This WIGGERS GETTIN HIS ASS KICKED....like DISSIN LARRY BIRD IN BOSTON~( too many references to weight... Oprah lines are played...so is the Larry Bird line... ICe Causin....UPSET STOMACHES like an OVERDOSE ON PRUNES.... Cuz my punches are TOO HOT....like wearin WINTER COATS IN JUNE~ Weakest line in ya verse... closer was played about 10 years ago... ok structure overall... build on ya vocab no real punches that stuck... personals were obsolete... Icepick!? More like thumbtack or sewing needle/ You're rhymes are jacked and dead like dude who lived aboved the Reagle Beagle/ you my boy and all but this line was stretched all to hell...lol i like the originality, though...good opener... just shorten it somehow to fit See I speak reality throwing potent shots/ You speak fantasy like 900 #s and I robot/ good use of current events but no real punch Step into the real world posing as Jason/ Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/ didn't like this one too much... I know you can come a lot better than that... stop playing around. Patience? I have none but it's almost over/ This battle was a rocky horror like Dame losing Hova good closer... originality gets points Barz... in text it's all about the structure and how easy it is for others to read ya flow... stop thinking audio.. I know... that's what we're used to...but text is different. It was an ok battle ... can't say who won... sorry! *This was just to let you all know that me and my boy let each other know when we fuck up a verse... that's how we stay on top of our game. If dude woulda smoked him... trust me, I woulda said so...and vise versa... but... I can't vote on this!* |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Ice Pick: Pretty Nice Shit...I Was Feelin The Punches..You Kinda Fell Off Here And There Though When You Started Talkin Bout Yaself...Ya Structure Was All Over The Place..But Ya Verse Made Up For It So..Thats Why I Voted For You.. B&P: You Had A Nice Flow And Nice Structure... But I Feel Ya Punches Werent That Hard...That Some Of Them Came Out To Basic And Quick..If You Would Have Reworded It To Hit Harder..You May Have Had This Battle.. RETURN THA FAVOR!! |
That's what's up! That's my boy right there! See now that was honesty! But none the less, I'm enjoying myself in rapbattles.com! Good emceeing! Next time i'll take longer to write my verse! lol! It was only 9 mins, no real effort! But next time!
What up Ill! Peace |
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Nothin' much...just chillin.... lookin for a battle |
Yo! Lekchur why did u not comment! DV8 & u were both in thread when i issued the challenge, both got upset cuz I said I'll take anyone in 5 minutes, and now as a coincidence you both vote 4 Icepick (in which by the way I think his verse is peace) and not really comment on why you voted the way u did! C'mon really at least tell me why instead of making seem suspect! Let's be fair about it ok!
IcePick much respect no d/r at least you held up your end of the bargain! I still got yah in 9 mins though -- Straight Jesse James style! lol! Peace |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick dope ass verse...i was really feeling this sick multies good wordplay structure was choppy you need to work on that...punches was solid...but you need to use personals...cuz personals hold a verse together if barz had wrote a better verse and used some personals you could have lost so think about those... barz: your verse was utterly wack no solid punches your structure was also choppy...you brung nothing to this battle and you need to elevate in all areas because your verse lacked in everything it wasnt consistent at all and the flow was off vote/ ice pick good verse from you both need to elevate return the favor on this battle please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140340 good look ~!1!~ |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Yeah... definately goes to Ice Pick.... Ice... you had good flow and i liked your structure. You had hot wordplay and shit dogg... not much to criticize... Bars & Pensripes... wasn't feelin' that at all... u need to work on your flow and come up with harder punches and shit... cuz I was not feeling it at all. v/Ice Pick |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ight you had flow and you had rhyme but not the best holla the other guy just sucked Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
one sided but it wasnt cuz barz was whack either. i just thougth ice had better punches wordplay etc.. ice your structure was a lil off so barz got that category but other than that, u handeled buisness.fav lines: ice-Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope..... but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~ barz-Step into the real world posing as Jason/ Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/ ok hit the links in the sig with honest votes |
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