Lekchur vs GEE
 

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No Recycling
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Check in by: 08-05-04 at 04:15 PM

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Lekchur has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:47 PM.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:50 PM.

Look at his sig, he sounds "cocky" like hes the best guy in sports,
but he spits "nervously" against me like wen criminals testify in courts.
I'm the sheriff of "Pensylvania", your rhymes are crimes, and I'm labelin capers*,
so with mah "pistol" I cause "mania", and put more holes in you, than when I'm staplin papers.
I never "waste rhymes", like construction workers, I never "save-a-bar",
after I "knock him out", I'll leave this bitch confused, like his "av-a-tar".
Nobody understands your lines, you need more "substance", originality, you lack the lyrical "fat",
cuz your rhymes "go over people's heads" like throwback hats.
I "run over" schmucks, like "trucks", and I "drive all day" fa fun.
"Lekchur" thinks shes gonna win, but "her-luck"** is done.

*Crimes
**Swich the letters up in his name.

-Look at his info and avatar on the side and shit, youll get it.

BRUISIN THIS MAN, Like 'Throwin In Poker Cards' I'm 'REMOVIN YA HANDS'
Yea I'm All About My Money, But Still I'll 'Drop G' Like 'LOSIN A GRAND'!!
Shit DUDE CAN YOU STAND? I Guess Not When I'm SNATCHIN YA LEGS
It's Like I 'Flipped And Broke Ya Name' Bitch Cuz Im 'CRACKIN A EGG'!!
Arms SNAPPIN LIKE PEGS, Look At My Wins Your The NEXT TO GET KILLED
YES THIS IS REAL, Cuz You Know Lek Gon 'Move E' Like 'EXTACY PILLS'!!
Slice Ya NECK AND YA GRILL! You Beat Me? Now That's SILLY I SAY
'Fucka GEE' Man!! This Niggas 'Name' Should 'REALLY BE GAY(GEe)'!!
The MILLY WILL SPRAY, Injectin Holes In Ya To SMACK YOU INTO PLACE
I Know Your A Ho! So I'll Have 'G In Tears' Like The TATTOO ON THEY FACE!!

**Line 4, His Name Is GEE Flip It eEG/EGG**
**Line 6, geE/Extacy**
**Line 10, Once A Gangsta Kills Someone They Get A Tear Drop By They Temple**

Good shit Lekchur, Good battle here.

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No Doubt Gee You Too..Aye Can You Vote On This Battle For Me Fam??
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Thanks...Uppin

Voted For: Lekchur

dayum i give this too lekchur

lekchur had the better flow......his punches hit HARD!!!.....his structure was good...good word usage...good wordplay.......decent vocab.......this was an all around sick verse...good jon lekchur

gee ur shit was aiight but basic in some points..if u worded things differently then it wuld sound harder ..like the first line was decent but if u worded it different it culd of sounded better...ur punches were alright..good wordplay..bad structure..ur flow was off at points...overall...this was an aiight verse

vote: lekchur

Thanks For Voting, 1-1 Or 1-0 I Guess, I Dunno, Lol, Uppin......

Voted For: Lekchur

lec overall im givin this to you cause of punches along with good personals n good structure you flow was rarely off n i think you both tied in wordplay multi's n creativeness,this was a good battle..props ta both....return the vote...
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2-1 or 2-0.. Thanks A Lot For Voting...I'll Vote On All The Peeps Who Voted Here...

Yea fa sho, keep tha votes comin.



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Voted For: GEE

Iight fam. I got yall on this hit me back...

Struc - Gee
Metas - Gee
Creativity - both, tie
Personals- Lekchur
Punches - almost a tie, but Lekchur came harder wit
My vote goes to Gee, holla back, fav. for fav. in return.

Wow I Get The 2 Most Important Category And He Gets The Vote?? Lol. Wow. Anyway 2-1 or 2-2...

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Voted For: GEE

open: Both weer ok but could have benn alittle better
close: Gees close was alot harder
personals: nither one really had any
metas: both was ok in this one
punches: Gee had a few harder ones but both was good

Heh...Can We At Least Get Someone To Vote And Not Just Look At The Thread?? Thanks..

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Voted For: Lekchur

Lekchur

BRUISIN THIS MAN, Like 'Throwin In Poker Cards' I'm 'REMOVIN YA HANDS'
Yea I'm All About My Money, But Still I'll 'Drop G' Like 'LOSIN A GRAND'!!
->>first line was weak but i liked the meta in the second one

Shit DUDE CAN YOU STAND? I Guess Not When I'm SNATCHIN YA LEGS
It's Like I 'Flipped And Broke Ya Name' Bitch Cuz Im 'CRACKIN A EGG'!!
->>forced multi in first line led to weak punch...punch in second line was pretty tight

Arms SNAPPIN LIKE PEGS, Look At My Wins Your The NEXT TO GET KILLED
YES THIS IS REAL, Cuz You Know Lek Gon 'Move E' Like 'EXTACY PILLS'!!
->>a stretch to make this work because his name ends with e so it doesnt really make sense to call him e but it was cool so this bar came out pretty nice

Slice Ya NECK AND YA GRILL! You Beat Me? Now That's SILLY I SAY
'Fucka GEE' Man!! This Niggas 'Name' Should 'REALLY BE GAY(GEe)'!!
->>hah dr. suess rhyme in the first line...kinda fillerish

The MILLY WILL SPRAY, Injectin Holes In Ya To SMACK YOU INTO PLACE
I Know Your A Ho! So I'll Have 'G In Tears' Like The TATTOO ON THEY FACE!!
->>this was your nicest meta and im glad you saved it for the end nice closer even with the weak setup

Gee

Look at his sig, he sounds "cocky" like hes the best guy in sports,
but he spits "nervously" against me like wen criminals testify in courts.
->>with the new battle system you cant see siggy's...second line was weak

I'm the sheriff of "Pensylvania", your rhymes are crimes, and I'm labelin capers*,
so with mah "pistol" I cause "mania", and put more holes in you, than when I'm staplin papers.
->>ehh it was alright...forced multi but decent

I never "waste rhymes", like construction workers, I never "save-a-bar",
after I "knock him out", I'll leave this bitch confused, like his "av-a-tar".
->>i didnt get the first line and i cant see the avatar

Nobody understands your lines, you need more "substance", originality, you lack the lyrical "fat",
cuz your rhymes "go over people's heads" like throwback hats.
->>first line way stretched but the second line was good

I "run over" schmucks, like "trucks", and I "drive all day" fa fun.
"Lekchur" thinks shes gonna win, but "her-luck"** is done.
->>weak first line and i cant see the information on the side

Gee you really got fucked over by the new battle system. Your shit mightve been good but i cant see what youre talking about so the punches fell apart. Your structure is a little off. Your verse wasnt terrible but it wouldve been a lot better if I could see what you were talking about.

Lekchur you came pretty good here I liked some of the stuff you were saying. Your good bars were good and your bad ones were bad but you had some creativity in there that I could definietely appreciate and I thought you had a pretty good overall verse.

Voted For: GEE

dam man dis shit was crazy uh i dint get yo verse lekchur, so uh

structure-Gee
Wordplay-Gee
VocaB-Gee
flo-Gee
punches-Gee

onesided shit in my opinon
so my votes to Gee

v/Gee

Then Why The Fuck Did You Vote You Retard....??? Damn Common Sense... And Schema You Just Broke The Battle Down, You Didnt Place A Vote...

Voted For: GEE

Gee - good flow man, good structure and nice punches, very good use of vocab, nice rhymes and all

Lekchur - good job too, good flow and punches, but your vocab didnt compare to what was comming from gee

v/gee for better vocab and rhymes