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chatter box vs Mc:Xplicit
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-06-04 at 06:19 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
confused
:huh: wait im confused, how many lines can i drop and when do i have to spit by coz im in england so its kinda confusing
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chatter box has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 06:37 PM.
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u can spit first mate im a newbie your more experinced safe
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u better run away before, by sick twisted flame, u get locked up n hurted..
U c once your in my jail your going to realise that you really should have blurted.. So smarten up boy ill even buy you a new shirt.. Cause you want to look good when your buried in the dirt.. get down on your knees, let me cum in your mouth so at least u can spit some good juice.. Because for lyrics this bad u need your mouth washed out with soap, for these lyrics theirs no excuse.. Abuse? Is what your guna receive from me because u deserve to be hacked at with a blunt axe.. Your lyrics are wet, smell and covered in blood just like your mothers tampax.. I’m like buff-e and your a vampire watch out ima killer n your about to get slayed.. The only way this kid could lose his virginity is to crawl up a chickens ass and wait to get laid.. If ya keep pissing me off ill hit u with the biggest thing I got ask ya mum shell know.. Coz ive come ova your mum more times than a worn out Russian porno .. xplicit your a fucking light weight, watch me decimate your shit there aint no escape.. im locking you up naked like a monkey in a zoo cage, everyone will laugh at your tiny little dick mate.. Your like watching a bloke on a projector taking a dump where as all my shit is real.. Your being picked up-n-chucked and slapped-to-fuck by c box tell us how does it make u feel.. Its not the weed that does it, its coz your head so full of bullshit it make your eyes smeary.. So lay down on my table and let me take your brain out and u may just start to think clearly.. u say u could rip me apart but that aint true as im diving into your greatest fears.. I can see that wet patch in your trousers growing as your death subsequently nears.. battling me hazardous to your health im dangerous like a crack habit.. man fuck the manual shit ill do u straight up with automatics.. do us all a favour stop eating out your dads ass and chatting shit.. your lyrics are so whack, soggy n wet its like u dropped your mums clit.. im guna leave u now ,like lil Wayne, my shine is still very much glowing.. o and do me a favour tell your mum the fivers on the side and her bush very much needs mowing.. |
their ya go i was getting bored waiting for this con artist to post so i thought i would just post a light verse just to settle in things are guna get better peeps
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Mc:Xplicit has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 04:46 PM.
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come through to spit fire so lyrically i keep heaters
cleaned out chatter's blox so im his street sweaper my lyrics exploding in your head going off like timed clocks i spit a verse and put lyrical pipe bombs in chatter box flow so tremendously stay steady like the fort knox you probably ask for more extensions than Aj's dreadlocs leavin my mark on your record to let u know we aint standing you told u i put my mark on it so i name branded you xplicit wins again thats more than natural lend you my style and use your whole life as colateral |
ok i didnt know you was gunna do short i was expecting loads of lines when it said unlimited if i can could i cut mine down or not coz people might not want to read all that
uppin peepes |
yo u aight even though i only read like part of it
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uppin for votes people vote please safe
good battle xplicit |
vote please people i hate out standing battles safe
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is any1 ever guna vote on this please vote peeps ill return the favour
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Voted For: chatter box
i'll go with chatterbox on this one , a lil to long though ha i got bored half way down , dont write so much unless its keen to the win but i think you coulda beat him in half of what you wrote so yea , but otherwise other guy you need better punches and more personals and a better structure :shoot: :shoot: turban look at my i'm a terrorist in the poetry & open mic sections |
Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
MC won diss better wordplay n punches was ok Chatter 1st u wrote 2 long about nuttin u need more practice but u'll get there V/MC:Xplicit vote on my battles DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS ECKO(CS) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 DRAG~ON[P-S-A] VS EMCEE SHADOW(L.I.) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142848 E DUBZ(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143740 BostonLyricist http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143837 |
Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
Xplicit Gets My Vote... Nice Battle Ya'll... Punches = Xplicit Metas = Chatter Structure = Xplicit Humour = Xplicit Multies = Chatter Xplicit Juss Edged It, Even Tho The Verse Was DOUBLE What Xplicit Posted, Chatter My Nigguh You Gotta Elevate! Good Lookin Tho.... Return The Vote n Battle On My Vs Mc Naughty Boya |
Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
ok chatterbox i'm not being a hypacrit, just thought i'd help you out, i was like you i wrote loads of rhyme k, people dont like lots and no matter how good it is no vote will go against you, so me and you both gotta shorten our shit and like me i think the talents there but when u write loads people dont wanna give you a chance..so just hit with punches in shorter battles, k bro good luck. |
Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
chatter's structure and flow were both fucked...his punches didnt make sense... xplicit...had good punches...good flow and structure... gave it to xplicit... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok yall wat eva safe for ur votes but mine was a load of my fav 2 liners shoved together to tell the truth ill admit lookin at mine now it was shit but i still think mine is better but if ta want xplicit u want a rematch n we set an amount of line not unlimited
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caan we get some votes to finish this please it been open to long so lets get some votes to close it and drop a link i will post an honest vote on your battle
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word up just a few more votes so this will finally end i will return the favor
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yo drop an honest vote and a link i will return the favor
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yo uppin i will repay the faovr drop a link and i will drop an honest vote
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Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
Xplicit got diss kept it short n sweet nice wordplay hard hittin punches also a pretty noce flow n structure Chatter dats all u did 4real u did a long verse 4 nuttin no real punches or wordplay just disses dat are stupid shoulda used vocab n metas atleast but ok flow vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle |
Voted For: Mc:Xplicit
Mc:Xplicit Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... chatter box Punches were good too not as hard as Mc:Xplicit's tho... Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
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