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dysphoria vs Diamond042291
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Diamond042291 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:02 AM.
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dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:03 AM.
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alright its time to say goodnight you pussy
time to turn off the light dont push me cuz it'll be a distaster cause i'll blast you faster than a shao Lin master yeah its a catastrophe for any bitch thats after me cant u hear my laughter B bobbin and weavin my fake jab then a right so decievin thats why all these bitches leavin retreatin cause they dont want a beatin watchin your nose leakin u seekin safety u thought u could take me but now u looking all shakey about to fall this fight is called u just got malled my reach can teach u itll fuckin beat you defeat you its somethin u cant see through somethin u cant see past cause if u step in its path u gettin knocked on your ass so fast 50 rounds i can last and i'll be havin a blast fly the flag have mast cause I just killed your ass its a thrill to see your blood spill i was born to kill it gives my spine a chill and until u can take my hook and not be shook watch the way you look before you life gets took |
Illest MC DISTRAININ' AND INFAMIN' And Its All PROGRESSED BY THE RHYMES ...
Strangle Your Optics From Your Soul And Say I Killed Ya FLESH BY THE NINE This Bitch a Mad Biter ... But I'll Still FIGHT TO CONDESED ... Strapped In a HI TECH VEST I'll BITE YA TEXT ... Leave It Without Multies And DIGEST THA REST I Start DISSIN' TO ABUSE ... To Bruse You Like Chickens Cloakin' In CHICKEN COOPS Its a Cumalitive To An Abortion ... The Predecessar Is Used To R.I.P-pin' NEW BORNS Strattle Ya Tech Nine ... You Ain't Equipin' Hand Guns Cauze I'm CLIPPIN' BRUSED ARMS Real Shit : I'mma Slash Thin Cuts From Razors To Your Text Cauze I RINCK ICE Shoot Double Caps To Make You HALF BRAINED ... Just To Make You THINK TWICE I Rap MAD HARD ... My Cyps Are BACK STABBERS The Way I STAB BARS Its An ARENA BATTLE Cauze I'm warmin' Shooters To Have You Dead Before You Can GRAB GUARDS This Bitch ROCKS DUST ... HANDCUFF YA TEXT ... Ya Name Consepted a COP BUST This Bitch GLOCKS WHAT ... INTIMATE CYPHERS KILLIN' YOU QUICK In This HARD CORE GAME DESCINIMATE RIDERS REVEALIN' YOU SHIT ... Cauze I'll Rock Ya Head Into a HARD FLOOR DAME |
Voted For: dysphoria
Dysphoria had better structure... might wanna look at his word usage and pick up a dictionary (last line)... third bar looks like it's missing a line... what's a cyp?... no real punches ... a lot of shit talking... gun talk don't win battles unless you displaying mad skillz...but... Diamondbuncha#'s: |
didn't finish explaiing vote:
d: your lines were stretched all to hell... no structure at all... rhymes were simplistic... most of ya verse seemed filler... ya used multi's but very effectively... no word play... very basic and premature rap style... v/ goes to dys |
uppin this .. c'mon peeps need votes in here so we can close this thread .. don't sleep y'all ... peace
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Voted For: Diamond042291
structur 2 diamond rimes to dimin no punchlines on either side you both could do better but dimin favored over you more. so i give my vote to diamond.. no lie hit me back |
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Voted For: dysphoria
like Dysphoria flow better both structures wasn't all dat great but Dysphoria's worked with da flow v/Dysphoria vote on my battles DRAG~ON vs phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867 DON http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 1 |
This was feedback posted for dysphoria
Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it |
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Voted For: Diamond042291
my votes goin ta diamond she had a nice flow needs a lil betta punch line but she was goin all out she nice as shyt fa real she can elevate if she keep dat great flow up ~HOLLA~ |
Voted For: dysphoria
Aight, It Was An Okay Battle........ Dysphoria Had Better Wordplay n Structure.... The Punches Were A Lil Weak From Both Kats............ Both Need To Elevate Ya Vocab............... Step Ya Game Up n Hit Harder Ya'll........ Much Propps Tho... Keep Up The Hotness Ya'll Spittin... Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles P E A C E |
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Voted For: dysphoria
Dysphoria Got This One ... First Of All Phoria Ya Structure And Flow Was Much Better Than Diamonds ...Diamond You Definatly Need To Work On That ... Dysphoria's Punches Were Good, Which Were Godly Compared To Diamond's ... You Need To Elevate Man ... Nice Personals And Multies Too Dysphoria ... V/ Dysphoria |
Voted For: dysphoria
dysphoria got this one..punches were harder than Diamond042291..tha structure was in place...and tha flow was nice... Diamond042291..yo shit wasn't good cuz all of it was 2 short...stretch yo lines a littler further...make tha flow good..and tha punches need 2 be harder...elevate more |
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