dysphoria vs BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
 

Battle Rules:

20 max
No Recycling
No Biting

this is a battle between songs choose the better one and holla

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 06:17 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:18 AM.

People tellin me im not good anofe/
to make it in the game but ill just stand up tall and buff/.
and tell em straight off wit my hardcore rhyme/
i will be gettin better from time to time/.
i spit into the mic on top of my comp/
and say yer done i stomped you out/.
and how about i say it with a (shout)/. (loud)

i wanna take my rap to the pro's/
so i can get some hoe's/.
so im gonna be gettin better ill be pushin my self/
to do my best ill take my rap to the top/
and be number one on all the charts and never stop/.
ill be one of the best not sayin im am the best yet/
but i bet im gonna be set/
so ill be putin down all the people who said i couldent do it with a threat/

dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:35 AM.

Through My Eyes

Longin' desperately to get out of emotional struggle ... From hard times to weak minds I emerge from the trouble (1)
But the anger and despair plagues me from day to day ... No bells of freedom, could I be trapped in my ways ? (2)
Puttin' forth the effort to livin' a better life ... But through my eyes all I see is franticness and strife (3)
If I could bring you to my world to see what I see ... Then you'll visualize the rap world has no place for me (4)
Painfully obvious, I see the picture is to get richer ... I guess theres no room for deep and intellectual scriptures (5)
The end result, borin' delivery and bubble gum lyrics ... Conclusion of disillusion, sedative souls and mindless spirits (6)
Nowadays I see it's all about the bling ... But wouldn't rap be borin' if we were all after the same thing ? (7)
Think about it, would you want to ask you favourate rapper a question ... To get pass all the bullshit and right down to the confession (8)
Like, what happened to hip-ho's glory days of chivalry ? What happened to the unique flows and precise deliveries ? (9)
What happened to the honest and original lyrics ? What happened to the fans touched souls and moved spirits ? (10)
When did "buying the bar" become a essential part of hip-hop ? And when did original lyrics become "not so hot" ? (11)
Now I don't expect you to be all you can be ... I'm tired of the same answers, different questions "I'm just tryin' to do me" (12)
Cause hip-hops streets of gold are tarnished from the unpleasant weather ... The ultimate choice do I survive or get severed ? (13)
From the worldly walk of life it's clear that I made my choice ... To progress as a individual, finally I can rejoice (14)

Voted For: dysphoria

yo dat was tite Dys yall both had good songs, but Dys u had a beta flo n a betta emotional expect of it, so yea this goes to u but yall return da favor man so i can finish dat battle, http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140117,
iite 1 love

guy it was 20 max you cant vote on that no votes for him hes over lines 20 is max

i had 14 lines hommie .. i even numbered them for you .. unless u can't count !

Voted For: dysphoria

Ok, again...not breaking down the lines, take much to long and no use for em...one sided battle

BrOTheRP.A.R.A.-weak...no vocab, no wordplay...stretched lines in your bottom half...ok flow...it could of been better if you made it longer with better vocabs..used some multis n metas, and had some wordplay...real weak "song"

dysphoria-Good Vocab, a couple of multis here and there, but nothing to special..your structure was stretched at times which messed with the flow, but a decent "song"...more original

Vote: Dysphoria
Reason:Came with better vocab, more multis and an overall better "song"

Brother...your such a fuckin herb dude, can you not read the numbers beside his lines signifyin where the line stopped? and too Emergin...im proud of you, you actually gave good feedback on a battle...our little emcee is growing up =D

no man im stoned i can read easy im fuckin baked lol

exactly what i said.................you an herb ;)

yea

maybe you should sober up before you battle..you'd probly do better..i dunno tho..im more creative when im fucked up

haha smokins the best hahahahahah lol rank tho i love bein baked

Voted For: dysphoria

it is obvious who won this and i dont think i need a long vote for this one but dy took this one easily his was just on a whole other level and it flowed better had nice multi's and vocab so my vote is DY return tha fav

3-0 ... isn't that a second knockout for me ! :) mod what do u say ? peace out ... it was nice battlin u hommie ... thanx for votin peeps returned the favor on emerge's battle ... out

Voted For: dysphoria

im gonna have to vote against u brotha
flow-disphoria
punches- disphoria
simplicity-U!
enjoyment- disphoria
haha its ok ur not a rapper in real life i understand yo disphoria can u drop a vote on ma battle against krack kitten? i think i should b winnin but wat do i know? jus drop for whoever u think is hot

sure will and to everyone who wants me to vote on their battles just leave me the link peeps ... will surely return the fav .. drop your links hommies or msg them to me .. peace

Voted For: dysphoria

This was much more expressive.. it also had a better rhyme scheme and was longer meaning more content.. Brother needs more practice, it wasn't even close..

V/dysphoria

return favor with a drop in my thread wll u? thanx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140340