One-Man-Band vs calamity
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 07:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 07:34 AM.

calamity has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 07:44 AM.

this kids style is more hated, and outdated then what happened to jews..
. . . . . . he wonder why hes not known: then STOP battling "Who ?"s..
i'll break ya toe off, then smack you like i forgot to take my zoloft..
. . . . . . leave you puzzled and confused like your avatar.. so lost..(LMAO)
bash this has-been, put copper to this hoe, so now we cash-friends..
. . . . . . you had a nice battle run, 9-4,what the fuck happened??..
most people wise up,delete they screen name and stop rappin'..
. . . . . . but you insist on getting burnt to crust in pie fashion..
man watch as band's ass gets raped, ima make his damn casket-wake..
. . . . . . this kids a fake fruit, like a bowl of plastic dates..
this kids multis are wack shit, and won't help him like chapped lips..
. . . . . . ima tear his verse apart like blondes to black dicks..
he a herb like green trees, this cat ends up with ripped spleens..
. . . . . . even with a remote, and preview channel he wont see me..
hes a no show, his fur aint visable when site sees the fog..
. . . . . . ima silence his ribbits, like i put Bats to frogs..
give this kid a storm when i hit em wit drastic thunder..
. . . . . . leave ya bones in fragments kinda like his Spittin structure.. (he spits in paragraphs)
i'll put your life in a broken engine, to leave ya fate stalled..
. . . . . . empty ya jaws, cause we all know like pool tables you ate-balls..(eightball)
^flow is there..strucutre just fucked cause i did it in notepad lol.. :).. uppin for ya verse :D

I rap dirty, recite in the mud, write with ya blood, like red ink fluid from pens
This vet rips, bruisin ya lens, you no trouble, Ive beat ya best, bitch, n ill do it again
Ya raps is all noob in the end... it ain't hard ta tell ya get messed wit ease
So all the cats votin for calamity better check themselves..... fa STD's
leave ya checked n breezed, im a skilled cat, n' this birds flappin his wings
battlin me, ya just keepin the trends you set, man, ya still collabin' wit kingz
I clap ya n' sting, Ya whole game changes a lot... Ill tear apart ya brain wit a shot
hoops? calamity? ya cranium pops... ill kill this bitch once for every name that hes got

n some wordplay...

This kid keeps BITING his raps.. Im itchin ta beat ya so ill smack ya fleas
but ya shit still end up "HERB"ish... just like u was tryin to CLAM-A-"TEA"
Ya cant hang with me, im reppin fa real, wannabes im destined to kill
Be scared fucka... you should do like FOOT FETISHES and "HEAD for the HEELS"
bruised galore, im SUPERMAN...'death-throw' visions, when i rip-the-sites
'sigh-men'...ill have this faggot next to BLOOD... like a 'Crip-ta-KNIGHT'
and yet im cold as steel...i 'split cats'...so ya brain better 'THINK TWICE'
get JEANS spliced...to make sure you SEE my point, ill 'LEVI's'

I spit so holy, every time i drop a rap I got profits come after me
But ima treat this like you do, man.... and DROP a CALAMITY*



fuck it 18 lines all i got time for... argh

* calamity = disaster for those that dont know .. as in his verse was a disaster... and im gonna drop him... cos its his name... lol.... ya dig?
n if you dont get my wordplay dont vote

uppin for some honest votes

Voted For: calamity

One- Flow Was Good, Multis Were Ok, And Some Ok Wordplay, Punches Hit But Not Very Hard....

Calamity- Flow was Decent, Punches Connected, Metaphors Were ok...

Punches- Calamity
Pesonals- Tie
Flow- One Man Band
Wordplay- One Man Band
Metaphors- Calamity
Originality- Tie
Structure- Tie

Final Vote- Calamity

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kronuz...

man me n calamity are both in the same crew as state... got any other battles?

true that^ another link would be coo... upping for some more honest votes

its str8.. its 4-0 anyway... if yah voted him it still wouldnt matter.. just wanna get it over with..

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Voted For: calamity

One-Man-Band
structure is pretty good.. flow is on target.. u had tight multis.. wordplay was tight.. a few of ur punches connected.. decent personals..

Calamity
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was alright.. most of ur punches connected.. personals were tight..

Overall
One-Man-Band had more multis.. as well as better wordplay.. both had a good structure.. as well as a stable flow.. Calamity had more connecting punches, as well as better personals.. and seein as punches and personals r more important then multis and wordplay.. Calamity gets my vote..

VOTE - CALAMITY

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.

^ i'll hit one of those in a lil bit.. might be later ontonight.. gotta work today..

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

damn this is a hard battle to vote on. ill verses from both first of all. but i gotta give this one to omb for the simple fact of consistency. calamity i thought i was readin the verse that finally merked omb until i hit the bar just after the "blonde to black dicks" line. u fell from ill to just average at that point in the battle. omb was ill all the way through even though the calamity line was pretty damn weak. not as many multis this time omb but u made up for it with punches. oh and calamity, some of those lines werent true. the line bout no-shoin and sayin that he spits paragraph style were both false so that lost u points too. ok no hate but damn this was a good battle. -1-

Voted For: calamity

Gotta give it to Cal here coz his verse jus teared O-M-B up...wordplay...multies...dawg struc to me was good...punches and personals erything was there man props to ya dawg...

O-M-B came well but i have seen better from ya...it was a bit of a let down i really didn't see much of them trade mark multies which was dissapointing to me...u elevated a hell of a lot on this site don't get me wrong but on this occasion u got beat.

Oh RTF on ma sig..................................

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Voted For: calamity

I gotta give my vote for ...calmaity..i think ur just came out more stronger..and had some good worplay...some good multies..and some good...sturc...nice strong meaning to the stuff.....had a few personals used againist you but i think ur still stayed stronger..iight nough sayed...iight out