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Raw Killa vs LyrikalGladiator
Battle Rules:
5 - 10 barz No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Dickriding No Feeding 3 Straight Votes for a K.0. 5 Votes for a Win Blind Spits Check in and drop. Minimum posts to vote: 3 Check in by: 08-07-04 at 10:25 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 10:31 AM.
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LyrikalGladiator has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 01:34 PM.
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lyrical gladiator da name fits him,cuz da only swords he swingin is "sharp" pens,raw killa challenged 2 anotha battle again tryin 2 prove betta than them
mic's r replaced every time itouch it cuz i kill da mic,while niggaz like lyrical gladiator mistake'em 4 dildo's cuz he's a dike, da type,puttin chrome on da trainin wheels of his bike,claimin his ride is tight,infect n get unda his skin like rabbid dog bites im stickin c4 in dis bitches stomach n grant his wish of bein all ova da streets,n da only thing shinnin in dis niggaz mouth is my piece clenched tight in hi teeth,sneez im sick when da triggaz released,splatter his jaw n everything near out his fuckin cheeks,but dats how i do it round here like memphis bleek,im sry bout how abnoxious my pistol is when it speaks lyrical is lyrically inclined,so here dog its kool take a bite of mine,at least u can truly read it n weap at da battle's startin line,i give words black eyes when i "punch" a-line,only time,dis nigga comes close 2 "bark-in" is when he writes on "pine" battlin me is like aids n white blood cells,winnin will neva happen,ya rhymes r 2 weak 2 rely on rappin,drop ya pen n step away from da mic,save ya self from bein murdered 2nite n jus listen 2 da dj in da back scratchin,cuz condoms da only thing u w-rappin |
damn anotha no show wtf?
lmmao K-----------------------------------------------O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
man fuck it im grounded and shit but whatever
after this battle, tell me how it feels to be MURKED by a "newb" its funny how you claim veteran but..as a newb im betta than you /1 check yourself dude....callin me new-b......ur just hatin this nigga ouldnt spit fire if he traded vocal cords wit SATAN /2 fuck waitin.....my rhymes have ur head spinnin like Daytinz I'll have this nigga finsihing second like his name was Clay Aiken / 3 nigga fakin.......you shoulda just stayed solemn cas ur small compared ta me, like ur loss to ur win column /4 u couldnt rhyme hot it u were "on fire" like Lloyd Banks.....so u try to use gun fire but ur so weak ur "n-spired" to "spit blanks" / 5 usa "damn shame"....wit a damn "weak name"......niggaz record shoulda told him that he dont belong in this "rap game" /6 Votes Please |
Voted For: raw killa
yo sry to say but Lyrikal u alsmost had it but u lsot it dawg, yo good battle to both of u i liekd both of ur verses, Raw Killa- yo u had da flo and da punches, they came ahrd and hit directly, ur flo was on tact and u neva lost track of ur opponet Gladiator-yo verse was hard and well planned but yo vocab was a lil off dawg u have to get more beta wit yo vocab and also yo strcutre was off i cudnt figure out line from line n sumtimes u dint evn ryhme, but good battle yall, v/Raw Killa yo hit up my new battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140877 honest votes |
finally he post wut ya grounded for?
lmmao i dont need a battle record 2 kno im hot n by da way nigga....im on anotha site 2 dats in da top 50 rap sites in da world.... n oh my 3rd day i made mod......n got my own crew startin holla back nigga good luck |
ight thaz coo.....i was just battlin
and im grounded from tha comp cas i got a virus and my parents freaked...but its gone now and im still grounded so goodluck to u too |
uhhhh...how were his punches that good.....all he talked about was me being a dike
and dum shyt like that....thaz bullshit kid......his struc was wrose than myne (i think) but w/e a votes a vote |
no hatin but u crazy if u think ur punches were betta but let da rv people's b da voters of dat now come on rv holla wit sum votes honest 1 peace uppin^^^^^^^^^
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^^^^how tha fuck am i crazy fa sayin ur punches were weak....they were
and i only saw 2 maybe 3....u were talkin bout gunz and blowiin my head off and sexuality and shit what tha fuck is that???? but w/e think as u may UPPPIN fa SOME GOD DAMN VOTES! |
Voted For: raw killa
Gotta go with raw on this one... lyrical gladiator:your flow was nice,vocab lil basic but ok, structure was kool, punches and personals were decent, opener was weak,closer was better raw killa : flow was nice,punches and personals hot, vocab was cool, opener and closer were both real good, ur structure can be better tho... Drop honest vote back plz: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141273 |
"lyrical gladiator da name fits him,cuz da only swords he swingin is "sharp" pens,raw killa challenged 2 anotha battle again tryin 2 prove betta than them"
ayt i kno ya'll heard of da pens made by sharp.....it was a good metaphor i should of explained it but yea his name is lyrical gladiator hence why i did dat line think of it.... sry dude u think i didnt have good punches we'll do a re-battle after dis but uppin dis bitch thanx 4 da honest votes peace |
Voted For: LyrikalGladiator
aiight nice battle but LyrikalGladiator got this for better punch lines and his opener was decent but the closer sucked Total for Lyrikal: 65/100 Total for Rawkil: 55/100 Lyrikal also had better structure vote in return in my battles wit an HONOST vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i hope these arent dick riders homie cuz i had mor punches,multi's n metas than u did
if u peeps cant read my verses u need contacts or glasses one of da 2.... im in anotha site dats outta da top 50 best rap sites in da world.....been there 4days n im already a moderator n leader of my own crew plus niggaz feelin me so ya'll jus...i dunno uppin dis bitch for honest votes NO HATIN OR DICK RIDIN VOTES |
Voted For: raw killa
yo i think raw got this cos i honestly think he had laods of multies and had harder punches...Gladiator...hating dosent rhyme with satan..not that much that was a gd personal but not tight...both had a tight structure but as raw had laods of multies that gives him a plus...props to both & this battle was a tie... |
Voted For: raw killa
good ..good its flow is perfect everything is good. |
thanx 4 da honest votes rv keep'em comin dis shit is a close battle good luck homie peace uppin dis shit
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true
the battle was at its most with raw cause he had a good openin and grat endin and he had more power to his words that i could see. :thumbup:
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
okay dude stop swyin votes n shyt
i mean how u goona xplain while their voting and shyt XXX u dint read it right it says HATIN-SATAN which rhymes just fine (hay-tin/say-tin) damn |
Voted For: LyrikalGladiator
lyrikal got this with better punches n way betta structure n flow...//this has ta go though,da slash is annoyin as hell... raw killa...weak verse,seriously you need ta get betta format in ya verse..you stretch your lines way 2 long n some of it is jus garbage"no punch"n this aint a hate vote,so don't take it like that you jus got beat by a better verse.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
i have a hard tyme ta believe that
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^^all your lines were stretched ta shit.....get me the link of this other site i wanna see you as a mod n leader"seriously"get me the link....prove you aint bullshittin... |
Voted For: LyrikalGladiator
LyrikalGladiator dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is alright, i dont know why u switched it up at the end.. flow fell off a little due to the switch.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty dope.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal.. raw killa structure is ass.. all of ur lines are stretched.. flow fell off due to the stretchnes.. tight multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals... Overall raw killa had more multis.. neither had a good flow.. LyrikalGladiator had the better overall structure.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. LyrikalGladiator gets my vote.. VOTE - LYRIKALGLADIATOR |
lol better personals now i kno these r hate votes bitches dis nigga didnt have one personal on me fuckin ass wipes n my lines arent stretched either pussies quit ya fuckin hatin da link 2 da site is http://s3.-----------------/rapaddiction/index.php
hope ur faggots enjoyin ridin each other fuckin homo's im through dis sry faggot ass site niggaz here do nuttin but front,act tough n hate cuz sum1 betta than dem pussies uppin dis bitch 4 1 MORE FUCKIN HONEST NONE HATIN DICK RIDIN NONE CREW VOTE if u n e of those n i catch u im havin dis battle dq'd 4 breakin da rules peace |
Voted For: raw killa
raw had some good wordplay and creativity...especialy towards da end. lyrikal needed better structure... but his got better near the end too...overall though, raw's verse won Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
its been like 2-4 days since dis battle was won by me how da fuck it opened back up again wit 2 of my votes dq'd? yo dis site be on sum hatin shit fo reals ayt peeps honest votes no hatin or dick ridin n certainly no crew votes or bribe votes peace
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Voted For: raw killa
raw killa he had betta punches and ohters. personals raw multis raw structure raw punches raw flow raw vocab raw word play raw overall raw |
ty sum1 who understood my verse thanx 4 da vote holla back people jus 1 more so dis retarded battle will b closed peace ill return da favor wit honest votes 1 luv
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Voted For: raw killa
raw killa took it punches.personals.metas.vocab he won this str8 out elevate a lil bil lg but good job keep going |
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