fatlip32 vs Ice Pick
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 160

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 01:09 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

fatlip32 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 12:11 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 12:14 PM.

ok im new and this is my first battle im not sure how things work but here i go...
nevertheless im a dressed for the occasion
its number 32 now heres the situation
if the beat moves your feet then dont change the station
pack your packs cause we leaving on a permanent vacation!
wwwweeell im a disaster
a microphone master
put on the tape ill rock u ghetto blaster
its not about the money,cars,hotels,or resorts
its about sweatin all the bitchs in the bikershorts
thats it,9 lines your turn 2 spit

I'll make this post the ONE you'll Never-Forget~
Cuz this SyniKIll BAstard HANDED YOU ANOTHER L...and RAPED THIS bitches-TEXT!~
Better-Yet...get tha Vaseline, cuz ya Chances of "Beating Me" are BETTER-IN-BED!

Finisher the Newb
~you aint "Seein True Dopeness" not even if i planted "Weed in ya Eyes"~
My Text IS DEATH....Read it and Die!!!~
Im "Beating ya Lines" like i was masturbating on "Movie Scripts"~
you aint "Moving SHIT" Im just about threw with abusin this bitch...
U rip-mine? ill take u from inc-lined to de-clined to flat-lined then chalk-lined>>>$
My assault-rymes, neva been de-‘feeted’, I walk-fine…spittin bullets LIke I got cocked-lines,,>>>!


Read these lines and be prepared to be 'severly-astonished' cuz to 'be-honest' ur mind couldnt duplicate a flow this ill even if u had a disease as 'your-accomplice' to help u "write-it-n-drop-it"...
Lost it kid u were never on 'my-level' to begin with so why test something this 'in-credible'(incredible) when I chew ur rhymes up as I make ur "lines-n-skill-edible"...

what does no recycling and no biting mean?also when do we find out who wins and how?

No biting means KNOW STEALING RAPS FROM OTHER WEBSITES AND USING THEM AS YOUR OWN,,,,,,,,


No recycling means you cant use a verse that you already used befor, or if a battle is closed for a NO SHOW, you can not re use a verse

PEOPLE WILL VOTE AND YOU WILL KNOW

u there?

o thankx

so whos ya favorite rapper?

what happens if no one votes then who wins?

Voted For: Ice Pick

No reason to break down lines

Ice Pick0Crappy Rhyme Scheme on your opener...but you had punches, which is more than i can say for fatlip32

fatlip32-You had no punches...no metas..no multis..no personals...structure was off at times and a messed up flow....you definitely need to elevate...noting your lack of punches, maybe you'd make a better topical battler

Voted For: Ice Pick

Fat lipp......MERKED.Nice trie though lol. Ice pick merked yo ass . You supposed to get on tha dude not talk about no dam
bitches in biker shorts. Anyway Ice Pick had dis shit hands down. FLow was better(way better) Wordplay was good(fat lip yours was aiight). Personals iguess ice wit tha noob jokes.Opener Closer...Ice pick jus had dis shit. Nice try though fatlip.keep elevatin
Ice pick/vote

fatlip32, what your doing now is freeposting, that can get you banned, so i suggest if you want to ramble on about pointless subjects PM someone...and Ice Pick..please return the favor with honest votes on

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140169

uppin...will return the favor....drop links.......
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

hey uhhh.... fatlip.... you reading this?... come closer... a lil closer... you see this real good now, right? DON'T EVER TYPE NO SHYT LIKE THAT EVER AGAIN IN THIS SITE!!! This is a battle not a 1979 Kurtis Blow lip syncing contest. I wasn't really impressed by ice pick's verse...until I read yours... you are supposed to rag on ya opponent... diss him... shyt on his name, his game, whatever...anything but what you just did.

wwwweeell im a disaster
a microphone master
put on the tape ill rock u ghetto blaster...

what the fuck, chuck!!! LMAO/ROTFL/CTFU

Ice... you got this hands down... just off the strength that you actually went at ya opponent... you had a few punches... ya lines were stretched all over the place... added a few multi's... work on ya word play and word usage...

v/ice pick... funny ass battle...i gonna put this line in my sig:

wwwweeell im a disaster
a microphone master
put on the tape ill rock u ghetto blaster

CTFU!!!
*don't have enough posts...sorry ice pick*

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AY ice i voted but forgot tha link

Vote on dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140697
or dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140636

uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

uppin...will return the favor....drop links.......
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uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

Voted For: Ice Pick

Structure - fatlip, damn ice pick! work on your stucture a little cuz, you have stretched lines every where..
Flow - , i mean, it's hard to differentiate, they were a tie..
wordplay.. ice pick got the wordplay because his rhyme scheme wasn't all that basic as fatlips was..
punches - Ice Pick, he atleast had some, fatlip didn't have any..
opener - Ice Pick came a little harder..
closer - I didn't get fatlips, so i'll give it to Ice Pick

overall ice pick has more experience and it shows.. tho he lacked stucture he had punches and wordplay that kinda ate fatip, so my vote goes to you ice pick.. 1

return favor with a drop in my battle too plz.. thanx, here it is..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141553

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Voted For: Ice Pick

massacre massarcre this nigga got murked
yo thats like throwing a lamb to a lion
this nigga devoured em, fatlip caught a fatlip!!!!
yo im next fa u fatlip i need a win!
nah seriously if thats ya 1st battle damn talk about a lesson
better now than latter though
every category to ice
vote honest my shit is self explained
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