neva new it would turn dis way ft. emerginmc07
 

raw killa ft. emerginmc07

(cell fone rings...i pick up)
(girl)-hey baby how r u?
(me)-im good mami how bout u?im on my way home...
(man's voice in back ground)cum back 2 bed...
(me)-wtf who was dat u....?cheatin on me....?
(girl)no wut r u tlkn bout?
(man's voice)-c'mon baby fuck dat dude
(me)-him dat guy bitch u cheatin on me?
(girl)-no its not like dat calm down
(me)-no bitch u calm down ima !?@!#!!?!? u n him up bye

(dial tone)(tires squeel)

yo u kno wut i hate....?

stupid lyin,cheatin,frontin bitches,u kno y? cuz all bitches is hoes.....

-hook-raw killa

i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva meant 2 have
ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish now u neva did wut u did dat day/

verse-raw killa

its was a saturday evenin i was comin home 4 work,came in da house heard ya screams from
twirkin wit sum otha jerk,so i grabbed my gat n went 2 work,shot u both dead 2 relieve
da hurt,burien memories i use 2 cherish 6 ft unda da earth,its cuz it was 2 weeks afta our
daughters birth,so many twist n turns n da plot gets worse,secrets r opened wit words dat
burst,ya apitite 4 truth n quinch ya thirst,da cold heart of a young man who feelin's hurt/

didnt have ya ring,but da vibe was closely similar 2 da thing,meanin wut rings represent,
4 those heaven sent,bent on bended knee's askin ur hand while heavenly angel's sing/

like we werent yet married,but our vows were already made n buried,where da ears in da wind
took wut our voices carried,n kept locked in da cemetary/

now like i said i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva
meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet now u wish u neva did wut u did
dat day,n like jay-z wut more can i say,those tears of pain r kept locked away,swallow my pride
4 a minute n cry tears neva cried sendin messagges only tears can say,was time was it? wut was
da day,oh yea sorta like a metaphor of ur souls freedom it was.....july 4th...independence day,
im sry baby girl i didnt want shit 2 turn out dis way,i neva meant 2 buy dis gat 2 spray,neva
meant 2 have ur family on they knees in tears 2 pray,n i bet u wish u neva did wut u did dat day/

the roses were red da violets were blue,like ya runnin blood was red,ur bodies color slowly
turned 2 blue,permant break up,wit no more make up through n through,was i crazy or am i in
love who knows da screamin true-th,spend my las hour da only left alive 2 answer des mysteries
wit his gun cocked in his mouth sittin on da roof,wit my gun da mic n da world my booth,leave
tainted lies 6 ft. entangled in roots,wit a note on her parents door step declarin da truth,
bury myself beside u pull da trigger n shoot,now both our trapped spirits r loose,n love's
mysteries become 1 n life blooms anew a truce,roses r red n violets r blue.....

-hook-

-verse2-emerginmc07

yo man bithces can play these games o well mine learned
ey yo- yo

gave her my heart n love, gave me a kiss den turned round n gave my frend a hug,
to busy lookin at her dint look up, 2 weeks lata i found she and my frend fucked,
it was love i thought, we fought, so she sought, n wen she got caught, it was me n my 9 i brought,
we screamed she tried bein nice, i hit ha across da hed n den did it twice,
she cheated, i was mistreated, felt like i was defeated, so i was heated, so i shot her n den repeated, lets jus say our relationship then was deleted,
fuck da bitch evrythin she got she deserved, they alredy had her tombstone and coffin reserved, if only i dint have to witness and observe, o well her punishment was served,
she dint undastand wat i felt, n she neva helped, at first i pittied myself, but fuk her she found sum1 else, i had her by her hair n she knelt, n den her cards were delt,
now i cant jus forgt bout da hoe, cus u no, i can let go, she played me 2 times in a row, y did i keep goin back? i duno,
yo u shdua seen wen her body was found, it was half buried unda ground, wen i was doin it i wasnt lookin round, n i guess a niehbor heard a sound,
cops came i dipped, her body was flipped, she was stripped, her back whipped, n they found out her tites were clipped,
they cudnt find da trace, no1 saw my face, its a closed case, da murderer got away wit out a trace,
yo man my final thought is, if u a bitch who cheats read dis, i dont give a fuck who u r or if i hurda u, if i fidn out u cheated on sum1 i no i will personally murda u

yo people dont sleep read n tell us wut u think hey yo emergin nigga its posted peep it help me up it...lol.....holla back nigga n niggets peace i luv holla back^^^^^^^^^^^

damn man, that's powerful. i think its good stuff. i'm new, but here's what i was thinkin. i like how u flow all through your verses, and i like the last verse too, but its def a different kinda flow. u don't rhyme at the end (it was love, i thought, we fought...), and it kinda threw me off at first, but i think it can show more power. sounds like u thought stuff out well, nice job.

cool drop therre........some serious shit.........gd gd.........flow was tight and rhymes were tight too.....keep it p

ty 2 f8thfull21 n xxxtayve 4 da love n feedback keep givin damn em wher eu at?...lol hell me prote dis...lol shit hot must read rv holla back will return da favor^^^^^^^^^
uppin dis shit^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

k besides my 2 replies uppin dis shit there's been 2 replies outta 19 u fuckin lazy ass peeps betta start leavin feedback we wanna kno wtf u think n quit sleepin,hatin w/e ya'll do n return da fuckin favor lazy punks uppin dis shit peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

sounds real and powerful. but it's good.

ayt rv im upppin dis shit peep it n leave feedback 4 christ sakes peace

damn...that was hot. got pretty intense at times...but good shit. and yea the way u was rhymin was different but hey it worked

hey lil kay holla at me on yahoo need 2 tlk bout shit...u kno wut i mean holla n thanx 4 da love peace mami uppin dis joint^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

"wit my gun da mic and the world my booth" that was one of my favorite sentences. nice drop. very clear and detailed. i like this. now ya'll just need some audio equip to start doin that. nice

that is.... the words and how they rhymed but still fit in, was beautiful. i like this a lot.

ty 4 da love n respect ladies now niggaz ya'll gonna show sum luv?holla ack peace

yo i was feeling that good drop i heard you spit some trash but not here that was hot to death you need better vocab but good fucking drop fo sho :thumbup:

n e 1 thinks i eva dropped n e thing less than perfection in its own art is fuckin hata but thanx 4 da love caliph holla back rv quit sleepin feedback need n wanted uppin
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yo wdup doeee ive bena way man but im back we uppin dis shit man, yo raw i like yo verse dawwwg dam dis whole shit is hot i told u it wud b, but ne way more feedback dawg lets go, iite 1 love

yo dawg yal stop bein so goddam lazy let us no wat yall think bout it dam man shit, iite 1 love

yo man Killa wat is rong wit dese ppl?, yo Rv lets go gie us sum luv, ill return da favor, lets go

yo c'mon people give us feedback peace

c'mon rv peep dis shit holla back at us 1 luv peace uppin dis bitch ^^^^^^^^^^^^

i knew damn well i wrote dat verse 4 a reason n if questions aint answered there will b a remix but i wont b so kind dis time holla back people leave ya feedback especially u n u kno u r............... :nono: :banghead: :cussing:

*Groans*

Ughhh, this isn't a roleplay site.

nigga dont hate we good wt story tellin in out raps holla back wit real feedback plz peace

yo merks, who da fuck is u?, u no da shit was fire! u jus hatin like most da mutha fuckas on da site, yo u shud peep r otha collabo cus its bout ppl like U, ne way we uppin for sum more feedback

Shit Was Hot When U Was Spittin I Could See It Goin Down In My Head
U Painted A Picture For The Readers Which Is Hard Shit To Do
U Got My Props On Dis One Keep It Up

ty 4 da respect n love stainless c'mon peeps leave us feedback

yo u peeps gonna show sum love or wut tell us wut ya'll think peace

RAW KILLA THIS WAS NICE FRO REAL DAWG IT MADE ME WANNA SPIT SO HERE

I’m just a label on a bottle but able to throttle medicine
Proper like a doctor, describe pain pills for the lame and ill
Take one a day to keep the fakes away in the game no thrill
Like Cupid let my arrows rip down a narrow strip hoping
To fall in love I’m tall thug that ball in the club but sloping
Down a hill bounds don’t build up to success

thanx 4 da reply nigga keep'em comin rv peace

yo lets go keep da luv flowin we need to no wat yall think on this, hit us up

if u newbies liked our las callabo peep dis shit n quit sleepin 4 real

sure is...shit was deep, dope, and i can relate to snake ass bitches like that...nice drop yall...holla at me for another collab!!

I checked enough of your flow out to know you have nice talent.
However, what is up with the intro? First of all, that woman in the intro could NOT be black that you're on the phone with because there would be NO such thing as,"No it's not like that, calm down" after you've called her a bit#h. lol Depending on how mature/immature she is, you might have not even been able to type this cuz she wouldda chopped yuh bloodclaat fingers off!

it was an intro goin in 2 da song wasnt suppose 2 b a black gurl i do dat my own race...white chicks ya kno...even though darker is better in my opinion...lol but thanx 4 da love but u should kno how intro's work

yo this was tight man nice shit keep droppin that real and strong shit...

LOL Okay then..

Yes I know how intros work, but I also know how they suck when they are just totally farfetched; it sets a terrible pace for the actual song/rhyme no matter how good it is because depending upon the effect the intro has (postive or negative to a person), it determines whether or not that person will even give the song a listen.

But that is general advice and it is to, in no way, take away from the talent I see that you have.