MaNiPuLaTiOn vs intensify effect
 

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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 08:51 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 08:54 PM.

ima beat this guy like his sig...leave you "lyrically-abused"...
knock u out like mike tyson..cos you 2 are yesterdays news..
this like a funeral battle..and you the one laid to rest..
u forgot ya vest, leave u more lost than pandoras chest..
i got u turnin ya back..runnin,lookin scared like ya avatar..
aint no gangster,only time u seen chrome..is on a passin car..
your style lifeless..you couldnt blossom growin on a tree..
cos way u rhyme,u blinded like stevie wonder u cnt see..
now your battle records gonna stand at 5 wins ta ten...
eat-ya-words..wit all tha shit u drop,u makin it a pig-pen..


sum quik shit.uppin

lets go.....
u'r a fuckin joke.......

i'm laugh'in hard cuz ya toilet flow got me shitt'in
since u win quick battles, with all ya pre-writeen

u gonna wish u never meet me, pose'in all sleezy tempting
putting on ya boxser backwards for a easy entery *fag*

i know u'r type to write the hype, but u'r TO-SOFT
N only aim to"cum-hard", if rut-pual was a taget .... dip-in-FRUIT-SOUCE

plus i'll skeem with a caucasian, that'll leave u cought-N-caged-in
with punches blaze'in, that'll collaps ya flow, brake'in ya rib-cage-in

plus im use to shoting at big-heads, like shells for gillatine
with the mac-milla-beam,
u'll be a dead-dirctor the way im'a kill the sceen

BANG BANG early...

uppin............................................. .....

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Intensify had a good opener but that was about it... the flow started to stretch and the punches and personals...if any... were soft and played... a lil multi action going on but nothing that really impressed me...tempting and entry don't rhyme...

Manip...Nice first line but the second weakened it...punches were played but they made more sense and were better formulated than Intensify's. structure was better here... no multi's...

both need to work on wordplay and punches... personals, too.

Manipulation did enough to pull this one out... keep elevatin', y'all

upp'in............................................ .......

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Intensify-instead of starting to make shit up you should get your facts straight...one manip is a femcee...which totally fucks your whole wack verse over so thats what ya get for not doin your home work

Manip-Good structure n flow wit constant punches....and at least you didnt mistake him for a femcee like he mistook you for an emcee...maybe he didnt notice the title under your name that says princess of rv?

Vote:Manip better structure flow n punches....and since intensify didnt get his facts straight...his drop didnt make much sense

forgot to add

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dag, fucking shit....

i did fuck up.....

haha my fult....

fuck it i aint all here tonight, my girl got me piss we had a big argument,
now im high..

and im just fucking up....

oo-welll

i will battler her again and make it a sight to see.....l

your gonna have to...cuz its all wacked out wit her bein a fem n all

return teh favor intensify..holla

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

MaNiPuLaTiOn won thys match son no doubt... he had lyrics and punchlines that stuck out better

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

damn guurl you been elevating
this goes to manipu for a beter verse and nice good pnuches
not good personals. you structure is good and so is your flow
I.E your was ok but you need sum elevating

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uppin............................................,

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

imma start with I.E., wackest i ever seen you come...wow!!!, your flow was not on point, it wasnt handlin, and choppy with messed up structure*elevate*...on the positive note, besides all the mess up's, you had a couple good punches, and rhymes in your flow, but i think there were too many predictable lines, and thats wat did it for you, too easy

manipulation: nice flow, nice structure, and you had some good punches and multies in there that i seen, *good shit*, you need to work on your rhyming also, the only difference about your and his, is that your was clever, and you worded it right...*elevate on that*, lookn at the end of each line, the last words are similiar, that could hurt u in other battles, but *good flow*

overall: ya'll both need to elevate...work on your rhymings, and stick to your points, to many *personal* changes could hurt you

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

dis to me was a close battle, ut maniuplation wun dis one, he had better flow, structure, no streched lines and all dat other shyt

vote: dis guy

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Voted For: intensify effect

yo i dont like intensify but yo son he def got this win hes punches and flow is what did it MAN u did ya thing but i thought intensify just drop harder

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

ok:
manipulation; ya verse was good,nice flow and structure, ya wordplay is good here too, i liked ya opening bar,and i thought the chrome line was clever, nice job...
intensify:ya verse was good too, but ya structure was off a bit tho which made it not flow right, but overall was an ok verse, both had good punches, but ima have to give this to :
manipulation~because of flow and harder punches

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Manip won this with better punches. I liked the one line "Only time you see chrome is on a passin' car". Both had good structure and style though, yet intensify's verse sounded like he was battling a man. Well, he was sorta...Man-ipulation, haha. Anyway, this was a close one, but keep doin' ya thing. Manip, holla at ya boy for a collab sometime...
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