killlah vs Degreez
 

Battle Rules:

8-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r
ya know the deal

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 11:43 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Degreez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 11:14 PM.

killlah has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 11:18 PM.

Ya chances are slim, you'll be shakin and rattled-
Yo 'Bio' says 'Gunna', 'Gunna' fuck up this battle-
I just met ya punk ass and im already sicka ya-
You dont want none of D, even your 'crew's' 'No Affilia'-
Your rhymes are wack, Betta retract ya flow yo-
I can understand for 'Battle Record' you put don't show-
You wishin i aint dissin you that hard, put ya in submission-
I can see that you from 'NC' that means No Competition-
You say you from 'Ruff Raleigh', the 'Ruff' is a fluke-
The last fight there was a Tarheel vs. a Duke-
Im illin and im chillin, send my dogs out to sick em-
Yo claim to be a killah, but you'll always be the victim

Most of this shit in qutoes is from his profile located here:
http://community.rapverse.com/member.php?u=34417

alright your turn

You know I aint playin wit you cus this battles a lil heated
Im past 900 degreez nigga so be like mike and just beat it
I dont know you man you just a cat tryin to rip
to cut me up dog you gotta hit below the hip
Im known though out for flippin bitches like you
So if I was you I would stop typin cus you have no clue
Dude? Bitch? whatever you are yyou still get shited on
so be gone - lil bitch for i throw you in a gay club to get hit on

uppin for some votes. Leave a link and ill holla back at you

I would like to tell everybody that im sorry for this shit cus its definitly not hittin up. this chick breathin down my neck and shit and im all worried bout the time limit and shit. Go easy dont hate on it too much. uppin

yppin for sum votes people................ lets get this done with

uppin

uppin this shit drop a link and ill return the favor

Voted For: Degreez

this battle has to go to Degreez/Malak... he had much better punches and funnier personals. tha flow wasnt that good in either tho... Killlah, that gay club line killed you... it was terrible

return tha favor please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139297 me vs. goats
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139693 me vs. reloaded
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139502 me vs. mc xplicit

Voted For: Degreez

that beat it part it Killah's is so played already!!!!! fuck that plagarizim bitch.

uppin for some votes, drop a link ill repay the favor

uppin for some votes drop a link and ill return the favor

Voted For: Degreez

this battle was neck and neck, ya'll came at each other throat with this one, and thats wut i like, a good battle...malak: had some hard punches in there, but i dont like your style...you fell off in alot of places, but i think thats good for elevation...you had more personals, which was a big up in the battle

killah: your flow was choppy, it didnt make since in some areas, but you picked it up near the end, but it was a lil too late...remember intro is bout 70% of your vote, the way u come into the flow, the voter might wunna read more, and will know wut u talkn bout

overall: both need to keep practcing and elevate...this was coo, but i feel it could be better

uppin

Voted For: Degreez

malak gets this easy
flow mal
struc mal
metas mal
punches mal
good verse killa but mal gotit
vote honest
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139957

sorry i fucked up on name my fault its too late
degreez not malak

uppin to finish this up, drop a link and ill repay the favor

uppin for one more vote

uppin drop a link and ill return the favor

Voted For: Degreez

Malak - nice, good flow and excellent structure, very good wordplay, multis and rhymes, i liked this verse a lot, sweet punches

Killah - way to much self glorifying, had some good ideas but there wasn't really that hard of punches and your flow wasn't as good as malaks...

flow n structure - malak
punches - malak
wordplay - malak

v/malak