Shabba Ranks vs Triple_N
 

Battle Rules:

6-16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Shabba drops first in 45 mins
Triple follows 45 mins after his drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 12:09 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ah'ight I am waiting for shabba's check in now.............

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:20 AM.

Shabba Ranks has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:35 AM.

Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
This kids soft, ill give him a punch to his gut and puncture his insides...
And i wouldnt be his friend online...cuz he Literally Dickrides*...
You not on my level, so you better proceed with caution...
I run through kids like you, and raise the bar like polevaulting...
This dudes a bitch, Ill hand him a loss, then ill hand em some clips...
And when he got cum on his lips, is the only time he talkin slick...

blah...blah...blah....hes a gay escort......

this is gay, why cant i see his verse...gay shit...upppppp

Ah'ight here we go

Ya garbage and whats worse is u didn't write dat
So u can't fight back, cuz you also bite wack
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
You'll be here all alone still doing ya shitty spittin'
Foreva losin' cuz our obituaries will still be betta written
Ya rhymes rightful place is in bedpans and bathroom stalls
Shabba Ranks new theme song is Hey!! peptobismol
Your a fakin' jamaican that can be taken anyday
Only way u jamaican is if ya 1st name's ray and last is gay(reggae)
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text

Voted For: Triple_N

yo this goes to triple n

triple-u had a nice verse,i didnt see to much personals but u had nice punches man funny also,ur structure looked okay,and u flowed allright,u had some nice creativity in ya verse also

shabba-u had a weird verse ,ur punches were okay but kinda newbish i werent feelin them,ur structure was ok,and u flowed ehhh i guess okay,but u loose this one cuse u came a lil simple in ur verse

triple-n

Uppin for some honest well explained votes............

up, up, up again..........................................

Voted For: Triple_N

tripple N won this for sure he had the best witten out punches for this whole match up in da battle. I like his flow I was feeling it more he had better word play out there and multies used. The other verse was okay but tripple N was the best in my opinion.

Uppin for honest votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Votes plz!!!!!!

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Uppin for votes y'all come on now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Triple_N

good battle for both of you....

Shabba Ranks - good drop..you have a solid structure and you had a good flow in your verse, you had some good punches and peronals in there, and some allright wordplay.

Triple_N - wicked flow through-out the whole verse, welly done structure...good multis with your punches to give you good wordplay. and you also had some good personals

flow and structure - tie
punches and personals - triple n
wordplay and multis - triple n

v/triple n

drop an honest vote on this battle please (punchline)
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140992

sorry for this post, link didn't show up for some reason on last post...this is just a punchline battle could you guys please drop an honest vote on it....

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140992

Voted For: Triple_N

Vote-Triple N
u had punches dat really did damage to shabba...u lacked in personals but u booth great......Shabba u wuz missing personals n ur punches were weak

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^^hate.

D-Blue..that is a hate vote man, i saw the cheating thread

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

open- Triple N
close- Shabba Ranks
personals- Shabba Ranks
metas- Triple N
punches- Triple N
multis- Shabba Ranks

win- Triple N

I liked his verse better especially the pepto bismol line. his verse was more interesting to me. no love lost for the 2 of you tho

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okay dont pay attention to that post above me. especially who they think i voted for, my vote is for triple n. triple n has my vote!

Voted For: Triple_N

Ya garbage and whats worse is u didn't write dat
So u can't fight back, cuz you also bite wack
^DECENT OPENER
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^OK COULD'VE BEEN WRITTEN CLEANER
You'll be here all alone still doing ya shitty spittin'
Foreva losin' cuz our obituaries will still be betta written
^DECENT PUNCH
Ya rhymes rightful place is in bedpans and bathroom stalls
Shabba Ranks new theme song is Hey!! peptobismol
^NICE..FUNNY PUNCH
Your a fakin' jamaican that can be taken anyday
Only way u jamaican is if ya 1st name's ray and last is gay(reggae)
^OK PERSONAL
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^^OK..CLOSER NOTHIN SPECIAL

Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^NICE FLOW..OK PUNCH
This kids soft, ill give him a punch to his gut and puncture his insides...
And i wouldnt be his friend online...cuz he Literally Dickrides*...
^DECENT PUNCH
You not on my level, so you better proceed with caution...
I run through kids like you, and raise the bar like polevaulting...
^WAS'NT FEELING THIS..POOR RHYME
This dudes a bitch, Ill hand him a loss, then ill hand em some clips...
And when he got cum on his lips, is the only time he talkin slick...
^^OK CLOSER..COULD'VE BEEN BETTER

overall im gonna go with triple n on this his punches connected better but some lines you played in both verses it would've been better if both had dropped the same amount of bars.........decent battle but it seemed like both came fairly weak.........
return the vote....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054

Voted For: Shabba Ranks

this battle was okay, i guess..

structure - tie
wordplay - toss up
punches - shabba
personals - shabba
overall - shabba


to me, shabba barley took this..

triple N, you verse was coo, your opener was alright but you started to drift off from there and go down hill.. your wordpla could of been better and none of your punches hit.. the one about ray gay was ok i guess, i just wasn't feeling it..

Shabba ranks you won basically coz of better lines. you both had the same stucture and rhymes so it came down to punchlines and i think that you got the better of him in that..
so I vote for Shabba Ranks..

Keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread with an honest drop will you? thanx, heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Uppin for some honest non hate^^ votes on this battle

...............^^^ill get to them links............

appreciated...

Voted For: Triple_N

^ur best lines were (Triple N) were:
Ya only chance to be best is to travel thru time
To rv 100 years from now when there are no opposin' rhymes
^ lmfao, altogether u had a nice structure and good flow plus every bar rhymed perfectly.. and u took the closer with:
So your wack and an exposed phony u must be hexed
Cuz u could be board of ed and still not distribute quality text
^really nice way to end the battle, good job!

Shabba Ranks- ur verse was good with punches, especially the opener:
Just checkin in i beat you, look how fast it took me...
Dude is a Bisexual Escort, but still cant get no pussy...
^nice punch to start off, you have nice multis throughout but some of your lines were stretched when u tried to make them rhyme.. and sumtimes they were stretched without rhymin'..

so with that feedback i give the win to: Triple N keepin' it consistent throughout, nice quick battle y'all.. peep my links aight, ~wun~