BANG vs String9487
 

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Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:14 AM

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BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:16 AM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:21 AM.

You can come hard but i feel you trying to sing
To get a win I might have to pull some strings
To think that you could win- you must be dreamin
sniffin that silly string really got you feenin
Im a quit playin with this bitch- dont get out of line
trying to diss me is easy- but can you do it in time
Afta I drop this bomb on this bitch-nigga its over
If you feeling me not then I guess I'll show ya
Rapverse told ya that im new but you fuckin wit a soldier
Cought him off guard wit the hook dog imma hold ya -/ clown really you cant win- so nigga put ya hands down/ I aint fuckin around wit this lame-so nigga dont speak my name/
Dont worry dog -this is a warning before the storm
This is just a sample of gettin ya ass torn.
Bang

try n shoot me but y a bullets dont hit that far
dis lil nigga get "broke off" like a kik-kat bar
i take ya girl as an extra-nighter
cuz she b blowin on me like a breathalizer
aint nuttin u can do to hurt me
n u couldnt find praise, not even in a church b
freeal, yo my life's revered
n u you gon last about as long as Vanilla ice career
i'll knock u off ya feet so u can barely stand
cuz bitch u dont BANG, u a family man
u get shit popped in u like the VCR, u get 3 feet scars
beware i burn MC's like CD-R's
u'll wind up on the nightly news,slightly bruised
u aint never met an MC quite like me dude
U say u packin, it betta b heat
BANG u sweet, wind up dead on Sesame Street
u can stay hard, in the Graveyard
ya face b all blue like Mel Gibson in Braveheart
step to me n u get blammed up promise
cuz ya rhymes a bigger joke than stand up comics HAAAAA

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Voted For: String9487

bang: good flow, nursery kinda in some parts, but altogether handlin in my opion...u did yo thing...u need to elevate on your rhymin and wordin, but u still hot

string: why u keep endin like that, but i gotta say, this was yo best endin i seen yet, finally u ended something like u began it..goood job, but...naw(thought i was gonna be stupid), yo flow was better thatn bang's...u had better wordin nad punches hit harder, and personals we more, didnt really see too many outta none ya'll...u had a lot of metas in there, i like the creativity...good shit

overall: this was neck n neck...onyl reason why string took it is cause his was un nuresery...and his , fuk it, overall flow was better...good battle

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Voted For: String9487

sTRING YOU GER MY VOTE.. YOUR SHIT WAS MORE CREATIVE, IT WAS ALSO MORE ENTERTAINING.. YOU HAD BETTER WORDPLAY ALSO, HIS RHYMES WERE A LITTLE BASIC AT TIMES.. YOUR PUNCHES HIT HARDER COZ THEY WERE MORE CLEVER AND COMPLEX, HE HAD A COUPLE OF PERSONAL, BUT THEY DIDN'T HIT THAT HARD.. SO BASICALLY YOU GET MY VOTE..

AYE CUZ, CAN YOU RETURN THE FAVOR WIT A DROP IN MY BATTLE? THANX CUZO,,

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Voted For: String9487

Ima have to vote for string on this one, altho i wasnt feelin all his rhymes he just brought it harder, he had some original lines but the rest were pretty basic, and bang pratically all your ryhmes were basic, i was feelin strings structure, but i wasnt feelin bangs, i thought string came harder in the beggining middle and really had a great finish, n Bang, you just needa elevate your game, so ima vote for String9487 n yo return the favor

people were complainig about the boxes in the battle not working just incase you tried to vote already, but it should be coo now.. here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Voted For: String9487

imma give this one to string cuz of just overall better verse but it was close. my fav lines from both of you:

String:U say u packin, it betta b heat
BANG u sweet, wind up dead on Sesame Street
BANG:To think that you could win- you must be dreamin
sniffin that silly string really got you feenin

but bang i can see u got the talent in u but i just dont think it showed up this time. no hate.
show sum honest vote love on the link below too

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This was feedback posted for String9487
 

vote/string
can't poll but i will when i get 20 post

strings took it cuz struc. and punches
bang had better flow
but not enough 2 win

good drop 4 both

now can u PLEEEEAAAAASSE return da favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141151

dis battle has been slept on soooo bad

it'll be bogus if u dont

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Voted For: String9487

lol..dis battle sucked...hahahaa... iight... string basicly beat u not only cuz his verse is long, but ur jst not as good...

string: iight.. he's not as good, but ur still not good... ur strucure is off, ur vocab is iight, n same wit ur punches, jst elevate a lil moore iight?

yo bang... your shyt was iight... your structure was way off, ur vocab is elementary, and your punches were not as strong, jst keep spittin n u'll do better

spit: string
punch: string
flow: none
vocab: string

vote string