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definatfully vs WestOakLaneKilla
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definatfully has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 07:03 AM.
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WestOakLaneKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 07:16 AM.
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hurry up check in cause im not about to waste my rhymes
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okay no feeding off my verse bitch
Owned one dude on tu tha next facin West-Oak-Lane-Killah all i heard from you is u the best-broke-lame-thrillah ill merk you then kill everyone from yo street G-M-F-B One by one all you see-is-em-deaf-emcees leave em speechless and quiet wit Nothing-to-say thinks hes ill well i guess hes just Bluffing-today dont think your gonna win with your rhymes Not-a-Chance cuz all i gotta do is take a shot-then-advance |
We both 0-0 but we ain't coo either, this is ya final inning and I'm tha pitcher relieva// I'm only battlin you once so you beta listen up, I'm gonna get rid of you like waste in a pissin cup, listen smut, you to easy for me so it looks like this missions up,// best believe I'm baken ya ass, I'm an anoconda you just a snake in tha grass, you late like tha past,if you was playin Jason then I must have taken tha mask, I'm waitin to blast// I'm from the east and from north to, I'm gonna treat like a fireplace and straight tourch you, smack while you sittin in ya crib or while you chillen on tha porch to, I bet that you even entered this battle is remorseful// best believe I'm real crazy wit it, so I keep my gun cocked low like Jay-Z fitteds...
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Lookin for votes. G.M.F.B. We here and we ain't leaven no time soon...
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nice.... good drop no hate eitha good battle
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This was feedback posted for definatfully
def's verse was good but I aint votin
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Voted For: WestOakLaneKilla
both these verses were pretty bad but if someones gonna win its westoak he came wit more punches and his punches were better there were no personals all in all it was a terrible battle but my votes goin to westoak |
Voted For: definatfully
Oh my god definatfully killed WOLK! definatfully's structure and rhymin was flowin mad good. He had mad good punches too. WOLK had some good punches but his structure was horrible. Work on your structure and don't talk bout Jay-Z no more. |
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Voted For: definatfully
give it 2 DEFINTFULLY cuz he had better structure battle was real weak no punches metas just based on flow vote on my battles DRAG~ON vs phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867 DON http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 r.i.p http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141250 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 1 |
Voted For: definatfully
west good flow but fix your struture your bars were ok but not strong work on punches.def good ass wordplay good closer but your wordplay one you this i like the bounce i catch from your shit and your punches connect also good struture |
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Voted For: definatfully
definafully took this one hands down with better punches and personals...oaklane. yo structure was fucked up, go elevate nad pracitce on that, but besides that, the things that i could understand i wasnt too much feelin em anyway...i dont like yo style, but you did have nice rhymes in some places...def. better wordplay and all that other shit overall: both need to elevate, only reason def. cause he went against someone easy, go challenege yourself...it works, good flow tho drop some HONEST votes and feedbac on the below battles |
going against someone easy? lol we did this battle when i first started
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Voted For: definatfully
westoaklanekillah - man i got lost and confused reading yours the structure was so wack.....come on man, flow was confusing...you threw punches but it was just wack man.... definatfully - not that strong either, ive seen stronger from you, but you had the structure and the flow, some allright punches...meh v/definatfully |
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