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Sinner vs MC RaBbIt
Battle Rules:
10-20 lines no hate, d/r, feed, bite, recyclin etc. . . either spit first, person whose 2nd drop 30 mins after. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-07-04 at 10:45 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. Sinner DQ'ed for PMing for votes: Quote:
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MC RaBbIt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 10:16 AM.
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Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 10:17 AM.
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i got myself a battle with a real ass "sinner"
im a noob, and i'll still eat him for dinner, if you accept this battle, you must be very brave, coz at the end of this, you'll be my slave, yow not an emcee, you just a little punk, i guess you think your a bit of a "hunk", but tha girls still reject you when they're drunk !, but that won't bother you, coz you like dick, you should put down the mic, and suk ya dad off, til his dick is sick !* when it comes to blow jobs, thats where you're a pro, you really know how to make cock juices flow !, just give up rap, and become a gay male slut, if you save your money, you can buy yourself a gay love hut, coz doing this would be keepin' up your families reputation, and surely, for you, thats a big enough temptation, lets compare that life to your current rapping career, in this your going nowhere, your status will never get past volunteer, but if you chose the life of a full-time queer, you'd be amazing, you might even become a broken dick engineer ! ok, so lets get this shit into the open, so that it's clear, after i beat you, you fuk off, and become a gay peoples pioneer ! * when your dad ejaculates. |
good luck man, i gotta go off for a bit, hurry up with ya verse though.. . . peace.
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mc rabbits a crack whore addict... the bitch is a fuckin faggot
you just got ya name from 8mile he gets pissed n can't take it the bitch thinks he's ruthless I punch him n make him toothless whos da duffus you just plain stupid and he thinks he's blessed I don't wanna be messed........ i'll have you hanged and drawn fucking torcher you to death..... n smash ur head wid a acorn i'm from england now welcolm .......to beef land i spit n u ran i'll destroy your beef plans and chop... you up like food spam bet you have no multies........ and if you did they'd be oldies ones that have been played and yours would gone off moldie Your punches are gonna be BOREDOME no votes r gonna come not for you or maby just a few cause all ya come backs r DUM your nothing but a shit spitter dats gone off and looks bitter when you tried fuckin ur bitch havin sex you dind't hit her lol your corny ass is stupid im wasteing twenty lines for ya mind at birth when u was born u shot out of ya mothers.... behind your lyrics couldn't effect me........ cause u can't rap cleverly you get energy burning you up and i'll destroy... ur personality last bar this took me quite a while now i g2 wait for ur shit pile or maby you think twice and give this up.... and run 100 miles |
Voted For: Sinner
punchs sin multi non person sin open sin close sin v/ sin |
mc i didnt like th3e end of yours because all the rhymes
sinner all your shit flows |
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Voted For: Sinner
this goes to sinner cuz he was more creative and had alotta multies.............. everythin rabbit sed was played out or not hard to come up with. and even tho rabbit was tryin to do punches, they juss werent workin at all and i wasnt feelin em........... this battle wasnt the greatest, and kinda close, but i think sinner definetely took it, i was juss feelin it alot more....... ur juss startin out rabbit, so u needa see how to work ur punchlines better and elevate......... |
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Voted For: Sinner
Nice flow....like the lil multis you threw in ther...fell me. but yeah your delivery was better nah mean? Holla baq. |
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Voted For: Sinner
this was one sided battle not really that much punches for either emcee but sinner took this.....with better personals |
Voted For: MC RaBbIt
Rabbit you come nice, when I saw the name I thought you was ganna be wack but you got skillz Gurl, The punchs hit hard and the flow was tight. Also the vocab was ill. Sinner I expected more from you man, all the training I gave you. Your still not rhyming son. Nice vocab but the punches didn't really hit hard coz I couldn't feel the flow. Stay up man and keep working... Vote ~ MC Rabbit |
I had alot of multies though upping...............
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Voted For: MC RaBbIt
mc rabbits a crack whore addict... the bitch is a fuckin faggot you just got ya name from 8mile he gets pissed n can't take it didnt rhyme to me the bitch thinks he's ruthless I punch him n make him toothless whos da duffus you just plain stupid and he thinks he's blessed dont get the rhyming I don't wanna be messed........ i'll have you hanged and drawn fucking torcher you to death..... n smash ur head wid a acorn better i'm from england now welcolm .......to beef land i spit n u ran i'll destroy your beef plans and chop... you up like food spam decent bet you have no multies........ and if you did they'd be oldies ones that have been played and yours would gone off moldie good Your punches are gonna be BOREDOME no votes r gonna come not for you or maby just a few cause all ya come backs r DUM nice your nothing but a shit spitter dats gone off and looks bitter when you tried fuckin ur bitch havin sex you dind't hit her lol lol nice line your corny ass is stupid im wasteing twenty lines for ya mind at birth when u was born u shot out of ya mothers.... behind LOL HAHAHAH!!! your lyrics couldn't effect me........ cause u can't rap cleverly you get energy burning you up and i'll destroy... ur personality dont get the rhyming last bar this took me quite a while now i g2 wait for ur shit pile or maby you think twice and give this up.... and run 100 miles nice closer total:55/100 i got myself a battle with a real ass "sinner" im a noob, and i'll still eat him for dinner, i seen this line before if you accept this battle, you must be very brave, coz at the end of this, you'll be my slave, good yow not an emcee, you just a little punk, i guess you think your a bit of a "hunk", but tha girls still reject you when they're drunk !, second line too stretched but that won't bother you, coz you like dick, you should put down the mic, and suk ya dad off, til his dick is sick !* nice when it comes to blow jobs, thats where you're a pro, you really know how to make cock juices flow !, sounds like your gay just give up rap, and become a gay male slut, if you save your money, you can buy yourself a gay love hut, no comment coz doing this would be keepin' up your families reputation, and surely, for you, thats a big enough temptation, nice lets compare that life to your current rapping career, in this your going nowhere, your status will never get past volunteer, nice but if you chose the life of a full-time queer, you'd be amazing, you might even become a broken dick engineer ! lol ok, so lets get this shit into the open, so that it's clear, after i beat you, you fuk off, and become a gay peoples pioneer ! nice closer total: 60/100 okay this was close but i think Mc Rabbit got this with better flow and i liked the rhymes n punches hit harder in my opinion Sinner-yours was good but i dont understand some lines cause i dont think they rhyme nice battle but Mc R gots it Vote in return both of you in my sig with me VERSUS afro aiiight |
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Voted For: Sinner
Ok sinner.........your verse had very effective multies, solid punches that were kinda weak but still effective, structure was tight and flow was on point Mc rabbit...your flow was ok but your structure was bad and punches was weak, u gotta elevate dawg |
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