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headgames vs J_Trooper
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 35 minz 2 drop after check in Minimum posts to vote: 75 Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:57 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
J_Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 02:29 PM.
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headgames has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 02:30 PM.
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Aight i'll spit first in like hmmm.... fuck 35 how bout ten, n yo, good luck
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ayo, whas the rule say, 10 lines max, min or only ten lines?
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This battle goin be easy, is no biggie...
Like the mistake that made you, this on goin be a quickee... Thinks his lines are hot, callz me a shity azz noobe... Only time his rhymes are smooth, is if he aplies em wit lube... After readin my verse, he'll swallow his pride, only way out is suicide... You gonna have to slit your wrists, 911, J_Troop, you gonna wanna dial this... He thought he could handle me, must think hes some cool cat... J_Trooper, i'll ship you to Iraq, let's see how you handle that... His crews a bunch a bitches, i checked there profiles... Only reason you 15-1, is cuz you got mo dickriders then a pack a life stlyes. |
yeye, that shit was tight, good luck Troop, ayo, I wasnt sure if it was 10 lines min or max, or if it was just 10 lines, so wtv, i just whent wit 10, it woulda been better though if you said 10 kin and 20 max, anyways, good luck troop, holla
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Look this is 2 easy of a win for me 2 get Quick Verbally Severe your Adams and tell you 2 Spit Ive seen your Determenation~~~ and u and wins dont Mix Head's style is Like Notorius B.I.G in an Escort,it Doesnt Fit You dont have a Profound Image~~Thinkin Capacity of Kid's Its Impossible even with Christmas u still wouldnt carry a Gift This is Factual You dont have Mechanicals~Your not Ready u beatin me is like comparing~~ Beyonce and Lieza Menelly Headgames~ Jus Another Newb ill spit at you till you Turn Blue Im Takein Advantage of ya azz like girls gone wild im Exposein U |
lol ripped this kid
uppppppppppin |
lol, sick troop sick, this should be a close battle
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Voted For: J_Trooper
J-tooper gets this because of nice punches and great stucture mainly. a lot of the stuff that headgames said was basic, trooper came with some original stuff with better rhymes and set ups.. so you get my vote cuz.. keep it gangsta and return this wit a drop in mines cuz, thanx.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: headgames
oh damn that shit was hot. im sorry j trooper but ima have to vote for headgames. i wasnt feeling trooper's first 3 barz. he cam harder at the end but it wasnt all that good. i expected more from him. headgames came hard and finished hard. the only thing that wasnt too good for headgames was his strucutre but other than that he beat j trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ayyo, my first time on a rap battle site, so don't take of to many points cuz my structure is bad, ive never done this shit before
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lol ok this is a fuckin K.o
Uppin 4 votes people |
Voted For: J_Trooper
wack both of you but my vote goes to j troopa wack Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J_Trooper
troop came harder....had more flow...multies...word play...was jus overall better...headgames...u had some good lines...but it didnt all make sense...it was all about u really...eleveate more...vote trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin
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Voted For: J_Trooper
hot battle...troop got it from the begining to the end, his flow was all around better...i like his style and structure of the flow...altho some rhymes were on the verge of not making since, but u keep it hot, i like that...elevate more, this wasnt your best proformance headgames: u started off coo in the begining but drifted off your point nearr the end, and i think that hurted you...u gotta keep your flow and run wit it, but u got caught, and troop passed you up...big ups tho, i thought u were gun come weak, but u proved me wrong, i like that...elevate more to get on troops level. overall: headgames keep practicing, then challenge yourself...troop, get out of front lines, i think you good enough for elevated frontlines...your record aint that precious, keep on doing ya'll thang |
i'm still uppin four some votes, aight holla back
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Voted For: J_Trooper
I wish I knew who Lieza Menelly was.....you prob would of got even more props...nah mean. But overall you got him...ya flow as on point...punches hit, had a few multis, but the personals were ......well....not there. But his wack herb flow got merked...he sounded like Dr. suess gone bad..nah mean? Return the fav. |
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I hate it when peeps do that, my explaination was coo enough, but J-trooper, i'm about to explain better, just tell strobe that i gave another explanation and to recount my vote.. Headgames First Bar: Easy rhyme scheme and played punchline.. not inpressed 2nd: Again, punch was basic, dr. Suess rhymes.. Lube and Smooth.. easy to come up with 3rd.. whack.. no punch at all, whac wordplay.. 4th. whack, no punchlines.. you barley insulted him.. 5th.. the close was a mediocre punch, alright set up.. over all the verse gets 6/10.. you lacked in wordplay, punches and creativity.. Trooper: 1rst: Mediocre punch, nice flow and wording.. 2nd:first line, coo diss for a set up for a nice punch 3rd. nice punchline about gift, i get it too.. 4th: nice word play, good meta at the end.. 5th: nice set up diss, you mensioned his name atleast, than you KOed him weith a punch.. overall 7.5/10 Trooper you won this with better wordplay, nice stucture and better disses,, headgames lacked in every department and you honestly won, so tell Strobe to recount my vote.. Do me a favor and return favor with a drop in my thread cuz, thanx, one.. heres the link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
Ayo cuz, see if you can return the favor and drop in this one, coz peeps keep on complaining about hoe they can't vote or whatever. but check it out for me cuzo, thanx. heres the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
I'm still uppin for some votes, this shits gonna be up here for 2 weeks at the rate were goin
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upppin
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uppin 4 votes
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This was feedback posted for headgames
decent battle can't vote but you both did good...im in ya'll crew so thats why i can't vote
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Uppin
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Voted For: J_Trooper
Aight i think troop got this. Headgames = Your structure was pretty bad.. some pretty stretched lines.. you had alright flow though.. i wasnt feeling any of your punches tho not too good... Troop = you had better structure.. better punches.. flow was alright.. some of ur lines were dope while others seemed like filler.. but all in all they contributed to your verse Overall Vote Troop |
Voted For: J_Trooper
return da favor and hit dis up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356 J_Trooper took dis one He had some good punch lines and I liked his structure He had metas and over all hurt his feelins Headgames ur rhyme was ok Troopers was just better U barely had any punch line and ur rhymes were all over da place v/J_Trooper His vo |
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