Reloaded vs Bang
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 06:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 06:05 PM.

yo/this little white boy dont curse he uses slang/bitch ass motherfucker named Bang/his real name is probaly something like john or bart/this fag lost this battle before he had a chance to start/loves to wear spandex that are purple/only fucks the fags that hang out around Dupont Circle/dont even spit cuz no one gives a fuck what you got to say/do what you always do turn and run away/im going to end this shit by saying fuck you and better luck another day

BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 12:55 AM.

Yo fuck it, im bout to do some shit that goes against all the bull shit people be on . Imma just freestyle on this shit and say whateva aight.


fuck it man this nigga is a fuckin joke to me
This niggas crazy im suprised he wrote to me/
Im tellin you- man i treat like my lil homie
So disrespect from you is nothing- lil homie you dont know me/
Ill fold ya ass up quicker than a piece white of bread
Go at ya moms is easy- she's known for that nice head/
Dont complian " nigga whatyo my momma dead "
thats just askin for more family bloodshed
I gotta reload my thoughts switch the time and my flow
everybody know like the circus - lil homie you just a show/
You aint real so what you say nigga gets no love
so when push come to shove- my shove show love- see blood/

uppin for votes

Voted For: Reloaded

Very very gay battle. Reloaded had it for beein less gay. Wordplay sucked by both an structure goes to Bang. Reloaded gotta fuckin paragraph fix dat shit. BAng you came weak dis tim kid. Reloaded...funny on dem whit joke an da gay joke. Gay battle keep elevatin both. V/RELOADED> No hate

still uppin...

you cant be fuckin serious. uppin for some votes

Voted For: Reloaded

bang good flow and drop but no good punches or disses.re bad struture fix that you had ok disses and punches here but no flow and your vocab was ok but your punches even though weak were strong enough to pull you through

uppin....

This was feedback posted for BANG
 

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Voted For: BANG

had better structure
neither had real punches
or metasso i went wit da
betta flow
v/BANG
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This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

nICE BATTLE
sorry I cant vote yet but when I can Ill vote on urs

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137643
^ ^^ ^ ^ ^ ^

uppin for votes

This was feedback posted for BANG
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

uppin..............

Voted For: BANG

Ok, I say BANG took this one. Honestly, you both need a little work on your structure and punches, yet BANG had a better rhyme style and it just flowed better. No hate though, good battle you 2.

Return the favor y'all. Honest votes only.
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Voted For: BANG

yo dis goes to bang, i mean reloaded wat was da name thing bout bart n shit?, dat was whack, but otha then that it was alll good i guess, but i have to say Bang took it from vocab to wordplay, man evrythin went to bang,

v/bang

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uppin......

Uppin for votes aight lets get this done.

This cat must have the fuckin wackest verse on this site. Yall lets be serious.

This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

man, try and sort your structure out a bit, coz you made it hard to read like that. try an use better vocab as well. bang, vocab was really, really simple. up your vocab and elevate both of ya. no beef.

Voted For: BANG

Aight there were not Really very Meny Punches From Both of yah, But BAng Took the Punches categorie, Reloaded yo your Structure was wacked, whats with the PAragraph Shit, yah Flow was aight though.!!! But Overall My verse is handed out to BAng, Just Cause he Had a Little Bit Stronger Punches, and his Structure was betta!!! No Hate!!


Return The Fav on one of my battles, In my Sig.. !!!!!!!

Voted For: BANG

lol..bang killed u on dis one..basicly..plz have better structure... and don't stretch ur lines.. also work on ur punches..