Ill-Grammatix vs Ice Pick
 

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UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 08:40 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 08:40 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 08:42 PM.

i'll leave U "Draped"-in-Stitchez..my Glichez got Ill G Hatin-da-battle Trenchez
i'm Breakin-ya-"Wristez" off fa' Collateral..Rape-Gramatix-fa- Interest
"Taxed" his AZZ-setz.. "Loaned" U Hot Slugz..now "Pay"-da- Principal
U 3-2??..and "Move Constant"{ILL}??..but Ain't INVINCIBLE
U Gay-and-Whimsical..i "Spray" Lyricalz 'til ya' {body} Jerkz
"Take it Personal"??..TOUGHEN UP..cause da Truth Hurtz
i Bruise "Skirtz" camouflagin' "hard" PRICKZ..U wanna "Jerk Off"?
i'll "Bust ya Nut"{skull}..flashback to wAr(fare) scenez..U'll see ya' 3rd Loss
in da last battle..Remember Me??..I Sh!tted-on-U
doused U in gasoline..struck a match and Lit-it-on-U
i "Bidded"-on-U..had U shook in da 1st Round/
battled ICE again..CAREER RUINED!!..Ill G need a Nurse Now
i Curse Clownz wit "Verb'd Nounz".. "Subject" ya' flowz to Predicatez
ya' "soft" as NEWBORNZ wrapped in Charmin..(muscle)TISSUEZ-is-Delicate
Rip-U-ta-Sedimentz and fragmentz..ya' Maimed-in-Secondz
brought ya' CIRCUS ACT to RV and earned a shitty Record
Tossin' Saladz..Packin' Fudge..Actin' Thug..droppin' ya' Gay Rapz
i Spray Backz wit Laced Gatz dat "Pat" him down..so don't Say-Jack
wit "open armz"..i'm slappin' Gramatix wit OPEN PALMZ/
is 'dis soldier believing he a "Smokin" bOmb
as i Grope-ya-Form wit HOLLOW spitz 'til they Tickle-ya-Fancy
then Split-U-wit-Banjeez dat "cut" Wind..Rip-thru-ya- Man'z-Kneez
leave U en- Krypt-ed..NO Ballisticz can "Trace"-da- Ice pick
betta' bring ya' CopperTone{suntan oil} if U plannin' to Face-da-Sun prick
i'll "Suitcase" ya' LUNGZ and "pack up" ya BREATHING on Samson-Nitez
ya' BEST PUNCHEZ need Air Traffic Controllerz to "Land-em-Right"
ILL G gettin' Canned-on-Sight..and ya' Girl??..i'll Nuke-her-wit-Ease/
Gramatix known for GunTalk..he a soldier
my "Slug Lecturez" be "Shootin-da-BREEZE" and fuckin fold ya

I'd tell you to "Build Ya Skillz" but ya only a mental midget/
that's been on RV forever with wins in the single digits/
Stop fidgeting! Got this "FROG" nigga nervous and "RIBBITING"/
sitting waiting for you to "CROAK" from the lines I'm delivering/
You want it with D.I.G.z? I hope you running with kidz with "MAX"/
Cuz you "SHOOTING" off at the mouth and ya "MINIMAL" spits is wack!/
stick with the "FAX", you "CARBON COPY" "STYLES" when yo drop/
I'll rip ya shyt from "JAY" to "Z" and tie ya ass to a "ROC"/
put you on a yatch and drop you in the middle of the "OCEAN"/
after "BILLY" clubbing ya ass for all that garbage you be postin!/
I'll grab me a smoke and watch you gagging and choking/
Hoping ya body'll turn up floatin' disfigured and grossly swollen/
So don't ever come at me knowing those gurly punches you throwin'/
Are "WEAKER" than "7 DAYS"... Nigga, Ill-Grammatix has spoken!


Good Luck YO!!! R.E.B.E.L. C.A.M.P. in ya area!

Nice

You Didnt Drop A Verse Last Night

The Shit Was Fire And Ya Lucky You Aint Replied


You Would Have Been Scuured If You Could Have Read That Verse

lol... good drop yo... i was tired as shyt... fell asleep at the keys...lol...woke up and had like 2 minutes to post... can't type for shyt!!!

question: how'd you type all that shyt in 3 minutes?... if you good like that then it's all good... the verse what hot... but i'm smelling pre-writes or copy and paste action here... check the time ya joint was dropped against the time you accepted the battle... 3 minutes passed and you accepted and dropped that long ass verse?

No it was 13 minutes there cheif

check the time again

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 08:42 PM


Today, 08:55 PM thats the times i posted my verse


dont try and sway votes SHIT BAG, I TYPE FOR A LIVING, I WORK FOR A PHONE COMPANY PAL

33 words a minute is what my job requires there ILL GRAMATIX

just cause you cant type fast ,,,

This is like the 5th or 6th time sum chump has said that , after they read my HARDCORE shit

my bad homie... i thought i saw 45...again...just got off work...no hate... i usually drop harder but i saw some of ya other battles and that shyt was nothing like this drop. well, let the voting begin

and let's chill with all the shitbag talk... i just asked a question... you gave an explanation and that shoulda been the end of it... *damn*... everybody wanna be a tuffguy on-line!

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Voted For: Ice Pick

i was feeling this battle good vocab good lyrics good shit
so the break says
flow ice
voc ice
punch ice
metas ice
struc ill cause ice shit was kinda hard
but other tha n that ice got it. ill good shit no hate
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Voted For: Ice Pick

well this was a one sided battle ice took you in everything.....but keep working on it and you will get better......and also ice pick...Lyrical Virus....is looking for emcees like me and you....we already a dope crew......top crew....we need more....if you wannna holla you don't have to tryoutz just go check in at our sub forum and i will put ya on the roster....peace~1~

no doubt... his verse was fire... still uppin for votes...lol ( I write better than this... homie caught me waaaay off guard)...lol

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Good battle guys.
Ice: your verse wa iight you had some good punches and personals but its iight
Ill: ya yours was good too... but your punches were as great and so were your personals

Voted For: Ice Pick

Ill-Grammatix-yo verse was good...pretty good punches..and the structure was good wit the flow in there too...but u should've added more lines since this was a UNLIMITED LINE match...

Ice Pick-you had a nice verse...you kept hittin' Ill-Grammatix wit yo punches..the flow was good..structure was a little off but you still got this one since u had harder punches...

Vote= Ice Pick

no doubt... hey let's just end this and call it a day.... good shyt ice! i owe ya one...lol

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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

neither of ya'll threw and persnal punches but im givin this to, ill cuz he had more understandable wordplay and came pretty hot wit some punches......
I'd tell you to "Build Ya Skillz" but ya only a mental midget/
that's been on RV forever with wins in the single digits/
Stop fidgeting! Got this "FROG" nigga nervous and "RIBBITING"/
sitting waiting for you to "CROAK" from the lines I'm delivering

but dont finish ya battle the way u did there ill, end wit a hot punch, enless u know u killed the cat and jus wanna laugh at 'em.


ice......
i'll "Suitcase" ya' LUNGZ and "pack up" ya BREATHING on Samson-Nitez
ya' BEST PUNCHEZ need Air Traffic Controllerz to "Land-em-Right"
...... only bar i liked.... throw some personals, same wit the other cat..... u cant jus post up alot of random pre-writen shit. get 10 hot lines about the person, maybe throw in or at least link ya pre-writen stuff to the battle............
and 6 to "UNLIMITED LINES", is just a figure of speech, no one wants to read all that shit.

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Voted For: Ice Pick

ice damn sun that was hard as fuck good ass wordplay vocab and flow good structure and disses as well as personals also your best verse i ever read im impressed8/10
ill good disses as well and nice vocab and good personal o n the first bar nice verse but it just aint hit hard enough on ice6/10
this was a good ass battle but i say ice got it no hate return the honesty