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MetaPhysik 08-07-04 10:25 PM

MetaPhysik vs White Powder
 
Battle Rules:

4 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 10:25 PM

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System 08-07-04 11:43 PM

White Powder has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:43 PM.

System 08-07-04 11:44 PM

MetaPhysik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:44 PM.

MetaPhysik 08-07-04 11:44 PM

Checkin in.

C.March 08-07-04 11:45 PM

Good Luck Meta...This will be my last battle..

C.March 08-08-04 12:18 AM

Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”

^^ = Sig PASTOR TROY

AND WITH THAT IM R-E-T-I-R-E-D after this battle closes :-)

MetaPhysik 08-08-04 12:23 AM

Aight check it

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..




Dwight/White/Right.
I made a thread so everyone can get Phase One password and tryout.

Decree Wun 08-08-04 01:49 AM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

metaphysik:

good structure....sick flow.......your punches were hittin very hard..this was a decent verse ffrom you i was feelin this alot.......1st line....was alright pretty decent 7/10..second line...it was alright..good wordplay.. 8/10 ...3rd line.....lol jokes..this was a good line 8/10.. 4th line..lol good closer..n best line..haha cuz its tru.. nice 8.5/10

powder: your structure was bad...ur flow was bad....punches were ok..1st line was alright..nothing special 6/10 ....2nd line....it was aiight 7/10 ...3rd line is PLAYED..heard that way too many tiomes 4/10....4th line..it was alright nothing too good 7/10

overa;; meta gets my vote

*The~Star* 08-08-04 03:12 AM

Voted For: White Powder

White go this with harder punches.They were much harder than Meta.Nice wordplay.

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C.March 08-08-04 09:27 AM

Thanks to both of you for the imput n shyt.. hit me up wit links if u want me to vote... uppin

MetaPhysik 08-08-04 11:19 AM

Uppin.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 12:18 PM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

quite close.......

best bar
Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
^^this woz my fav.its personal,a nice punch,gud meta and wordplay.

worst bar
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
^^gud flow n wordplay.but toilet jokes and milk puns are hella played......

overall.

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..

overal my vote goes to meta.....i dnt thnk either bar was as hard as whites first,but both were beta than the played toilet line.
for this reason.i say meta jus edges this.

return an honest vote please!!!!

Ca'lam 08-08-04 12:30 PM

Voted For: White Powder

hmm...

white powder:
IP:


Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
^first line.. pretty good..second line, i think you flipped it well.. even tho that punch is a lil played..
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
^lol..... i liked that.. nice word play..

..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
^first line was a bad setup..second line was decent..
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..
^confusing.. respected then hes a no name imposter..i guess it was decent..

i gotta give it to powder for the wordplay.. mets id give urs a 7/10.. Powder is like a 7.4/10

SONIC 08-08-04 12:34 PM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

Metaphisik's lines hit a little.. his wordplay was also better and i especially liked the White Powder play off.. good job from both but i go with meta

can you return favor with a lok at my thread, thanx, one..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

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~Luciano~ 08-08-04 01:00 PM

Voted For: White Powder


Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
7/10

Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
6/10


..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
5/10
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..
7/10

real close battle but it came down 2 complexity and 2 who had the overall better punch.The punches were decent in this battle
but nuthin really to make me say "oooooo" so there fore this battle was decent

MetaPhysik 08-08-04 01:28 PM

Uppin.

[.:D:.] 08-08-04 02:00 PM

Voted For: White Powder

ima have to vote for white powder on this one........
His punches hit harder in this one......and the last bar was funny too......

Meta=yo shit was good too but it just didnt hit as hard as powders.....big up to both of yall though

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C.March 08-08-04 02:03 PM

Dope.... Uppin for votes here..

SPuL™ 08-08-04 02:13 PM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

yo, this was a tight battlew. You both wanted me to vote, so I'll vote honestly. I think MEta took this

WP< yo punch was good, but it wasn't all that hard hittin'. It had ok flow thougfh.

Meta, nice flow here. I also think yo punch hit a little harder and had better personal.

V/Meta

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Ca'lam 08-08-04 02:15 PM

ROFL.. this is close as shit -_-... lets goooooo last vote.. whos it gonne be.. place your bets lmao :)

~Lady Fiya~ 08-08-04 02:15 PM

Voted For: White Powder

^nice punches, using pastor troy as an extended metaphor.. priest, Pastor Troy, alter boy, ha ha nice usage.. also nice wordplay throughout the 2 bars.. but with the closer u happened to take it over..

Meta- i like the references to his other name but u didn't come hard enuff.. punches and wordplay was aight but White Powder took this easily..
~wun~

MetaPhysik 08-09-04 10:30 AM

Uppin.

...Voke... 08-09-04 11:06 AM

Voted For: White Powder

ha ha ha...damn both had me laughing....

metas was tight
and powders was tight

i got to go with enjoyment and say white

...Voke... 08-09-04 11:09 AM

my bad submitted that shit before i was done

Meta- hmm nice "verse" i really liked that beat off white powder line
that shit was funny the rest of it was nice too came pretty hard with it
flow was there metas nice shit

white- you had some funny shit too like that priest line...i has like ha ha
closer was nice the rest of it was too you came hard too both of yall
had tight drops i just got to go with which one i enjoyed more

L.E 08-09-04 11:12 AM

This was feedback posted for White Powder
 
A'ight...this was a close battle...but I gotta give it to WP...Meta came really hard too...both punches was ill, but WP had the edge. Toilet shit was nice from WP...Roster shit was nice from Meta. Close as fuck.

L.E 08-09-04 11:15 AM

Shit...I put feedback instead of vote.............my bad.

C.March 08-09-04 11:38 AM

Do not ad that last vote by Limited Edition.. it is unexplained and it would just be a waist of time.. Soo dont ad it.. ill take it as feedback..

Thanks

atti? 08-09-04 11:58 AM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

.Meta.
Bar 1:
..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White Powder..
Mmmmm, Its Was Decent...
I Woulda Liked It More If The Lines Flowed TOGETHER As A One Two Punch...
It Kinda Did, Not Really Though...
But It Was Still Decent, 8.6/10...


Bar 2:
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..
Ooooowned, That Was A Hard Hit Right There...
I Was Really Feeling That Personal, Nice Flow On It Aswell...
I'ma Say 9.4/10...

____________________________
.Powder.
Bar 1:

Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
Thought The First Line Was Alittle Weak But It Caugh Up Nice In The Second Line...
Nice Overall Punch, 9.0/10...


Bar 2:
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
First Line Was Weak, To Basic...
And The Second Line DID Have Wordplay But It Was To Basic...
Thats The Kind Of Wordplay You Use On Audio...
You Can Get More Technical When On Text...
I'll Give This Line A 8.6/10...[/b]
_____________________________
.Meta.
.Powder.
9.4
8.6
8.5
9.0
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17.9
17.6
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Meta Wins This By Three Points...
[b]Vote: Metaphysics

.One.

Hitta 08-09-04 12:22 PM

Voted For: MetaPhysik

Not a bad battle by anymeans... This was a really close battle... Im going to have to give this to MetaPhysik though... Iliked his punches alot more then white powders... Granted white powder you did have a personal with the link i just wasnt really feeling your shit that much... So my vote goes to metaphysik for better verse

Hitta 08-09-04 12:29 PM

Not a bad battle by anymeans... This was a really close battle... Im going to have to give this to MetaPhysik though... Iliked his punches alot more then white powders... Granted white powder you did have a personal with the link i just wasnt really feeling your shit that much...

WP- your verse was okay... wasnt really feelin the punch that much you had some wit to it but it wasnt really hittin competely hard and just wasnt witty enuf...your flow was okay along with your structure... But your personal wasnt really that good man... Keep tryin though

v/meta for more witty and harder verse

DON 08-09-04 12:39 PM

Voted For: White Powder

aight metaphysik verse had no personals sounded like prewrites which it prolly was so the punches sucked and werent fresh.your flow was better it was real good.but its text so again i cant tell.powder ur verse had both personals it was fresh and thats wat gets crowds going in a real battle if u stood up there and went wit some prewrites and had good flow theyd prolly boo you cause its real life.but powder very nice verse good flow went well hard punches

vote for powder cause of harder punches and all personals

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C.March 08-10-04 09:11 AM

uPPIN FOR ONE LAST VOTE..

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 08-10-04 09:38 AM

Voted For: White Powder

yeah yeah nice ass battle but u gotta respecet this vote
white powder had hard punches and personals structure the same i liked his flow to bettah wordplay

Metaphysik nice shit but i think u tryed to go easy to win but white gotta some nice shit


..Dwight here, when he spits, he makes bitches scream louder..
Fuck lotion, need none, all I need to beat off is White
Powder..
good 7/10!!
…..Respected, doubt not, C-Explicit is just a no name imposter..
Phase Ones password is public, reps the crew, but isnt on roster..
Nice 8/10

15/20

Check it.. the only way meta would win is if he started prayin with troy^^
Physik gets more dick-rides then a priest from his alter boy
Nice ass shit 8/10!!
Treat Meta like “milk” his plans on winnin the battle
imma “spoil it”
Cus Meta wouldnt be “jack shit” even if he “stole the toilet”
9/10!! Sikk

[B] Vote/White


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