RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Elevated Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=193)
-   -   MaNiPuLaTiOn vs [~*Lady Fiya*~] (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140599)

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 06:38 AM

MaNiPuLaTiOn vs [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
house rules

chks due 24hrs
drops 30 muns after chk

lets do this,and gud luk.........

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 08-09-04 at 06:38 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 06:40 AM

chk n drop wen u ready gurl.......
if u dnt like dis or sum shit pm me.
gud luk

System 08-08-04 11:43 AM

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:43 AM.

System 08-08-04 12:05 PM

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 12:05 PM.

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 12:06 PM

only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..lol
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...

lil explanation..........
bar1-wrk it out.
bar2-wrk it out
bar3-she wasnt wit a date in her prom pics.
bar4-im sayin if she was a queen shed b my mother...(n that cnt b coz i dnt take after her in skillz or looks..lol.
bar5-basically she wants ta look n rap like me!!

System 08-08-04 04:57 PM

[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 04:57 PM.

~Lady Fiya~ 08-08-04 05:02 PM

the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality... lol**
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!***
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!

*Manipulation: to control
**She left pSa dynasty to join the crew HWCS(peep her sig)
***Her title says RV’s princess.........
others, last line- sticker/ title/ riding (car and dickridin')/ expired

aight MaNiPuLaTiOn come again, lmfao.. u were just served.. ;)

Grimez City 08-08-04 05:15 PM

ok i can't vote but i'd vote lady fiya because
 
i mean manipulation was like j-hood talkin bout the same old shit
and manipulation prolly doesent even kno what lady fiya looks like and so that makes her shit false i hate false shit
lady fiya had stright punches and every thing dont get me wrong the first two lines manipulation had were funny as hell but my vote:lady fiya

SPuL™ 08-08-04 05:19 PM

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

ok this was a nice battle, but i think Lady Fiya took this one.

Manip, you had some nice lines. But yo first line you rhymed wit the same word which is a big no-no. Also, some of yo lines were pretty stretched. So that made the flow go off a little. but overall, you did an aiight job.

Fiya, you had a nice verse. You had a tight opener and the PSA line was nice too. Good job in the punches section. Yo flow was also very nice. It kept up good throughout the whole verse. Nice job overall on yo verse.

Vote/Fiya no hate. pc

[.:D:.] 08-08-04 05:27 PM

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lady= ya get my vote on dis one............ya punches were hittin harder then manipulations punches......you had some nice personals too.....good job

manipulation= ya personals were kinda repetitive........punches really wasnt hittin that hard to me....but it was an ok verse just not as good as fiyas

[.:D:.] 08-08-04 05:38 PM

Can yall retun the favor please

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 05:55 PM

upp.

i mean manipulation was like j-hood talkin bout the same old shit
and manipulation prolly doesent even kno what lady fiya looks like and so that makes her shit false i hate false shit
lady fiya had stright punches and every thing dont get me wrong the first two lines manipulation had were funny as hell but my vote:lady fiya
^u makin urself look a fool...try lookin at links.herb.........

~Lady Fiya~ 08-08-04 06:04 PM

^ugly, MaNiP.. okay, stay in mugshots with ya research it's cool though, street legend i'll hit up that battle man, ~wun~

KroNuz 08-08-04 06:38 PM

This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
 
damn... lmao at your first line... good battle.. i say equal in punches... but the man line was funny.... good battle tho :thumbup:

For$akeN 08-08-04 06:55 PM

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

MaNiPuLaTiOn Drop:

only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
ummm 1st line was nice but it went downhill
in the 2nd line I say your much better in topicals....6/10

high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
nice lines 7/10
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..
nice personal referring to her pics I believe 6.5/10
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
naw in the drop your mostly talking bout her looks 6/10
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...
nope weak closer to finish off with about a 5/10

OVERALL: 30.5/50 (61%)


[~*Lady Fiya*~] Drop:

the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
haha damn this lady's fiya!!! 8/10
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality... lol
nice play on her ex crew and nice punch 7/10
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
kinda went downhill on this punch but still straight 6/10
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
nice nice 7.5/10
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!
haha fiya like the colors i'm using:D 7/10

OVERALL: 35/50 (70%)

compare scores and you see [~*Lady Fiya*~] took it......


oh ya and could you go back to my battle with state and
explain you vote!!!! breakdown for both battlers plz:D
and manip you can't vote on it since our in HWCS....

MaNiPuLaTiOn 08-08-04 08:06 PM

fiya no offence......i dnt think ur ugly.....its jus a battle gurl.
peace.....

~Lady Fiya~ 08-08-04 08:09 PM

^it's cool, MaNiP. you did a nice drop ma...

uuuuuppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn'''

*The~Star* 08-09-04 01:16 AM

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 
Decent battle ladies

~Luciano~ 08-10-04 04:46 PM

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]


only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
5/10
high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
4/10
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..lol
4/10
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
4/10
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...
4/10
Overall 30/100


the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
6/10
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality
6/10... lol**
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
7/10
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
6/10
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!***
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!
7/10
Overall 60/100

Came down 2 harder punches and better vocab and wordplay
Nica battle tho lady's but Fiya came with better linez in this one
nice punches in every bar it seemed like in manipulations drop like she was jus usein fillers to go wit her punches

Triple_N 08-10-04 05:21 PM

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

the best effort she got-->put half her name in CAPS-LOCK!
best lines she dropped are put in forums for WRITER’S BLOCK!
Decent opener
please Save her ass: gave u the spot, can’t handle a dynasty?!
runnin’ to HWC,She need to control* her rhymes quality... lol**
good punch
betta lie->it isn’t ya rhymes sweet-heart it’s just a small phase..
wut a disgrace, ya place on rv is blockin’ punches w/ ya face!
lmao....good punch
she left her punches Elevatin’ in Front Lines where her taunt is!
a “game” u can’t win, only button u can press are to “save n quit”
decent
u princess? maybe 4 White Castle even there u can’t serve Fiya!!***
“sticker” 4 ya “title”, fell off when ur "riding" rhymes got “expired”!
Nice wordplay good closer
Give ya a 7/10



only time u elevatin is by changing ya name from miss to lady..
u aint hot,ur plain ugly.. ..u look like my high school dinner lady,
Eh coulda been worded better
high school graduate..battlin me id hve thought ud done tha math...
style so washed out..it wudnt improve if u did like u said n took a bath..
Decent personal
if looks woz skill ud have NO claim to be da hottest femcee on dis site...
shame u dnt look like u rap..or you might have got a DATE on ya prom nite..lol
Funny but not dat strong
problem is you cant be tha QUEEN..coz on rv here, im the princess...
i hvnt got your hairy chest..looks and rap skills u just arnt blessed..
Again coulda been worded betta
spit like u laced wit mace,i take dis win like u take razor to ya hairy face..
after dis battle, you be pm`in me..manip, i wish i was in your place!...
Aww!!!!!!! the setup was ill then u killed wit the punch
I give ya 6/10...a lot of your lines woulda been sick if worded differently

Vote: Fiya


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:55 PM.