I wanna battle
 

i'm new, and i wanna battle!!!! :shoot:

Aight set up the topic and rules

But voting is set up like this:

multies:
wordplay:
creativity:
overall illness:
multies:
wordplay:
creativity:
overall illness:

My Vote:

10-15 lines
nething goes

and u first

but u gotta post it up in the next hour :thefinger

Na u first cause u challenging..

listen up bitch
you rapped back and missed
got your ass kicked
got you dick cut off and sowed back on plastic
the name is patrick, u bout to get ur ass kicked
u fuckin faggot, maggot, i'm grabbin bats, and plastic bags
when you heard i wanted to battle
you became suicidal
because i died and i was your fuckin idol
now before you even think of rappin back
i hope you know you got bitch slapped
as soon as my hand and your face have contact
this is a rap battle
not some fuckin family recitle

Nigga make a topic and ill reply, you cant battle here.

u make a topic, i dont even kno wat that is .. lol :laugh:

Fuck this nigga you weak and urr done

u aint no gangsta, u a actor, u pose!! like ah poster!!//
u now in ma oven nigga, now im gon roast ya//
u invadin ma land, u on ma show//
so im gon host ya..'n' imma place u in da postion that ya needa go!//
in this game 'n' in tha streetz, i shyne, but i, aint po!//
this a mountin u aint toppin, so down tha hills u gon roll//
2 tha bottom u 'n' ya kru gon go, in this battle im gon murk, ya//
not hurt ya, i like slim, but cause hes white, u only like him cause ur white//
'n' ya might az well put down those jordanz, cause with them tredz//
u!, still cant take flight, laylow nigga cause ya armor aint shynin//
and ya aint no knight, get it thru stat dont give ah rars//
like ah dont give ah wot!in ma endz any nigga could get knocked//
see tha only thing i've shot, iz ah car, next time it might be sum legz//
and then tha third, might be sum headz, im up 'n' comin//
in this thugged..out life, i've seen!! death b4 life//
'n' life after death, 'n' shellz by the drainz, needles in tha grass//
blood in the street, and i've seen manz still play when they kno they beat//
cause sumtimes ya really loose when ya win 'n' other times ya win//
when ya loose, other times ya both loose other times!!..ya both win//
but its tha champs defeat'nt whos remembered by tha blow of tha wind//
nigga//

Ayo where did you run off 2, I need some one to make this shit official..

im lookin at myself on that poster/
caught your mom in the back yard/
eatin a fuckin hosta/
livin life high/
with you on my shoulda/
you were cold/
now you even colder/
crushed yo ass with a bolder/
left your ass in the past/
because here no one even got a chance to know ya/
my rhymes are on edge/
cut off/and beat you with your legs/
you got bernt/
like my devilled eggs/
no one can even match up to me/
because i got the skillz/
when you see me on your show/
you get the chillz/
my rap killz/
im on top of the hill/
i can go on forever/and never, lose a breath/
but now i have to give you a chance to come back/
and try and rap with the best/

Ayo you toast

Time i corrected this bitch!! "You~see" UD "U E"asy for Chaaz to humiliate!!
U 'D' serve 'gentle'-men, thats why you should remain a "gay-date.com" affiliate!!
There is no original comback to this - I've already cut short this vicious~cycle!!
Cause Eleven lines down your verse, you proved to everybody that you recycle!!
Ur 'deep~throat' missed the 'high~note' and u sink lower than your sister can~go!!
Your devotedly~bloated!! You said it yourself -your bitch mamma does 'limbo'!!
Victory's a 'soothing~illusion'.Ur 'obviously~delusioned' by that 'confusing~conclusion'!!
So you like exposing~'head'?? I stopped your flow like i was a 'coronary~occlusion'!! *

I AM Elite! 62 posts was when,(like a clumbsy osteopathist) i dropped~your~jaw!! **
Chaaz 'impossed' and "forced" you into defeat like i studied Newtons~second~law!! ***
Have u seen how my screen shows 'Death~Notes' like i was a sick "Grim"~in~Class'!!
UD only 'Wins~in~the~past'!Call me doctor, after this ima have your 'limbs~in~glass'!!
In this battle~ring this 'mens play~thing' bites more than an infant does its 'teething~ring'!!
VD was always a definition to "a disease on himself",now U can see him "menastrating"!! ****
You'll be desecrated when i remove you soul from 'parent-body' like 'emancipation'!!
Your verse? Did u 'post~it~all' or did you 'lose~your~balls' like 'surgical~castration'!!
Think twice!! I can sense this "man-bitch" got 'cold~feet' like his ankles were in ice!!
Just because you have both sex organs doesnt mean you can vote on battles twice!!
You engage~with~rage!Ur in your early stage of growth-like a recently fertilized egg!!
Silly fuck! The reason your condom is stretched is cos you tied it around your leg!!

So VD, next time you decide to "drop bombs" - make sure you 'Ignite~the~fuse'!!
Start to 'Recite~Your~Excuse' because 'tonights' 'Polite~News' is........'You~Lose'!!



* he was talking about giving vesectemes/coronary occlusion is a blood clot
** osteopathist = a therapist who examines the skeleton
*** Newtons second law = the rate of change of momentum is proportional to the imposed force
****"a disease on himself" = pussy disease (VD)

Ayo voting time

u win

you dumbass idiots... you cant battle here... you gotta post a new thread in front lines and put in who is supposed to battlin and shyt... if you wanted, you could post tha same verses there. you cant vote on your battles in this forum... fuckin Newbies

:wtf: you really wanna give up homeboi?
Cause you might have a chance..

like i said, you gotta battle on fronlines or this wont go on your record... if yall want me to, i can set it up for you

Ayo thanx, I didnt know but that nigga needs ta hurry up cause the topics up

[url]http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=1475839[/url]

ok if you want me to



givin up is last on my mind/
this is like whatit says in the bible, you gettin left behind/

you sayin all this gay crap/
boy your killin me with your gay rap/

i give you a face to face battle/
give dude,after this you'll be workin for me gettin me cattle/

im not that good of a rapper/
but aint got nothin on me because i can come back faster/

im high on vocabulary,because i havent cursed once/
you dnt know what to say,dude you just got bernt/

this is no movie,this is no game/
you lost this battle,losed without fame/

i can always come back/
with a rap/..but you cant do nothin becasue your @$$ is wack/

i cant give up now/
i dont even know how/

listenin to you conplain/because you can rap/
shut up dude becasue patty just rpped back/

sendin you back to the beginning is crazy/
because you shouldnt even have started you fuckin baby/

ill turn your life around/
pick you up when you fall down/

you might want to giv up to me dude/
because you dont know what the hell your about to get yoursef into/

im the perfect roll moddle/
fed you with your mommas baby bottle/

this is the end of your rage/
put you in my back yard in your sisters cage/

im done with this battle i lose/
i cant come and try and beat you/..im threw/

[SIZE=6]COT DAMNED POST THAT SHIT IN THE BATTLE TOPIC IDIOT!![/SIZE]
[url]http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140665[/url]

yo dude how do i putit in the topic?

forget it, ask an administrator to put this in a battle for you bcuz what you did was horribly wrong in that thread... you cant post a verse until you chek in... and nobody checked in. talk to an administrator

Ayo then you set it up cause I dont know what the fucks going on..

yo my bad dude this is the first time ive ever done this so im not to good at it i just started battlen last week...you should battle my friend fr3misoul...his name is logan hes the one who hooked me up with this...hes better then me ...i mean hes beat everyone hes ever battled so you should chek him out and if you got a crew you should get em hes tight...yea man and i didnt know how much crap i missspelled i was in a hurry i dad was here so i had to get it off...

Ayo im new 2, So I dont know how ta set up da topic with out all this rule shit, man I wanna do is battle but yeah bring ya freind here.

are you talkin to RobKilla? im finna join low ryders...i guess i could refer him to my cronies... fr3misoul ritE?

yea fr3misoul...hes good but you should check him out before you ge him because i dont know what he wants to do...but he said he wants to battle you now on my name he said his isnt workin so he says if you want he'll do some battles now with ya to show you what he can do...

i'm here, but my dude's got it all wrong, i dont battle very much at all, but i write alot, and i havent won every battle either .. lol ... he is stupid, and i dont kno how to check in this shit or topic rules or nething neither, but i got some posts if u wanna check out some of my quick verses