ChristsideSoulja vs Lyriclesolja
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
You spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 35

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 05:18 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 04:34 PM.

i'm checkin in, but i dont kno wat recyclin or bitin is, and u should go first.. lol

ChristsideSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 04:36 PM.

damn you are a newbie gettin ready to get smashed,
i knew i was goin to KO you even before we clashed,
should have thought about what you did you responded too fast,
homie dont even know what biting is,
only was he gonna win this battle is if is cut and paste's point and cliks and uses my shit,
cause im too dope to lose and my rhymes are too clean,
only way he gonna feel dope is if he touches my rhyme on the screen,
he claim he a soulja but he fake like saleen,
but he dont know im the real solja,
im to good to lose my name should have told ya,
with that christ you walk beside you still cant be a winner,
cause im that christ you cant beat me you tha sinner.

i dont wanna do it, but dont push me to pull it
and send this bullit, throught it
if u make me lose it, i'm gonna have to use this
steel, so many times u cant b healed
u'll b killed,next thing u kno, i'm kneeled
in cuffs, in front of the judge, cuz
i shot up this punk, was it worth it,ya it wuz worth it
i'm just that kind of person, i'm a serpant,
i'd do it again if i had the chance on purpose
i got u scared to breathe, scared to pee
so i wouldnt even dare to speak against me

i dont wanna do it, but dont push me to pull it
and send this bullit, throught it
if u make me lose it, i'm gonna have to use this
steel, so many times u cant b healed
u'll b killed,next thing u kno, i'm kneeled
in cuffs, in front of the judge, cuz
i shot up this punk, was it worth it,ya it wuz worth it
i'm just that kind of person, i'm a serpant,
i'd do it again if i had the chance on purpose
i got u scared to breathe, scared to pee
so i wouldnt even dare to speak against me

accidently posted it twice, i didnt even kno wat i wuz doin

time to forget//
that wack shit//

and even thinkin about comin back//
and rappin against patrick//

dont need your wack shit//
used it against someone and lost it//

so drop it//
put your ass in a moshpit/

and you'll lose what you have//
you abillity to rap//

your no t a mouce,but you got caught in my mouse trap//
left that,come on rap back,//

you dont want this so step back//
faggot ass,//

you dipshit/
lick dicks/

drink piss,and love it//
you'll dissapear like majic//

this is not a joke,no this is not a game//
put your ass in the genestbook of world records and you face in a frame//

for being the worsed rapper in the game//
listen to these rhymes there insain//

i know my words are hard to explain//
but let me tell you one thing//

dont ever take my name in vain//

lets go dude you comin back?????............................

Did i say 2 verses??? no i didnt....so its time for votes...Uppin

Uppin...

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Christside- Flow Was Ok, No Punches, Structure Was Ok

LyricleSolja- Flow Was Ok, Had Some Punces, Structure Was Ok, Metaphor Was Ok...

Punches- L- Soulja
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Metaphors- L- Soulja
Originality- Tie
Structure- Christside Soulja

Final Vote----Lyricle Soulja

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Opener:Lyriclesolja
Closer:Lyriclesolja
Structure: ChristsideSoulja
Flow: Lyriclesolja
Punches:Lyriclesolja
Orginality:Lyriclesolja


Aight Lyriclesolja had way better Punches, and better Flow, ChristsideSoulja you gotta work on making yah punches stronger...

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

both verse weren't dat good
need better punches n needs
metas but flow wise i give it
2 LYRICLESOLJA
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

both of you are wack
CSS: not feeling it alot have been played its basic you need elevating try harder
LS: your shit was not good too... you need elevating but yours isnt as wack

Uppin..

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

Lryiclesolja has my vote on this one. Christ, while you had some good rhyming that was consistent, this is a battle, and your drop didn't really seem directed at Lyricle too much, except for the fat you were talking about shooting him. You need to work on your punchlines, but no hate. Good battle between you 2, holla at me if y'all wanna battle sometime.
Vote - Lyriclesolja

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