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The One 08-08-04 11:43 PM

The One vs VALOR
 
Battle Rules:

7-10 BARS
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No BitinG
YOU FIRST

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-08-04 11:56 PM

The One has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:56 PM.

Valor 08-09-04 12:01 AM

checkin in............
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System 08-09-04 12:03 AM

VALOR has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:03 AM.

The One 08-09-04 12:31 AM

waiting for you to drop your verse man
not tyrinng torush you but i got to go soon

Valor 08-09-04 01:17 AM

says hes the one,but he really be suckin..
im leavin this herbs brain fry'ed like a volcanic eruption..
im straight workin this kid like that of a bus boy..
im merkin this kid like, rue paul does a fuck toy..
in this battle im surprised this bitch never ran..
i must throw punches and hit u like that of spider man..
u must be the stupidest kid on the who site rapverse..
ill destroy you like the texas chainsaw massacr'e..
after this battle im goin on a long fuckin vacation..
u should take one to,rofl.... in extreme elevation..
2-1 buddy,u can add me under ur lost collumn..
trust me kid choosing you opponent isn't ur only problem..
in the attle i owned you,so u can call me one of ur owners..
lol i destroyed you like barry bonds always hits homers..

The One 08-09-04 01:48 AM

im the nicest niggas alive ,the illest since birth
you could not have havay punches if fat jos sat on ya verse

i dick dime pieces you do wack biddies
niggas fiend 4 my rhymes like pookie in new jack city

by accepting this battle you dug ya on grave
now its for to get laid,,,,,,,,,,out
cuz im bout to take the aks out and leave ya fro looking like you just took ya braids out

who the hell gassing you up you dont spit no hard shit
i gould spit garbage and still get in ya gay ass like hard dick

yea my demo done all i need is promoters
and if you will this battle you paid off the voters

when it comes to rap battles im the best
if you balling y ya shoes say air without the check

he ait hard core he is precious like diamond
the winner
he dont wanna no like mario winans

HoPe 08-09-04 02:20 AM

Voted For: VALOR

iight..really..dis battle sucked like hell..damn i thought u two were better then dat???wth happend??but neways...

valor: ur shyt was weak..it had a little more punch then the ones..ur shty flowed alrite..but not as good as before..

The One: iight..ur shyt was pretty weak also... yo u shouldn't seperate ur lines like dat cuz its hard as fuck to read...ur 1st bar was iight..but dat was ur best one... so u should really elevate after wut i've seen

spit: valor
punch: vaor
flow: valor
multi: ?
vocab: valor

vote: valor

The One 08-09-04 02:29 AM

thanx for the honest vote
even though it want 4 me it all good though

afropimp 08-09-04 02:33 AM

Voted For: VALOR

one u had good structure a few punches that were good, nice rimes, no metas, no persanol. valor aiigth structure nice punches a few nice metas nice rimes a few persanols over all i got 2 give it to valor yall both pretty good tho no hate yall kan return tha favor honestly

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140587

Valor 08-09-04 03:59 AM

uppin number 1.....
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The One 08-09-04 04:08 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
inthis piece
lets get sumvotes
plz

The One 08-09-04 04:20 PM

c'mon upping plz vvvvvvoooooooooouuuuuuuuttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeesssss ssss

Valor 08-10-04 12:12 AM

Uppin Number 2
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Valor 08-11-04 01:37 AM

number 3............
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Triple_N 08-12-04 12:35 AM

Voted For: VALOR


Wow this is gonna go down as one fo rv's wackest battles of alltime

Valor....your verse was weak you had nothing, only line close to being good was the choosing ya oppenent line, everything else was trash, but your flow was tight, and structure good those were well executed and the only positives really of ya verse

The one....ok you got to prooofread your verses before you post them cuz your misspellings made your first 4 lines completely uncomprehendable, and your flow and strucure was off throughout.

Both dropped garbage in this but sadly I say valor took this with his flow and structure which should never win battles but what else could I go on?

Vote: Valor

Valor 08-12-04 12:41 AM

lol
i purposly spit wack cus he a noob
i find it kinda funny lol
uppin num 4

50Cal. 08-12-04 01:27 AM

Voted For: VALOR

the one you need to work on vocab and you had maddddd punches but they sint hiit hard at all they was expected and i liked your flow 5/10
valor good ass vocab but your flow was too streched still you hit with harder punches here and that pulled you through6/10

Valor 08-13-04 03:28 AM

uppin number 5 ............
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~Luciano~ 08-14-04 12:19 AM

Voted For: VALOR


im the nicest niggas alive ,the illest since birth
you could not have havay punches if fat jos sat on ya verse
7/10
i dick dime pieces you do wack biddies
niggas fiend 4 my rhymes like pookie in new jack city
6/10
by accepting this battle you dug ya on grave
now its for to get laid,,,,,,,,,,out
cuz im bout to take the aks out and leave ya fro looking like you just took ya braids out
6/10
who the hell gassing you up you dont spit no hard shit
i gould spit garbage and still get in ya gay ass like hard dick
5/10
yea my demo done all i need is promoters
and if you will this battle you paid off the voters
5/10
when it comes to rap battles im the best
if you balling y ya shoes say air without the check
5/10
he ait hard core he is precious like diamond
the winner
he dont wanna no like mario winans
5/10


says hes the one,but he really be suckin..
im leavin this herbs brain fry'ed like a volcanic eruption..
5/10
im straight workin this kid like that of a bus boy..
im merkin this kid like, rue paul does a fuck toy..
6/10
in this battle im surprised this bitch never ran..
i must throw punches and hit u like that of spider man..
6/10
u must be the stupidest kid on the who site rapverse..
ill destroy you like the texas chainsaw massacr'e..
6/10
after this battle im goin on a long fuckin vacation..
u should take one to,rofl.... in extreme elevation..
5/10
2-1 buddy,u can add me under ur lost collumn..
trust me kid choosing you opponent isn't ur only problem..
5/10
in the attle i owned you,so u can call me one of ur owners..
lol i destroyed you like barry bonds always hits homers..
6/10


This battle kinda sucked wasent much elevation and the punches were played and simple

Valor had the best structure and the overall better verse but ya punches were played and ya wordplay was simple

Elevate

Nuff Said


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