The One vs PayDay
 

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The One has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:58 PM.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:59 PM.

quick shit

if you think you can win you r in 4 rude awakening,cuz that shit dont add up like veretariens and bacon/b-1

you fucking with THE ONE i'll get to bashing in ya face
then ya moms mantle piece will have ya ashes in a vase/b-2

yall was waiting 4 a savior,well niggas im here
put a shot to ya dome and leave ya brains hangin out ya ear/b-3

you came all this far to not get in the gate
yall got me batling a candy bar who just got ate/b-4

ima stop right now cuz imma put you to ruin
man we cant blame him he got a fetish 4 losing/b-5

thats a wrap

Bloody mess on yo chest, shoulda took yo yea and kept stepping/
But since you didn't, 13 hollow point bitch was pumped in yo shit/

Now who got the flame, that comes a dime a dozen/
I cock this 44 back, blow out yo shit, couldn't catch yo cousin/

Ain't you so cute, standin in the presence and essence of killas/
A local bred tryin to fuck with thoroughbred niggas/

No disrespect, betta grab yo tech before you swing my way/
I put the comma in drama, pack heat like sunny days/

My finger's on the trigga, and that makes me fatal/
Paydays a pimp, get off my dick, bitch, I got the hand that rocks the cradle/

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uppin for votes....yall make sure yall explain ure shit...tell me wat i need to do to get better.....

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uppin for some votes...lets get mah ko in tha books....

Voted For: PayDay

Hey whatsup both of u have a good verse but payday just was better, he had a better struture and punches, the one had stretched lines which messed up the flow pay day has my vote

uppin for votes...lets get this closed...,,,......

Voted For: The One

One wins it with better punches. Pay: that shits played bout talkin on guns and shit like that. You gotta come with punches and have some wordplay and shit. Apparently u didnt have this at all. One wins this with harder punches and good metas.

Vote-One

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Voted For: The One

these was both hot battles...imma break it down cause it was neck n neck, and i dont kno wo to vote for

if you think you can win you r in 4 rude awakening,cuz that shit dont add up like veretariens and bacon(nice intro..nice wordplay)7
you fucking with THE ONE i'll get to bashing in ya face
then ya moms mantle piece will have ya ashes in a vase(jawdropper, i liked that)8
yall was waiting 4 a savior,well niggas im here
put a shot to ya dome and leave ya brains hangin out ya ear(nice wordplay on this one)8
you came all this far to not get in the gate
yall got me batling a candy bar who just got ate(it was choppy, but tight..payday is a candy bar...he just got ate...i like that)9
ima stop right now cuz imma put you to ruin
man we cant blame him he got a fetish 4 losing(choppy, but u made it work)7

payday:
loody mess on yo chest, shoulda took yo yea and kept stepping/
But since you didn't, 13 hollow point bitch was pumped in yo shit(wack intro, wack line)5
Now who got the flame, that comes a dime a dozen/
I cock this 44 back, blow out yo shit, couldn't catch yo cousin(choppy line, but u made it work)7
Ain't you so cute, standin in the presence and essence of killas/
A local bred tryin to fuck with thoroughbred niggas(that was nice...album lines...coo)9
No disrespect, betta grab yo tech before you swing my way/
I put the comma in drama, pack heat like sunny days(heard that alot, but u worded it perfect)9
My finger's on the trigga, and that makes me fatal/
Paydays a pimp, get off my dick, bitch, I got the hand that rocks the cradle(wack ending)4

because yo intro and endin was wack, you lost..but it was a nice flow...
good flow people

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Voted For: PayDay


if you think you can win you r in 4 rude awakening,cuz that shit dont add up like veretariens and bacon/b-1
6/10
you fucking with THE ONE i'll get to bashing in ya face
then ya moms mantle piece will have ya ashes in a vase/b-2
5/10
yall was waiting 4 a savior,well niggas im here
put a shot to ya dome and leave ya brains hangin out ya ear/b-3
5/10
you came all this far to not get in the gate
yall got me batling a candy bar who just got ate/b-4
4/10
ima stop right now cuz imma put you to ruin
man we cant blame him he got a fetish 4 losing/b-5
4/10


Bloody mess on yo chest, shoulda took yo yea and kept stepping/
But since you didn't, 13 hollow point bitch was pumped in yo shit/
5/.10
Now who got the flame, that comes a dime a dozen/
I cock this 44 back, blow out yo shit, couldn't catch yo cousin/
6/10
Ain't you so cute, standin in the presence and essence of killas/
A local bred tryin to fuck with thoroughbred niggas/
7/10
No disrespect, betta grab yo tech before you swing my way/
I put the comma in drama, pack heat like sunny days/
6/10
My finger's on the trigga, and that makes me fatal/
Paydays a pimp, get off my dick, bitch, I got the hand that rocks the cradle/
8/10

this came down 2 better punches and overall better wordplay

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lets colse this battle i wanna go to sleep plz

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uppin for votes...lets get this closed.............

Voted For: The One

Vote the one

GUNTALK IS OK IN BATTLES IF YOU ARE A REAL RAPPER,
payday you need to come up with better use of wordplay and vocab,

Vote the one

go hit up any of my battles

Voted For: The One

payday your flow was choppy your punches were hit and miss a lot of self glorifying there at the end i did like yah local bred line though....didn't come with any good personals ...

The one nice wordplay your candy bar line was probably played but i liked it all the same... your punches just came tah hit today nice flow clean structure aight verse

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one more vote lets get it

Voted For: The One

Yo i say tha onre had dis shit. Both was good dropz feelin both. The one jus came harda wit it. Feelin his lines more. Punches hit way harda. Opener was tight. Feelin tha vegetarioan line. Pay day nex time come harda. Structure an flow was equal. No hate . V/ the one
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