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MC Wrapper vs $LXDiesel
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting You go first!! Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 12:19 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
MC Wrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:19 AM.
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$LXDiesel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:23 AM.
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You go first ok?.....
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aight lets lock this bitch
MC Wrapper wheres dat from wrappin whoppers and burger king? None the less ill crump and throw u cuz you aint a thing I ma shyne right now, light this bitch on fire You aint gonn do nuttin u confused transvestite liar Wut ya gonna do are ya gonna wrap me up boy??? Before dat, mature up, throw away ur sex toy Ya playin in da majors aint no shit here I ma take a bite soon as i smell fear My verse goes for da back bone makin ya all cripple Saw ya in a movie once called dr. DO Little Aint nothing i aint seen livin here in cali We are hittin hard here harder then Somalia Ma lyrics are a 12 gage urs are broke ass switch blade This aint a challenge this is fuckin rhyme raid Thinkin ya gonna rise up, you aint first one homie Just step off, if u win, ill come back u dummie Aight dats dat |
Where you at? Flippin jobs, playin car notes?
While I’m swimmin’ in ya women like the breast stroke Right stroke, left stroke what’s the best stroke Death stroke tongue all down her throat Nuthin’ left to do but send her home to you I’m through can ya sing the song for me, boo? She’s sick of that song on how it’s so long Thought he worked his until I handled my biz There I is major pain like Damon Wayans Low down dirty even like his brother Keenan Schemin don’t bring your girl ‘round me True player for real, ask Puff Daddy |
aight lets lock this bitch
MC Wrapper wheres dat from wrappin whoppers and burger king? None the less ill crump and throw u cuz you aint a thing I ma shyne right now, light this bitch on fire You aint gonn do nuttin u confused transvestite liar Wut ya gonna do are ya gonna wrap me up boy??? Before dat, mature up, throw away ur sex toy Ya playin in da majors aint no shit here I ma take a bite soon as i smell fear My verse goes for da back bone makin ya all cripple Saw ya in a movie once called dr. DO Little Aint nothing i aint seen livin here in cali We are hittin hard here harder then Somalia Ma lyrics are a 12 gage urs are broke ass switch blade This aint a challenge this is fuckin rhyme raid Thinkin ya gonna rise up, you aint first one homie Just step off, if u win, ill come back u dummie Aight dats dat |
nice man, i just type ma bitch twice, sorry bout dat, ma pc is major fucked up so yeah. Well done, good luck homeboy, may tha best verse win, aight im out.
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Common ppl we need your votes, check it and rate it.
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Uppin' for votes!!!... Ay ya'll check it out and vote!!! :thumbup:
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
sorry im not even going to fucking give feedback........there was absolutly no competition |
Uppin for votes!!!
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
well... neither verse was really that hot, but no offense... Diesels 1st line was better than Wrapper's whole verse. Wrapper didnt really diss Diesel, he just talked about this imaginary girlfriend that he fucks... D's wordplay about wrapper and his "tranvestite liar" line won this one... both of yall need to do some elevatin... Return tha favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139502 me vs. mc xplicit http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139297 me vs. goats oh, damn, im returnin tha favor for Wrapper... well, Diesel, you could vote on one of these... |
hey, if you dont give feedback, your vote can be disqualified... so you mite wanna say somethin
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
Aight this was a pretty weak battle, but was tight for the Skill level you guys Brought, Diesel your Punches where Pretty weak, and Had no Punches, Structure was Good, But it was not that entertaining to Read, Wrapper, You Gotta come Stronger bro, wit yah Punches, It did not Seem like you Put to much effort into it, yah structure was aight, and yah Punches were at about the Same level as diesel, but he took this battle, for the Mier Fact he had more.... Good battle Guys Keep Elevating.. Return the Fav on one of mine No Hate Guys.. Peace |
Voted For: $LXDiesel
MC RAPPER Where you at? Flippin jobs, playin car notes? While I’m swimmin’ in ya women like the breast stroke BLAH.4/10 Right stroke, left stroke what’s the best stroke Death stroke tongue all down her throat HMMMM 3/10 Nuthin’ left to do but send her home to you I’m through can ya sing the song for me, boo? AGAIN..3/10 She’s sick of that song on how it’s so long Thought he worked his until I handled my biz 2/10....DNT RHYME There I is major pain like Damon Wayans Low down dirty even like his brother Keenan BLAH.....3/10 Schemin don’t bring your girl ‘round me True player for real, ask Puff Daddy 2/10 AWFULL OVERALL.17/60...(GENEROUSLY)...only thing woz ok woz flow/structure. no punches at all...no personals...didnt make sense. LXDIESEL MC Wrapper wheres dat from wrappin whoppers and burger king? None the less ill crump and throw u cuz you aint a thing 4/10..no I ma shyne right now, light this bitch on fire You aint gonn do nuttin u confused transvestite liar 3/10..weak Wut ya gonna do are ya gonna wrap me up boy??? Before dat, mature up, throw away ur sex toy 4/10...PLAYED Ya playin in da majors aint no shit here I ma take a bite soon as i smell fear 2/10....filler My verse goes for da back bone makin ya all cripple Saw ya in a movie once called dr. DO Little 5/10.AN ATTEMPTED PUNCH..cudve bin aiight wit beta set-up Aint nothing i aint seen livin here in cali We are hittin hard here harder then Somalia 2/10..back to filler Ma lyrics are a 12 gage urs are broke ass switch blade This aint a challenge this is fuckin rhyme raid 4/10..bit beta Thinkin ya gonna rise up, you aint first one homie Just step off, if u win, ill come back u dummie 3/10.no overall 27/80. verse a lil harder hittin than ur opponent(not by much).... wrk on structure,flow wasnt 2 bad...up ya metas wordplay... both yall elevate... no hate..return tha fav. vote-lxdiesel |
uppin for votes, tell us wut the fuck you think bout this battle
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uppin for some more votes, common people ill return a favor and give an honest vote on your battle
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This was feedback posted for $LXDiesel
Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet Ill be sure to vote on dis one |
uppin for some more votes ^^^^^ technically one more vote for me to merk him but ppl give an honest bote and ill return the favor
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uppin for some more votes ^^^^^ technically one more vote for me to merk him but ppl give an honest bote and ill return the favor
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Upin for votes
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
yo dis batle was close as fuck but i gota say that diesal took it but it was really fukin close, from his unches n wrodplay and he had mad vocab, so this goes to him, Mc cmon dawwwg u can do way beta den that, i seen it, iite 1 love v/Diesal, yall retrun da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142129, and the ones down there |
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