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MARVOLoUsJ1009 vs schema
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10 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 08-09-04 at 03:54 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 02:55 AM.
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 03:48 AM.
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okay....i said 8-12 lines
y da fukk is dis fag comin at jay dummy i'll embarrase ya...... know y? nigga all "raps week" like "mummy's on a calender".... im just tryin da kick knowledge da fam..... but i gota put da thing by his collar then blam!.... its sad u'll neva have a hit record gettin dollar's n fans... just know i will "aim" at u cuzz i got "zero toleranceman"....* u feather weight,get off da frontlines dunny go elevate.... sc N nyc u already know da betta state,dis fella's fake.... hate da burst ya bubble but schema u was neva great...... im da "nex" da "tel" u if u get a w its by luck dont "cell-abrate" *zerotolerance is aim screen... 10 lines...dunny... |
youre the wackest cat ive ever seen so iono what you think im scared of
im battlin lady marv-alade...somebody call christina aguilera... you aint bite violent j's name straight up cause you couldnt add a lisp so you switched it to some gay shit...hey boy-th it-th marvo-lith... your record aint that nice...you just pad that shit up with noobs so Ill bump your L's up to an even eighteen with K.O. number 2...* get off that tip like theres no way your skills can be fucked with all ya rhymes look the same but none good...like ugly quintuplets... get off that 'everybody hates me'...go get someone to give you a hug bitch ill bless you again when you get some skills and drop the wannabe thug shit *no-showed in the last one and i got the automatic k.o. |
Voted For: schema
aight this was a decent battle,but overall i think schema got this he had consistent punches n decent personals,..you both had some pretty good lines like marv's..closer..funny shit...but schema got ya with a couple qoutables like the lisp bar..lmao...marv your structure was'nt that great (2nd bar)i think that was more of a filler ....good battle..some funny shit... return the vote.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
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Voted For: schema
Nice.... Good Battle Though.... |
^- shit that was meant for feedback, ill post it.. sry guyz haha
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
took this hands down it was a one sided battle good verse from both but marvolous came harder in this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: schema
schema-you had some pretty-hard-punches there..the structure & the flow went wit it...practically all 2gether your verse was all good...had it in order..and u kept hittin' marvolousj1009 wit them punches... MARVOLoUsJ1009-your verse was ok..choppy structure...the flow was kinda good..almost went off-balanced..and yo punches-weren't-all-that...they weren't as hard as schema's.. Vote= schema |
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Voted For: schema
easy vote. schema had real good punches and personals while marvolous j just had ok ones. schema also took the flow and structure easily but j took the wordplay category. but battles are all bout dissin the other person which some people seem to forget nowadays and schema didnt forget cuz the WHOLE verse was disses while just MOST of j's was dissin. but j elevate on the punches a lil bit and u need to spell out your words better cuz its real hard to read. -1- |
Voted For: schema
hate da burst ya bubble but schema u was neva great...... im da "nex" da "tel" u if u get a w its by luck dont "cell-abrate ..... jus the fact ugot wordplay dont make it not a stupid punch. not sayin that it even is a punch though, i dont know what tellin sumone not to cellabrate exactly is. ________ scheme u had some decent personals but u get the battle because of...... all ya rhymes look the same but none good...like ugly quintuplets... ^^^funny creative punch so along wit ya personals and that line right there, u get my vote, and the fact marvolous's verse sucked and didn't have a punch and that that bitch is trash, not hate votin though. thats all honesty........ RETURN WIT A HONEST VOTE WIT ON ONE OF MY BATTLES IN MY SIG. |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
aight this was an ok battle but i wasnt feelin either one actually....i got lost on schemas verse...ii think it was line 4....he had sum decent punches and his stucture wuz ok overallid say7/10..... on the other hand u got marv he had better flow and it was easier to follow his punches were decent and his personals were decent i think marv edged him here anyways marvoues gets my honest vote......o...go check out this battle since i voted http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 |
thanks for all thoe votes...ill return some honest votes tommorrow ive just been busy...uppin for win
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can somebody end this please...^uppin^
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pretty please.........
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Voted For: schema
schema you had good punches as usual and nice and some personals you had nice structure and flow... Marv you had weak punches and i didnt see any good personals... |
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