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Ruffridah187 vs MarvolousJ1009
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding No D/R No Hate None Of That Bull Shit Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 03:09 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Ruffridah187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 03:10 AM.
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 03:40 AM.
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lmaoooo wait time da fukk out dogg whut da fukk did u do da verse is due on da 12th lmaoooo damm yo dis sh!t is gettin closed
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First off, you aint nothin 'Marvolous', My rhymes so heavy that you could never harness this
You kick, can't use your arms-and-shit...couldn't drug me even if you had a million pharmacists I could probably beat you even if i didn't spit my hardest shit, i could beat you with my weakest shit You couldn't 'see' me even if you played hide-and-seek with kids Your rhymes can't match mine, couldn't overpower me even if you was Shyne and i was 50 My shit grinds your rhymes plus my rhymes are just too damn nifty You can't lift me, you can't reach me or teach me shit, nothin is peachy, you got horrible rhymes I blew you away like you were wind chimes, you couldn't hit me hard even if your rhymes fired like nines Your rhymes wouldn't interest me even if they were sold at Best Buy, your rhymes aint hypnotic like mine My rhymes are exotic..my rhymes probably 'turn you on" like erotic gay guys |
just spit somethin man...then we can get some honest votes in this bitch
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and shit my shit is mad stretched....lol....i need ta fix up the structure a bit...lol
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just spit somthin??? lol nigga u spittin first or dis shit is gettin closed since u made da due time so fukkin long
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cant u da beat dis vet,struc. is nasty u even force da beat da stretch
put "rasheed wallace n 7days" 2gether u got 187 he's "week in techs" i dont think dis fukkin fag wanna war,cuzz i'll grab on da 4... he a "ruff ridah" his cd get's thrown down n "drag(ed)-on" da floor i dont rap 4 just chicks n sex,da get rid of ppl like u n get some checks no disrespect but dont ruff's records look like da system's guest... (look) dont make snatch up ya fam and have ya son & lady sweatin.. back of ya name say's it all ya record soon is gonna be "1" n "87" |
lol....damn.....didn't you read the thread....i already spit lol
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umm if u aint notice they dont show ya verse until da other person drops or declines da battle...uppin 4 votes tho
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Voted For: Ruffridah187
Ruff takes this because he was more consistent in his verse... He had nice punches in there and decent wordplay... Marv you started out nice, then ya last 4 lines were wack, which ultimately gave ruff my vote |
Voted For: Ruffridah187
yo dis battle was iite but i think ruff took dis but BARELY!! ruff u barely got this shit mn, Marv's verse was tite, the opnly reason da shit got god by ruff is da punches and worpdlay but wat u need is more personals and shit, um Marv yo verse was tite and u had dose goos lines but ur punches were a lil weak i have seen beta from u dawwg v/Ruff Rida NO HATE yo hit my battle up its on da bottom copy it n w.e or jus go to F/l iite thx 1 love |
0-2 ME Uppin
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damm i guess niggaz aint get nun of my shit its nothin tho ...............
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
This fuckin battle is wack you both suck. Marvolous doesn't make sense in the first 4 lines. But ruffridah yo shit is just stupid! half of it doesn't even belong with yo rhymes like: "I could probably beat you even if i didn't spit my hardest shit, i could beat you with my weakest shit" what you repeatin for? i'll kill you ruffridah and you ain't "187" shit. 187 is played out from the early 90's anyway. No Hate. |
how did the system guess get a text record of 0-1??? somebody battle it? lol
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Voted For: Ruffridah187
this was the best i seen you come...you flow was on point, ya structure was nice, and yo punches actually connected..keep this rr187...its deadly marv. nice flow too, but i think in some place yo flow was fallin down, but then u picked it up, but then it fell during the end, and you just couldnt pick it up...nice punches, and some good peronsals, i dont think you got this one tho...both of yall elevate tho..keep it gangsta... *elevate* drop votes on the below links...battles |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
ok... wasn't really feeling this battle until I saw this line: i dont rap 4 just chicks n sex,da get rid of ppl like u n get some checks no disrespect but dont ruff's records look like da system's guest... wow!... most powerful line in the whole battle and that alone was the deciding factor... both guys could use some elevation... more wordplay,metas,multi's,vocab,originality,creativit y... structure was ok for both.... marv... ya might wanna explain ya opener.... one |
OH YEAH MY OPENER ITS A DOUBLE PUNCH NAHMEAN......
7days=week n im sayin he's weak in rappin...n rasheed wallace got alot techs but im mean text if u aint dick head u'll get da line |
Voted For: Ruffridah187
I think ruffwon this one....... i think he had better word play and used more mettas, you didnt have that good of structure but its allgood! Marv... you werent bad but i think ruffs flow wasbetter than yours... PeAcE!! |
Voted For: Ruffridah187
I vote for ruff....i like his stylebetter.. i likedc his lyrics a lil better... marv.. you had good wordplay and good flow.. but i think ruff tok this.. |
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