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J DOT vs Ice Pick
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Crew Votes 85 post to vote my bad...had to do something...here it is tho Minimum posts to vote: 85 Check in by: 08-09-04 at 12:34 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:07 PM.
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Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:08 PM.
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You get set out too long ya boy Dot'll melt you like "ice"
Make yo life upset when i get into yo head like lice Cant "pick" da germs out, cant detect yo infection Dot'll help dawg, get inside you like a C-Section Im puttin yo rhymes to rest, like 'LUDA' 'go to sleep hoe' Put em in a jaw, then a coffin, then six feet below I'm the clean up man, when i merk cats with bare hands 24* year old 'angel', I'll rotten his evil plan Assasinate his dreams, call him Martin Luther King When it comes to plottin his downfall, J DOT's a fien If ya life just about weed and raps*, then I would say its worthless 10 min to flow, but you still got hit the worstest I think yo feelings hurt, you prolly nearing yo death But I'm done talking, you could have the last of my breathe *check his profile for information (we still cool PICK...its a battle, gotta go hard) |
LIL INTRO
i Rip-Kidz-wit-Bad-Scriptz reduce ya' verse to Remmantz-&-Partz 'dis dude flow " BITES' so much"..i guess i'm Swimmin-wit-Sharkz The real battle begins i'm Darin-U-to-Spit-Sh!t..niggaz best Learn-ta-Cope when i "Clap" ya "unprotected "ya Pen-is at RISK..i'm "Burnin" ya Quotez i aint Concerned-wit-VOTEZ..i "Check" Matez quickly..see how 'dis PAWN'z flopped "Beatin' ICE like "100ft Jumperz" nucka.. a Long Shot JDOT rymes All-FAKE??..ya' Flow'z GRASS Rootz??..i MOWED-da-Lawn somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued 9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League my Dukez 'R a Hazzard.. General Lee{generally} U find Knotz Landing leavin scars on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM......MuthafUUcka..whaaat!! |
i hope u gun flow...if u get dq'ed i still get the win right...i aint gun bitch to strobe like some people, but just spit
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nvm...there it is
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Nice shit DOT, YEAH WE STILL COOL
i think i went over a line or 2 UPPN FOR SOME VOTES YOU NOT MAD I DROPPED AN EXTRA LINE ARE YA IM TOO HIGH AND COUNTED WRONG |
hell yea im mad...imm let strobe kno that i won this, cause u dint follow rulez
naw...jp, its coo, nice flow...uppppn peoples...need votes |
ohh shit dude you had me goin
HJA HA HA HA that totaly fucked wit me head GOOD LOOKIN we should try and get a tag team battle goin sometime |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Wordplay - Ice Punches - Ice Personals - J-Dot Vocab - ? Structure - J-Dot Overall - Ice Ice Pick took this because I put more emphasis on Wordplay and Punches than Personals and Stucture.. It is more entertaining to read with good punches.. personals too, bit punches causes for more talent.. he came more creative on them to mt.. also ice pick, you fliw was seemed better because of the wordplay and a few multies.. yyour stucture could of been better, but it's all good.. you barley took this cuz.. no hate J-Dot, jus being real. yo, keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread will you? thanx.. heres the link.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133629 |
Voted For: Ice Pick
Aight, This was a tight battle, its about time iam seeing some battles in here that are actually tight, and not One-sided shit.. Anyway, Jdot you had some good concepts, Structure was good, and yah flow was tight, Yah Punches were not that hard, but were aight.. and i liked that personal yah Entered.. I rate yah Verse at: 6.5/10 Ice pick yah had some really good Wordplay and effective Punches, yah structure was kinda fucked, and Flow was not the best, But yah really out did him with Metaphores, and wordplay, and thats what really finished this battle Rated yah verse: 7/10 No hate Guys, Tight battle Return the Fav!!!!!!! |
up, up, and get some votes...we need some votes on this, c'mon people, too many battles gettin slept on
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Voted For: Ice Pick
NO CONTEST! ice pick kiled it.wit punches n flow. good try j dot. try to think about different shit n rhyming. ayo ice pick i vote honest al tha time errtime. |
uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
ice pick structure was nasty lol but aneway im callin both ya'll dudes out lets go
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This was feedback posted for J DOT
Damn i liked both ya verses
i gotta get off, but ill do a breakdown later so ill upp it for u at least |
uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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uppin...will return the favor....drop links.......
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Get This Closed
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uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Ice Pick you took this with complexity and multies...I didn't get everything like your wordplays but your punches definitely hit much harder than his. I liked these lines somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued 9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM...... You got the win because you were more complex, deeper meaning behind each bar, but you gotta work on the consistency in ur flow. pz |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
ok j dot ok punches but they came too weak you had a good flow and decent disses4/10 icepick good vocab and flow your struture needs work but you had some hard hitting bars here but your ending was weak still your punches win this for you they was strong as fuck |
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