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Drastic Outlaw vs Verbal Abuse
Battle Rules:
10 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Verses due twenty minutes after check in U knoe tha rules lets get it poppin Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-09-04 at 11:37 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:08 PM.
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chizeck
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Drastic Outlaw has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:11 PM.
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Hits Rooks n Herbs Through Loops n Curves, Ill Stay Standin It.
Well I Guess Ery Community Needs Its Waste Managment. His Sigs Got His Fam In It, Vets?...What Makes Him Think Hes Worthy? Ill Blow Your Text Away, By Fillen Lines With Links To Kirby. Your Sinkin Surely, You Just Wanted To Spit. Well Youve Been Caught In A Storm. Your Only Hot When Your Warm, Actin Zealous When Your Really Not So Reformed. Cant Add A Special Touch. Your Potions Erelavant. Motion Is Heaven Sent, When I Construct A Verse. I Oceans Eleven It. Just Wanted Solid Competition, And I Hurt Your Feelings. Worth A Million, Droppin Keys To The Floor n Burnt The Ceiling. Members Respect My Attendance, My Given Times Admired. Mute Me, Even My Signs On Fire. Your Lackin Heart n Your Rhymes Expired. [QOUTE=Verbal Abuse]Right here, i need to battle a Vet.[/QUOTE] Left You Baddered n Wet, My Boyish Obsessions Leave Me To Rattle Your Neck. Herbs Bye. |
Imma bout to verbally abuse you kid back down from this compitition//
Cause afta this face off bitch ya 9 losses is what youll be reminissin// Bound for repitition turnin ya L column to ten// I'm tha head of this "council" why let this murkin begin// Dis kids a bitch just wishin he had style like Drastic// Ya need practice for u step or get dropped in a casket// You should act like fifty did wit ja go grab a restrainin order// My lyrics hit like rocks dropped from tha empire state buildin straight aimin for disorder// Im striaght up kid my flows hot like a flamin sphinx// Just think honestly theres a reason nobody checks ya links// Ya whack as fuck takin credit for all deseased herbs// Ya fuckin vegetarian tha suckas youve beat are nothin but computer nerds// So now uve taken a step up battlein some one that actually credible// Too bad it aint gon work out cuz my floews are just non edible// So you cant eat me dawg so try taken anotha approach// Just got sonned by dis Outlaw abused and cut throat// good luck dawg |
nice drop dawg lets get some votes blah
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uppin this, need votes on this, cmon.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Verbal Abuse - Nice flow, with a solid structure...good punches and you had some solid multis in there man...good personals....the quote line was clever Drastic Outlaw - good drop as well, sometimes the flow was off, it had a somewhat solid structure...good punches in it though man, personals weren't bad..... i think that verbal abuse came stronger in this battle v/verbal abuse |
1-0 verbal uppin
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1-0 verbal uppin
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aight Uppin, 2-0 verbal.
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2-0 verbal uppin..........
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2-0 verbal uppin..........
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2-0 verbal uppin..........
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
didn't really like text cuz it was 2 small but liked da flow OUTLAW's was simple but ok no real hard hittin punches or metas so i went 4 better flow n wordplay v/VA vote on my battles DRAG~ON vs phatinum http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867 DON http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 r.i.p http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141250 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 1 |
3-0 verbal uppin this shit..............................
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3-0 verbal uppin this shit.............
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
hahaha...verbal, you always give a good battle...yo shit is fun to read, and funny as hell, all them links...*good shit*...you had better punches, came out hard from start to finish and never fell off, it was like you was just lettn him know his place*dont battle vets no more*...haha verbal: yo structure was a lil on the edge there, you tried to add more to lines than needed, but, you had nice mutis and punches, nice rhyming, unpredictable, good shit D.O.: yo flow was nice, but you had wack structure also, yo rhyming was coo, and yo punches was nice, but the reason why u didnt win cause you had a see-saw rap, it went up and down, and thats not handlin..soo, with that said oh yea: overall-*elevate* on your structure and and rhyming, and ya'll would be fierce competitiors...*good shit* |
4-0 verbal abuse uppin
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Uppin Uppin Uppin Close Close Close!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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up up and away.........................................
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
both had good vocab and flows but thats were it seperated while drastic had wek punches and disses that aint connect verbal had tyson swings like the second line thats a slick way to call a nigga garbage good wordplay and punches won it for him on this vote verbal abuse |
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