MC_SYX vs afropimp
 

Battle Rules:

6-11 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hates


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 12:58 AM

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afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:29 AM.

MC_SYX has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:32 AM.

just cuz im da coldest dont me u should fear dis
even tho this is text yo hole fam goin hear it
now where is// all da muffuckin competition
i might as well go battle at tha rap olympix
got me battlin un MC_syx
u couldnt win if they voted before i dropped
shootin red octagons out of my glock(stop signs)
that made ur hart go stop// yo whole crew sed syx u got got
ur records 1-1 its gonna be 1-2 like its countin
u winnin is like cristopher reeves climbin a mountain

Alright let me set this bitch off, in about two seconds have you outlined in chalk,
Thinkin he's hard but you know that ain't the truth, says he's a pimp when he's the fuckin protistute,
I'll have you down n' out gaspin for your own breath, make you scream n' shout while graspin on my homie death,
now you lookin for a remedy tryin to pick up the pieces, while i give you mentally sexually transmitted diseases,
Fuckin you telekinetically, genetically i'm still makin you feel unsettling,
Oh yeah keep thinkin your hard leave you with intelectual and lyrical scars,

uppin for honest non hate votes uppin 4 votes

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upin for honest non hate votes come on noww peeple

Voted For: MC_SYX

mc good wordplay and vocab on the end there but your verse atrted out mad whacked if you had the end bars or shit like them throughout you wouldve won this by a long shot. your flow was good.afro good flow i like the voted diss aand your ending was good but you was worse then mc on this and he had better punches then you he gets the vote.

Voted For: afropimp

good shit afro merk this mufucka like he stole somethin
capitol punishment in dis bitch MC_syx killa

dont count that vote i meant to click on feedback
my bad

uppin for votes uppin for votes vote honestly

This was feedback posted for afropimp
 

I felt like both of these verses were really weak but heres my hounest opinions/vote...

MC SYX: Sketchy structure, good vocab near the end (although it started to not make sense), and some words did not rhyme. I just wasnt feelin ya flow man, some ok punches in there i suppose...3/10

Afropimp: haha, good closer, i dug it. alright vocab...needs to be elevated a bit, also had a sketchy structure (hard to see what words ya rhyming), good punches, alright flow...5/10

My vote goes to Afropimp in my hounest opinion because his verse flowed a lot better and actually had decent punches...

Voted For: afropimp

metas-afro
punches-afro
flow-afro
opener-afro
closer-afro


afro took this 4 sho one side no hat tho MC u had no rimes or flow or punchs worhty no personal rilly on either side no hate return tha favor afropimp gets my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141136

Voted For: MC_SYX

aight, first off, afro pimp...how you got five wins...i don't know...cuz you suck...ur structure sucked and ur punches were way off...so...after readin mc syx verse, who wasn't much better, but was by far better than yours...his punches hit harder too...so my vote..mc syx

uppin for votes vote honestly no haters ^^^ pleaze

that was an honest vote you cockbag...............

Voted For: afropimp

Ima give this battle to afro pimp, he had the structure and the flow, and he got the ending, he also had the personels and wordplay, Mc6 you had the opener and punches, and a better rhyme sceme, but all in all, afropimp got mo factors then you did, you didnt contribute, you both need to elevate, but ima go wit the fro

Voted For: MC_SYX

just cuz im da coldest dont me u should fear dis
even tho this is text yo hole fam goin hear it
now where is// all da muffuckin competition

weak.. no punch.. self-glory... focus on battle

i might as well go battle at tha rap olympix
got me battlin un MC_syx

structural flaws... garbage line

u couldnt win if they voted before i dropped
shootin red octagons out of my glock(stop signs)
that made ur hart go stop// yo whole crew sed syx u got got

stretched all to hell... ok punch, i guess... still kinda weak

ur records 1-1 its gonna be 1-2 like its countin
u winnin is like cristopher reeves climbin a mountain

christopher reeves lines are played... been seeing them the last two weeks.. weak closer

mc syx:
Alright let me set this bitch off, in about two seconds have you outlined in chalk,

opener played and weak... work on flow

Thinkin he's hard but you know that ain't the truth, says he's a pimp when he's the fuckin protistute,

good punch... best line of the battle so far


I'll have you down n' out gaspin for your own breath, make you scream n' shout while graspin on my homie death,

ehhh... ok i guess... needs rewording to be effective

now you lookin for a remedy tryin to pick up the pieces, while i give you mentally sexually transmitted diseases,

nice... second best line of the battle

Fuckin you telekinetically, genetically i'm still makin you feel unsettling,

didn't rhyme... blah

Oh yeah keep thinkin your hard leave you with intelectual and lyrical scars

weak closer...

mc had better vocab and the breakdown speaks for itself

uppin for honest otes non hate votes come on now vote

Voted For: afropimp

afro won diz he had betta punchez den da otha dood he wuz lackin personals n structute das y i agve da battle 2 afro

uppin for votes all honest no hate i need to close sum of thes battles so vote

Voted For: afropimp

Yo dis one goez to afro pimp. I was jus feelin his worplay more. Syx your shit was a lil basic and your structure was worse. SOme shit was good but it coulda been worded better. Personalz...i guess goes to syx but over all Afropimp had dis join. Ok battle...keep elevatin.