Jacko vs Sinner
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Jacko has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 09:04 AM.

Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 09:06 AM.

yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp

he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift

you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking

you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy

hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas

Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike

dun 8 lines...merked..next

word up...vote

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This was feedback posted for Jacko
 

Yo this guy won this because Sinner's line were wack AS FUCK. sorry but i thought your lines were wack episcallythe break fest ines but you made more sense LOL and sinner Jay-Z line shiiit nucca you cannot battle AND NEVER EVER talk about mama in a battle its WEEAK..! you dint even use multis' neither of you did... i think this was a weak battle but Jack auctually had punches while siller had stupid fillers

Voted For: Jacko

SINNER
yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp
^^^..NO...5/10
he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift
^^1ST LINE LOOKED GUD..IT FELL OFF..5/10
you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking
BLAH.WEAK...3/10
you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy
WTF?..THAT NOT GUD 3/10
hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas
^^LMFAO...FUNNY BUT WACK...4/10
20/50

JACKO
Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
hmm...ok 5/10
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
^^decent meta..no punch.dnt rhyme..5/10
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
^^started gud...fell off...4/10
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike
^^dont make sense really..weak..4/10
overall.18/40

overall jacko jus takes it...a few harder punches,u both came kinda weak though
vote-jacko

his shit didn't even rhyme lol?...................

Voted For: Sinner

Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
5/10
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
4/10
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
5/10
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike
5/10

yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp
6/10
he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift
6/10
you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking
6/10
you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy
6/10
hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas
6/10

came down 2 better punches and better wordplay and an overall better structure which went 2 sinner~wasent the best drop from both of u but overall it was alright

Jacko overall=50/100

Sinner overall=60/100

Voted For: Sinner

Sinner.......structure was good.....flow was there.......multies were good.....decent punches......personals o.k

Jacko.......structure wasn't there......flow trailed off a bit....no multies.......didn't come hard enough wit tha punches...no real personals..

Vote: Sinner

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This was feedback posted for Sinner
 

your not that good in rappin so quit the mic just sayin 1

Voted For: Sinner

sinner took dis battle he had better punches n personals n structure hiz rap flowed....jackos wuz iight but he didnt rhyme n make sense as much no hat dawg

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