OGfromPawtucket vs MARVOLoUsJ1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines go ova and u lose
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no feedin

check in dunny lets go

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 12:38 PM

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OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:13 PM.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:16 PM.

Your spittin second cuz i told you what to do
i'm in total control of yo mind, body and how you eat yo food
Ima noob i ain't ashamed to say it
my shitz hardcore if yours is too don't be afraid to lay it
but if you comin up soft like i think you will
dont even post cuz i already took your place on the bill
for real you don't even understand my shit
but other people hear it and they have a fit
I can't believe you try and battle me
The key to you gettin better is listen to me

u dont know my whole-fam-real,ya moms i could make da hoe-stand-still // "security system"? nah but i'll pull my gun "fast" n make dis "slow-man-shield".....*1 bar*

dis fagget calls his self a og but is dis kidd a crook? naw...
they all "candy" so dont get madd when ppl "miss da good bar"
(mr.good bar)

i dont think ya rappin is hott,b f rap when im grabbin da glock // & just happen da pop,i'll take da suit u buried in i dont "toy" around u can get "jacked in a box"...

my squad is trife,they use da sharpest knife or spark ya life...
should make ya s/n "wisdom-tooth" u think its "smart da bite"

8 lines fukk it

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

OGfromPawtucket - u got murked (not to be mean)...u admitted to being a newb.....ur flow wasn't as good....not multiz.....hardly n e punches (and they were weak)....uhhh not a good spit...u cant talk about how he eats his food...thaz irrelevant....ur spit consited of a bunch of set-up lines

MARVOLoUsJ1009 - nice spit....u had him tha whole tyme....after tha first line i was thinkin "okay this is over"....nice multiz....although in tha first bar u were a lil off wit tha sec. system/shield line....that was kinda wack....btu overall u took it...keep spittin and getting better....and that closer was pretty good but try not to talk about guns n shyt so much

v/ MARVOLoUsJ1009

by tha way yall should vote on my battle which tha link can be found in my sig

thanx and good luck to bof of ya

This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
 

nigga u chat shit u make no sense son u as wack as e looch... Damn NUCCA Ur wack ass lines gt me burried on the floor u have to do " " t show your punches nucca quit rap now

BUT OOOH SHIT OG U AS WACK AS FUCK I CANT STAND IT U BOTH WACK BUT MARV IS LESS WACK COS HE HAD PUNCHES WITH SHIIT FLOW AND NO MULTI s

^^^^?????? wow i feel da hate u fukkin dickhead y u on looch meat nigga...he merked u and u change ya name lmaooo

nucca shut the fuck up NUCCA u as wack fuck... LOOK aT YOUR CRAP lines looooool i merk you blind folded now shu it
i dont think ya rappin is hott,b f rap when im grabbin da glock // & just happen da pop,i'll take da suit u buried in i dont "toy" around u can get "jacked in a box"...

LOOOOOOOOOOl

look at this nucca lines liek he talking not flowing "JACKED IN A BOX" WACK!

dogg who r u ??? lmaoooo whut u freepostin so u can get ya post count up so u could vote on a battle dat whole shit flowed dunny

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

Yo this was a One-Sided battle, Holy fuck, a newb battling a Vet.. This place never changes, oh well, anyway, need i even explain why Marv Took it,

Peace

okay uppin 4more votes i just voted on madd shit so i expect niggaz 2 return da fukkin favor's

Voted For: OGfromPawtucket

og had a better flow and some wordplay i was feelin both but ima have to say og

???? dogg how da fukk ya vote got like 60 letter's all u gota do is explain it...and u must dont nkow whut wordplay is aneway im up 2-0 only explained fukin votes

stop bein a little bitch dammit, he beat u i fuckin hate losers like u

bump 4 votaz

Voted For: OGfromPawtucket

Yo close battle but og had it. It might be jus me but I didnt get Marv's 1st 2 bars. To me dat brought u down u could worded it better. No really good punches. OG had it for structure. Wordplay goes to Marv. Og do some personal nex time dog. Put more pain in yo shit but over all nice rhymes. He also had tha btte flow.Keep elevatin V/OgfromPawtucket

vote on dis

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Yo when I voted on this Battle, I clearly saw who the Winner was, I dont Know why People come in here, with no wins, and nothing and start voting.. Like come on OG.. you Know he killed you and if you Dont then your Fucken Dumb, No hate or anything, But when yah Break the shit Down He clearly Takes it in every Categorie.. !!

Just Felt Like dropping 2 cents.. Peace...

shut the fuck up look how i did as a noob against a vet? wtf don't hate! he can't take a loss i mean wtf? i can't help if i'm nasty.

Stop the hate. Holla

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

marv good verse but the ender sucked good flow and vocab and your punches hit aight as well as your personals.paw you need vocab help and work on your punches they were weak and thats why you lost here

Voted For: OGfromPawtucket

Aight dis was a close battle
Pawtucket had some great punchlinez
and a good flow to go along wit it
Marvolousgood personals and ur flavor was hot
U had a flow goin too
Da only thing is dat ur structure was messed up
Every thing else was good
v/Pawtucket

A could u return da favor I post a link in my next post
thanx

Oh what are you gonna say now? was Empire's vote fair? he came in w/ 0-0 and started votin. wtf. stupid bitch i'll take you if i ever battled you.

A Og could u return da favor and hit dis up for me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356

bumpin this real quick

bump this shit

Voted For: OGfromPawtucket

yo this shit is hot, i hate this bitch but i must admit.....this shit is hot

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

ya lines were stretched but ya disses were better not really impressed with this battle... the other dude was just weak...sounded like an 80's rapper... a hibbit to da hibbity-hop and ya don't stop!...blah...he dissed himself, for crying out loud.marv had multi's... don't understand the first line's intent but the multi's bailed him out...structure flaws in both... better wordplay by marv...lop-sided win for marv... he had no comp

wow at jack's vote lmaooo but uppin 4 more votes ppl..................

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

this was a close ass battle that was real close and dead even except for the fact that OG fell off at the end while marv was sick the whole time. im dead serious this was close as a bitch till the end. fav lines from both:
og-Your spittin second cuz i told you what to do
i'm in total control of yo mind, body and how you eat yo food
marv:my squad is trife,they use da sharpest knife or spark ya life...
should make ya s/n "wisdom-tooth" u think its "smart da bite"
iight no hate on this close ass battle. hit up the links in the sig and return the favor. one.